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Do you agree or disagree: Playing sports give youmore lessons about the life.

Based on the benefits brought in, I agree with thestatement that playing sports give more lessons about the life.
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个人认为再长点比较好 作个引子在用这句接着就好了6 W
Initially,when playing sports, the strong and the adroit have advantages over the weakand the awkward. That might be the first lesson sports teach us.Life, just like a sport, is（
应该去掉，此句有两个谓语吖）filled with competition. In order to bedistinguished, one has to be stronger and defter, which demands diligent practice. Z* ~5 D$ L' K3 ~! ^. G
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Secondly, strategies also have significant impacton a game. Taking the correct strategy is pointing out（leads to） the correct direction to win. For example, insoccer matches, when playing against a mighty component, a team would adaptconservative formations at the beginning and aggressive one after the componentgets tired; this strategy often works, if the stronger team could not goalbefore they are exhausted. Likewise, life is filled with choices of methods,too. Making a sensible decision sometimes is more important than being at thebest position. By reasonable arrangement of time and resource to what they aregood at or where they should work more on, those now are at a disadvantagecould always find a way out. A diligent student who has comparatively poorabilities in math could finally get a better score than those who are talentyet failed to work hard. More simply, if Bill Gate chose to be an athlete, thatwould be a loss in IT field.2 l9 e8 ]. {/ F$ u) S+ Z

这段条理有些不清
个人觉得不需写那么多例子
一个例子叙述清楚为什么符合您的论点即可。
Thirdly, a team of stars who plays separately areoften beaten by eleven small potatoes that together form a solid team. Sincethe fact that team work plays an important role in sports, just like our dailylives, participating sports help people learn the necessity to cooperate withothers as well as how to become a effective member in a group, which wouldbenefit the practitioners when they dealing with social affairs.. K& v7 F-k9 E' h! w" S
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Moreover, the precious spirit of respectingcompetitors in sports is a moral lesson, which has frequently been ignoredotherwise. Sports advocates competition along with friendship. Competitionnowadays is so severe that sometimes we forgot that our opponents could also beour friends. It might be much too narrow minded to view a competitor as anenemy, because rivals still could exchange experiences and feelings about thecompetition, which could benefit both sides.
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Finally, playing sports helpscultivate several commendable characters such as perseverance, acting andthinking promptly as well as boldness. We can find shadows of such charactersfrom most of the acts through which people made a difference.2 N/ B1 S* X3 k" N$ A# o0 I
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Modern education has emphasized much on academicaccomplishments, yet omitted the above aspects. So playing sports is giving uscomplementary lessons which are necessary for a successful life.