我快哭死了，谁来帮帮我啊？

yingyioUID: 2178658

人家都觉得Argument好写，我怎么觉得就这么难啊，错误是找到了，但是写起来就好乱，分析得也乱七八糟，连很简单的题目也写不下去。再过一个星期就要考了，好没信心，怎么办啊？人家说用模板，我怎么觉得每道题都有他的特点，我都套不上去啊，怎么办，谁能帮我一下啊，我快疯了，好绝望啊。。。

sherrylilyUID: 205163

不要绝望，把你的意思表达清楚，ARG最常用的是例证法，就是给出种种可能性，这样文章就充实了，分析的时候层层推进，合理安排

相信自己，一周的时间绝对能够把ARG练出自己的分格来的。模版的意思，就是自己在论证的时候，大概都用那几种句型。加油：）

zxz1985721UID: 2144110

加油吧，我后天就考了，感觉还不如你呢。。。

sherrylilyUID: 205163

^_^，我也是后天考呢，加油，一起努力哦

点滴永恒UID: 2124536

没关系，考试时的发挥会比平时好很多，人家都是这么说的
一急就又快又好，所以别着急。。。

yingyioUID: 2178658

谢谢大家的帮忙和鼓励，刚才出去转了一圈，还有个人问路，帮了一下，感觉好多了，我会继续努力的。不过不知道还能不能走出这个怪圈圈，感觉时好时坏，ETS真折磨人。。。。炸了他。。。

WeiZhenUID: 2101725

我自己总结的模板，可以参照一下！！！一定要就修改啊！！！我考试就用这个，不改我们就雷同了！！！考试的时候先找找有什么错误，然后把开头段，结尾段和相应的模板敲上去，再填空！！！ 版权所有，严禁copy! 但可模仿！
P START
In this argument, the arguer conclude that
,to support this conclusion ,the arguer cites the evidence that
to further support this conclusion, the author also points out that
however, close scrutiny of these facts reveals that they lend little credible support to the conclusion.



1．C.E.=false causal relationship
.the arguer unfairly assume that a is attributed to b with insufficient evidence. However , the arguer  irrationally fails to take into the fact that there may be some other possible reasons could also result in a. For instance ,perhaps.
.Without ruling out all other possible factors, the arguer could not convince me that b led to a.




2.SURVEY
Representative
the arguer provide no evidence to testify that the cited statistics in the survey is necessarily representative of general c. Lacking such evidence, the arguer's assumption that  f is suspectable. Unless the arguer provide effective evidence to  prove  that the a is  representative ,I will not agree that the survey could forcefully sustain the conclusion.

VAGUE　DATA
the arguer does not acquaint me what the percentage of A in all B
the C is merely a vague data
According, it is not true that

3.SUFFICIENCY and NECESSITY conditions

the arguer illogically assert that f will sufficiently cause b. Nevertheless, the arguer does not furnish  ample evidence to attest that a is a sufficient condition. Generally speaking,
Consequently, merely b may not solve the problem.
Considering the arguer ignores other possible necessary conditions, I could agree that b sufficiently lead to a.

P END
To sum up, lacking ample and powerful facts, the arguer could not persuade me to believe that her conclusion is rational and correct. To effectively  bolster this conclusion, the arguer must provide convincing evidence that might include the following: a survey showing that     a  research showing that   statistics showing that
   To better evaluate this conclusion, I would also need to know

4F．A．=false analogy
the arguer assert that all
However,the arguer ignores the diversity of as' circumstances.
Even if a
no one could predict that other as will also without ample evidence
perhaps a ,is a
but some other as, such as, in contrast, maybe
considering the arguer fails to take into account the fact that the conditions of as may be different, it is not logical to assert that other as   , even  , it is not necessary to
5F.C. =false compare
The arguer assert that
However, the arguer ignores the circumstances of a and b may be entirely different,
Perhaps c,
But d ,in contrast, may be  
Considering the arguer fails to take into account the fact that the conditions of  c and d may be  different, it is illogical to assert that a is better that b   

6.I.T. =incomplete thought
granted that
the arguer assume  that    only based on the fact that a
However, the arguer may  ignore some other factors ,such as the c, that  could also decide
moreover, it is entirely possible that the a only serve little function in
As a common sense,  the c usually play a vital role in
Considering the arguer may ignore some possible deciding factors, her conclusion is illogical
7.反证

Finally, even if the a could adequately embody the b, however, c suggests that d, If this is the case,  the conclusion that nd is paradoxical.

yingyioUID: 2178658

好东西啊，谢谢楼上的，我会在COPY的基础上严加修改的，我觉得我就是缺这些东东了，知道哪里错了，却不知道应该怎么反驳，表达方面也有点问题，而且总结不出规律，一写就崩溃了。。哎。。

songokerUID: 2121767

给你加油了。明天就考....

expire7UID: 2160574

加油，考试时候感觉会比平常写得多一些。保持平常心。其实G的作文拿到基础分数不难得。你能找出错误已经是一部份成功了阿。我碰见不少人还要走题呢。加油！

小duoUID: 2124666

那错误分开说
条理清楚点

yingyioUID: 2178658

大家一起加油~~

chenxiao_315UID: 2168844

大家都是最近考啊，一起加油吧

安婧UID: 2156480

找一天时间根据每个错误好好给自己写一个模板，开头结尾也要写。建议还是不要用别人的。一是，避免雷同，虽然阿狗的雷同不好判。二是，别人的模板不一定能适合自己的行文思路，不能融会贯通，页不好背。

楼主，加油。还有时间，阿狗和一休因人而异，保你擅长的那个。

purplespriteUID: 2198411

加油!