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发表于 2013-10-25 23:25:11 |显示全部楼层
作文新手,有待提高。

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发表于 2013-10-28 16:27:44 |显示全部楼层
Nowadays,we are living in a world where science and technology play an extremely irreplaceable role in our daily life.Without the help of technology,maybe we still correspond with each other via letters and it takes a few days to send to the addressee;maybe we still do the laundry by ourselves and waste a lot of time and energy.All these problems can be solved only you can utilize the high-tech products in any conditions that bother you a lot.But,is all the thing that technology totally bring us really making our life simpler?From my personal opinion,sometimes it's just the technology that does the opposite.
In the first place,some high-tech products are always devised to be too complicated to correctly operate for most users,especially the old and the child.Users,in some cases,have to do some preparations,such as reading the instructions and having some specialized knowledge,so that they have the access to operating the instruments or apparatus.Take the Digital Single Lens Reflex as an example,playing this sort of camera adeptly needs some indispensable prerequisites.You must know the concept of aperture and shutter,you are also familiar with the light the shadow and the interactions between them.A fresh hand would never get all of these things.For all of us,we,undoubtedly,are the fresh hands in entirely unfamiliar fields.Evidently,the technology place inevitable difficulty when we really meet this kind of problem and we must be overwhelmed by the complicated and profound technology.
Moreover,technology,to some extent,making our life intricate by transform  simple and straight methods to complex and indirectly ways just to use the new innovations.Usually,some inventions are not that useful and necessary.They only offer contentment with the curiosity and freshness  or the need of aesthetics.People use this kind of things unproperly,sometimes they use innovations just they want but sometimes unnecessarily.Cite me as an example:We-chat is an increasingly prevalent communication application in app store.I love using it to chat with my friends and sometimes I am totally trapped in it and become crazy.I use the We-chat to talk even if my friend is close to me and only a few pace away.We can often see this situation,several friends sit around and are speechless but they all lower their heads and stare smart-phones.So,it is possible that the technology not only make our life more complicated but also cause a communication problem among web chatters.
Admittedly,technology has favorable impact on people's life that can't be neglected.There is no denying that in fact technology promote rapid development of society and economic boom.However,as for we ordinary people,it is just more complexity that technology bring to our everyday life.
Taking all above into deliberate consideration,,I hold the view that complication and inconvenience that technology take to us are comparably more obvious.

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发表于 2013-10-28 16:34:16 |显示全部楼层
上面发的 分段不清楚 再发一次 还是10月28日的。
Nowadays,we are living in a world where science and technology play an extremely irreplaceable role in our daily life.Without the help of technology,maybe we still correspond with each other via letters and it takes a few days to send to the addressee;maybe we still do the laundry by ourselves and waste a lot of time and energy.All these problems can be solved only you can utilize the high-tech products in any conditions that bother you a lot.But,is all the thing that technology totally bring us really making our life simpler?From my personal opinion,sometimes it's just the technology that does the opposite.

In the first place,some high-tech products are always devised to be too complicated to correctly operate for most users,especially the old and the child.Users,in some cases,have to do some preparations,such as reading the instructions and having some specialized knowledge,so that they have the access to operating the instruments or apparatus.Take the Digital Single Lens Reflex as an example,playing this sort of camera adeptly needs some indispensable prerequisites.You must know the concept of aperture and shutter,you are also familiar with the light the shadow and the interactions between them.A fresh hand would never get all of these things.For all of us,we,undoubtedly,are the fresh hands in entirely unfamiliar fields.Evidently,the technology place inevitable difficulty when we really meet this kind of problem and we must be overwhelmed by the complicated and profound technology.

Moreover,technology,to some extent,making our life intricate by transform  simple and straight methods to complex and indirectly ways just to use the new innovations.Usually,some inventions are not that useful and necessary.They only offer contentment with the curiosity and freshness  or the need of aesthetics.People use this kind of things unproperly,sometimes they use innovations just they want but sometimes unnecessarily.Cite me as an example:We-chat is an increasingly prevalent communication application in app store.I love using it to chat with my friends and sometimes I am totally trapped in it and become crazy.I use the We-chat to talk even if my friend is close to me and only a few pace away.We can often see this situation,several friends sit around and are speechless but they all lower their heads and stare smart-phones.So,it is possible that the technology not only make our life more complicated but also cause a communication problem among web chatters.

Admittedly,technology has favorable impact on people's life that can't be neglected.There is no denying that in fact technology promote rapid development of society and economic boom.However,as for we ordinary people,it is just more complexity that technology bring to our everyday life.

Taking all above into deliberate consideration,,I hold the view that complication and inconvenience that technology take to us are comparably more obvious.

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发表于 2013-10-29 11:35:04 |显示全部楼层
亲应该是考过GRE的吧。感觉用词都蛮厉害的样子~
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发表于 2013-10-29 15:07:59 |显示全部楼层
eassay 发表于 2013-10-29 11:35
亲应该是考过GRE的吧。感觉用词都蛮厉害的样子~

没有,很多词都是现查的。:lol

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发表于 2013-10-29 19:00:47 |显示全部楼层
小4来也,不好意思发晚了今天一天的课,那个感觉用词好厉害。赞一个! 10.28大头怪revised by 464879934.docx (19.23 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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发表于 2013-10-30 13:17:41 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-10-31 20:57:29 |显示全部楼层
词汇句子都好牛逼!

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发表于 2013-11-1 08:35:01 |显示全部楼层
楼主一看就考过G的,句子很厉害,学习了!

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发表于 2013-11-1 13:09:10 |显示全部楼层
11.1 独立

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发表于 2013-11-2 19:55:37 |显示全部楼层
11.01的改好了,放在我帖子的2楼,注意查收~
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1777689302

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发表于 2013-11-2 22:49:26 |显示全部楼层
liuyc037 发表于 2013-11-2 19:55
11.01的改好了,放在我帖子的2楼,注意查收~
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1660895& ...

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发表于 2013-11-3 16:24:59 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-11-4 16:08:55 |显示全部楼层
11.4 请痛批

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发表于 2013-11-5 12:59:13 |显示全部楼层
小4的作文 11.4 已改完

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