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本帖最后由 hmxxhmzx 于 2016-6-28 23:34 编辑
练习一:2016/6/26
1. 抄题包括argument和写作指引
The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.
"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty
is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work
only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and
included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with
Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four
months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one
month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams
Realty.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument.
Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications
are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted."
2. 列出argument的结论和主要证据
结论:
If you want to sell your home both quickly and at good price, you should use Adams Realty
主要证据
-Adamas has more real estate agents
-Adamas's revenue is 2 higher than Fitch and the average selling price is higher than Filt as well
-The homeowner's own experise of selling house: it took him 4 month years ago by Filth and only a month now by Arial
3. 写完整的第一段
A house owner suggest his friend to choose Admas Realty for selling house with the assumptions that Big agent with Higher Revenue income and more full time agent can provide better support to the deal (Both quickly and at higher price). To give more reliable suggestion, we need to evaluate more detailed of the agents'selling record including price and time-spent, as well as research broadly about real feedbacks from customer.
4. 写出中间段的主题句(英语)用汉语解释主要讨论的点
-The owner assume that A is superior because of more full time Agent,while there is no solid evidenct to support this judgement without a proper customer feedback survey. 小公司虽然full time 人员少,但通过合理的制度流程控制,也能很好滴提供服务。另外也可能正是利用part time 员工,小公司节省了人力成本从而可能能提供更多优惠。
-By comparing average price, the house owner made a unsound assumption that all the house sold in A and F are pretty close thaht they have similar value in market. 平均价格低也许是因为两家公司对应客户有区别,F擅长代理的房子可能属于市价略低的类别。如果要给出合理建议,应该结合agent历史销售情况和朋友的房子状态。
-No one can deny the owner's personal experience, however, A sales house quicker than B is an assumple base on a bias comparasion. 十年前的销售速度与今天的情况不能做有效对比,另外单个销售情况也不能代表整体。
练习二:2016/6/27
1. 抄题包括argument和写作指引
The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a scientific journal.
"A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order
on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations
(such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys produce up to
twice as much of the hormone cortisol, which primes the body for increased activity levels,
as do their younger siblings. Firstborn humans also produce relatively high levels of
cortisol in stimulating situations (such as the return of a parent after an absence). The
study also found that during pregnancy, first-time mother monkeys had higher levels of
cortisol than did those who had had several offspring."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the
proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts
presented in the argument.
2. 列出argument的结论和主要证据
结论:
There are clues to the effect of birth oder on an indivisual's level of stimulation
主要证据
-First born monkeys produced up to twice as much of the hormone cortisol that increase activity levels
-First born human produce relatively high levels of cortisol in stimulating situation
-First- time mother monkeys had higher levels of cortisol
3. 写完整的第一段
Recent study shows that first born individuals react high level stimulation than their younger siblings , the same happens for first time mothesr. Scientist come to conclude that t birth order affect indivisual's levels of simulation. However, following alternative explanations should be considered: 1, if cortisal release differs from body size 2 if brain developpment impact cortisal 3 if other factor like nervous can also related to active level.
4. 写出中间段的主题句(英语)用汉语解释主要讨论的点
-First born indivial is the eldest of the siblings, who is also more likely to have largest body size that need more hormone production. 一般来说,体型和需要的激素量成正比,first born的高激素含量不能直接与高刺激水平挂钩,及时证明高激素能导致高刺激水平,也可能是与体型相关而不是跟birth order 相关。
-Another factor maybe the brain developing status. Normally, the eldest indivisual have more well developed mental ability. 模拟水平跟认知环境的能力相关,如果想更准确地比较,应该在所有试验对象的大脑认知能力发育完全之后再做比较。
-It is unsound to draw an conclusion base on the observation of first -time mother monkey. 首次怀孕的妈妈可能年级比较小,相对成熟的妈妈来说更容易紧张,从而导致高水平刺激。
练习三:2016/6/28
1. 抄题包括argument和写作指引
The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily
decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many
Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the
number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the
amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city
prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that
business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to
decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how
the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
2. 列出argument的结论和主要证据
结论:
-Shops in Central Plaza will return to previous high level if Skateboarding was prohibited
主要证据:
-Number of shops decrease with the incread pupolarity of skateboading in passed two years
-Shop owners believe that their decreased business is due to the number of skateboard users
-Litter and vandalism incresed dramatically
3. 写完整的第一段
A store owner appeard to make skateboard prohibited in Central Plaza since it have opposite effect on business. For better evaluate the recommendation, we need to know if any other reason that also account for the business decrease, if any reliable evidence to show skateboard create the litter and vandalism, how the skateboarding impact the customer willingness to visit, and last but not least, if there are other ways to recover the business.
4. 写出中间段的主题句(英语)用汉语解释主要讨论的点
-Business reduction can be result from all kinds of factores . Global financial crisis. Other newer and more fancy shopping mall. need more investation of overval business evironment background.
-Although it is inevitable for us to link increased litter and vandalism with increased skateboarding- an easy assumption base on experience. However, we can't deny other possiblities before more credible evidence be found
-Even skateboarding is proved to create litters and vandanlism, we still need to further discuss if that really reduct customers' willingness for shopping in CP.
-If all evidence shows skateboarding is the main reason. We should better to discuss if there are other ways to change current status. After all, the Plaza is not only a business center, it also serse as communal facility
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