2014年7月学习小组"雅思写作互改小组"

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作业题目和分组信息（分组顺序都是A→B→C......N→A   即A改B，B改C, N改A)想加入小组的同学，直接在本帖回帖上缴作业即可。作业文件名需要包括自己的名字和日期。

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请各位同学到8月份的雅思作文互改小组帖子继续练习

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30th-31th

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karen小心（167）-ninicn（168）-wddbest（171-）小菜2015（173）
Films and video games that contain violence are popular with young people today. Some people think that these films and video games should be banned, while others believe that they are harmless entertainment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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28th-29th

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小菜2015（157楼）-> wddbest（158楼）->  princess谜（161楼）->  枣子_ （162楼）-> karen小心（163楼）->小菜2015（157楼）
Some people think that we live in a consumer society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others, however, believe that consumer culture plays an important role in improving our lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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26th-27th

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wddbest（144楼）-princess谜(148楼）-小菜2015（150楼）
Nowadays the news media have greater influence on people’s ideas and opinions than in the past. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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23th-25th

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karen小心（136楼）- wddbest（137楼）-princess谜(138楼）-小菜2015（140楼）
task 1:Map

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20th-22th

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karen小心（113楼）- ninicn（115楼）- wddbest（116楼）
Schools should only provide subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as art and sports, are not important. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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17th-19th

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karen小心（99楼）->酷酷的雷(106楼）-> 小菜2015(107楼）->princess谜（108楼）
Some people think that parents should spend time reading or telling stories to their children, while others think that children should read by themselves from other sources, such as books, magazines and the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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15th-16th

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karen小心(81L)-> princess谜(82L)->小菜2015(85L)->冬菇猫(87L)->fighter519(90L)
In many countries, the proportion of elderly people in the population is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.

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13th-14th

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karen小心->(68L)wddbest(70L)->小菜2015（75L)
task 1:

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11th-12th

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wddbest(46楼) ->karen小心（47楼）->princess谜(50楼）-> 冬菇猫（54楼） -> fighter519 （56楼）
Good health is a basic human need. Some people think that healthcare services should be provided by the government rather than by private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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9th-10th

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wddbest(31楼) ->princess谜(42楼）->fighter519（44楼）->karen小心（45楼）
International sports events can help to reduce the tension and prejudice between countries. Do you agree or disagree?

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7th-8th

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karen小心（28楼）->冬菇猫(30楼)
Some people believe that governments should give financial support to artists such as painters, sculptors and musicians. Others, however, argue that artists should be funded by other sources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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5th-6th

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冬菇猫(19楼) ->fighter519(18楼）->karen小心(17楼) -> 冬菇猫(19楼)
More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.

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3rd-4th

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wddbest (11楼) - karen小心 (地板)
Task2: Today, many news reports show images of violence or disasters. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and society as a whole?

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本楼放本月TASK 2 题目

1 Young offenders should be made to do community service rather than be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

2 More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.

3 Some people believe that governments should give financial support to artists such as painters, sculptors and musicians. Others, however, argue that artists should be funded by other sources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

4 International sports events can help to reduce the tension and prejudice between countries. Do you agree or disagree?

5 Good health is a basic human need. Some people think that healthcare services should be provided by the government rather than by private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

6 In many countries, the proportion of elderly people in the population is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.

7 Some people think that parents should spend time reading or telling stories to their children, while others think that children should read by themselves from other sources, such as books, magazines and the Internet. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

8 Schools should only provide subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as art and sports, are not important. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

9 Distance education delivered over the Internet or television has more advantages than classroom-based education. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

10 Nowadays the news media have greater influence on people’s ideas and opinions than in the past. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

11  Films and video games that contain violence are popular with young people today. Some people think that these films and video games should be banned, while others believe that they are harmless entertainment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

12 Some people think that employers should be required to employ equal numbers of men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

13 Some people think that we live in a consumer society where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others, however, believe that consumer culture plays an important role in improving our lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

14 Nowadays people often buy food transported from other countries. Do you think the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

15 Cheap air travel is increasingly popular in the world today. To what extent do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

16 Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

17 Public museums and art galleries are not necessary because people can see the historical objects and works of art in those places on the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

18 Governments should spend money on the repairs and maintenance of old buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

19 The time and money spent on the protection of wild animals should be spent on improving human lives instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

20 Individuals cannot do anything to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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坚持，坚持:lol

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7-3占座！news

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a13254 发表于 2014-7-3 15:54
本楼放本月TASK 2 题目

1 Today, many news reports show images of violence or disasters. What are t ...

版主！慎小嶷7月的写作预测出来了~建议用这个好不好？！6月的我都差不多写过了~

链接：http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_4cad3f320102uwih.html

冬菇猫UID: 3133804

想知道现在还可以加入吗~~~加入的话要在哪个帖子里报名？？谢谢！

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冬菇猫 发表于 2014-7-4 23:14
想知道现在还可以加入吗~~~加入的话要在哪个帖子里报名？？谢谢！

直接回帖交作业就可以了~作文的文件名字要按 作业时间-用户名-题目 修改好！

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fighter519 发表于 2014-7-3 19:09
坚持，坚持

改完请查收

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karen小心 发表于 2014-7-4 12:18
版主！慎小嶷7月的写作预测出来了~建议用这个好不好？！6月的我都差不多写过了~

链接：http://blog. ...

好 没问题

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karen小心 发表于 2014-7-4 23:24
直接回帖交作业就可以了~作文的文件名字要按 作业时间-用户名-题目 修改好！

好,谢谢!晚上po一篇上来~~

wddbestUID: 2308524

来晚了，不好意思

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wddbest 发表于 2014-7-5 13:18
来晚了，不好意思

check it ~

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a13254 发表于 2014-7-5 06:34
好 没问题

所以0705的作文呢？还没po出来喔~

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冬菇猫 发表于 2014-7-5 08:59
好,谢谢!晚上po一篇上来~~

0703的作文已经写了修改的人了。所以，你等最新的作文作业搞出来以后再写吧。

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karen小心 发表于 2014-7-5 23:22
0703的作文已经写了修改的人了。所以，你等最新的作文作业搞出来以后再写吧。

好的，我写最新的这篇吧：）