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本帖最后由 naningoo 于 2009-3-18 07:54 编辑
ISSUE25 - "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
central issue:Whether anyone can make things bigger and more complex.
Whether anyone can make things as simple as possible.
Whether making things as simple as possible requires real effort and courage.
How can one person use Real effort and courage to make things simpler?
我认为这题是没有讲到重要性的问题的,只是讲到如何去做。。不知道大家的意见,我的互改的同学就是讲了A。高科技让生活复杂 ,B。让事情复杂化要COURAGE&EFFORTS 。C。简化对社会有好处。。
我自己是觉得有些偏题,但是我自己写的也有点偏哦,就是写得太长,我懒得改。。T-T
我的是:A。在没有某个领域的知识和经验时,人们容易让事情复杂化
B。要让事情变得简单,是需要勇气和努力的
C.。但是光有这两点不够。努力能给你有限的知识,勇气能让你接受变化,可是人类的知识是有限的,你还会把事情complex,只有lifelong learning才能让你在迷茫中再次找到出路。
D。那么一味追求简化可以吗?我认为不行,没有踩着石头过河的经验就不知道哪颗石头该踩,所以我认为让事情复杂化是学习过程中不可避免的阶段,正如量变是质变的必要前提,只有这样我们才能找到简化的办法。
因为我的角度就是lifelong learning,这个我再开头和结尾都有说。
然后告诉大家我自己的心得,开头要写什么,我觉得就是claim your position and provide the context in which you are going to talk about the issue.
再就是,同志们,帮我们看看是不是走题了。。。=_=
下面是intro里面对于范文brainstorming的指导
Sample Issue Topic
“In our time, specialists of all kinds are highly overrated. We need more generalists—people who can
provide broad perspectives."
Strategies for this Topic
This claim raises several related questions: What does it mean to be a generalist or a specialist, and what
value do they have for society? Does society actually need more generalists, and are specialists, in fact,
“highly overrated?”
There are several basic positions you could take on this issue: Yes, society needs more generalists and
places too high a value on specialists. No, the opposite is true. Or, it depends on various factors. Or, both
groups are important in today’s culture; neither is overvalued. Your analysis might draw examples from a
particular society or country, from one or more areas of society, or from various situations. It might focus
on the role of generalists and specialists in relation to communications, transportation, politics, information,
or technology. Any of these approaches is valid, so long as you use relevant reasons and examples to
support your position.我还是不敢全文只写一个方面或者行业哦。。大家斟酌吧
Before you stake out a position, take a few moments to reread the claim. To analyze it, consider questions
such as these:
• What are the main differences between specialists and generalists? What are the strong points of
each?
• Do these differences always hold in various professions or situations? Could there be some
specialists, for example, who also need to have very broad knowledge and general abilities to
perform their work well?
• How do generalists and specialists function in your field?
• What value do you think society places on specialists and generalists? Are specialists overvalued
in some situations, and not in others?
• Does society really need more generalists than it has? If so, what needs would they serve?
Now you can organize your thoughts into two groups:
• Reasons and examples to support the claim
• Reasons and examples to support an opposing point of view
重要,每个题目写完以后或者动笔之前,总之就是想出点思路以后,都可以回来参照这个,看看自己有没离central issue太远
If you find one view clearly more persuasive than the other, consider developing an argument from that
perspective. As you build your argument, keep in mind the other points, which you could argue against.
If both groups have compelling points, consider developing a position supporting, not the stated claim, but
a more limited or more complex claim. Then you can use reasons and examples from both sides to justify
your position.
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