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来帮我看10.6口语的同学麻烦你帮我看10.7号的吧,我6号没来得及录,但是7号版主又忘记加我进去了,O(∩_∩)O谢谢


1007题目
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task 1 describe a person that you look up to as your role model. please include specific reasons in your answer.
task 2 agree or disagree: when students hand in their assignments late, their grade should be reduced.
task3-6 tpo 30


1005题目
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task 1 describe the most important development in your country in the past 20 years. explain its significance.
task 2 some people play games just for winning. other people play games for fun. what is your opinion and why?
task 3-6 tpo 32


1003题目
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntKBQWD
task 1 describe a tool or an object that you rely on in your daily life. why is it so important to you?
task 2 do you like to travel alone or travel with your family members? give specific reasons for your choice.
task 3-6 tpo 1 提醒:10月4号的全套会用tpo33练习,没有安装新版模考软件的小伙伴可以趁机更新一下~


1002题目
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task 1 what type of music do you like the LEAST? explain why you dislike that kind of music.
task 2 all children should learn how to draw or paint. do you agree or disagree?
task 3-6 tpo 2
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5.13题目
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Task 1 Some schools require students to take part in community service activities after school. Which of the following do you think is the best activity for students? 1. planting flowers in the community 2.doing clean-ups in the garden 3. recycling waste
Task 2 Some people prefer to make decisions quickly. Others prefer to take their time. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO 15


5.12
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Task 1 If a foreign friend comes to your country, what kind of food would you recommend and why? Please use past personal experience to explain your answer.
Soap dumpling---a famous snack
Task 2 Do you lmike to travel alone or with your family members? Explain your answer with details and examples.
Task 3-6 TPO 16


5.11
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Task 1 Describe a tool or an object you often rely on in your daily life. Explain why it is important to you.
Task 2 Are you willing to carefully choose a gift which your friends like or buy whatever you like?
Task 3-6 TPO 17


5.10
今天本来想尝试逼着自己一次过的,谁知道失败了还越录越烂,录得时候老觉得很奇怪,不知道为什么。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o60S3to
Task 1 Describe your favourite place to shop for clothes. Explain why you like to go there.
Task 2 Some students prefer test questions that ask for opinions while others prefer objective ones that have a correct answer. What do you think?
Task 3-6 TPO 18


5.9题目
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Task 1 Describe an event in history and explain what you learned from that event. Please explain with details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should learn to draw or paint.
Task 3-6 TPO 19


5.8
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c006LQ4
Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it is important to you.
Task 2 Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in small towns, others prefer big cities. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 20


5.7题目
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Task 1 Describe one thing you didn't want to do but were asked to do. How was the result? Please explain with details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to solve a challenge all by themselves. Others prefer to depend on other people's help. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO21


5.6
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Task 1 Which of the following period is the most difficult time of a person's life: childhood, teenage years or adulthood?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: students should do part-time jobs before they attend college.
Task 3-6 TPO 22


5.5
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1oz2fO
Task 1 Choose one of the forms of technology in the list and explain how it changes (has a great impact on) people's lives in your country.
1)airplane 2)computer 3)television
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the way people dress can express their personality.
Task 3-6 TPO 23


5.4 全套,我之前录第一个的时候看错题了,以为最后一个是police officer,所以最后一个附加的说的是警察。。。要是可以的话,可以顺便帮我看一下不?谢谢。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjQ47y1
Task 1 Which one of the three occupations do you think is the hardest? Government worker, doctor or policy officer? Please state your reasons with specific details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer and why?

Task 3-6 TPO 24


5.3题目  全套。。。我觉得我录好烂啊。。。
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntodadz
Task 1 Describe a celebration or a public event you attended recently, and explain why it was memorable to you.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or one project at a time. Others prefer to do several jobs or projects at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 25


5.2题目
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGojdFS
Task 1 What do you think is the most important quality of a working environment? Good leaders, good colleagues or flexible working time?
Task 2 Some people like to take a break or get a job during summer vacation. Others think it is better to take classes. Which do you prefer and why?


5.1 全套,啊啊啊,最后2周了才开始录全套,还这么烂,我真的是找死。。。
很多单词我连着念重音就会错,啊啊啊,昨晚不开心到睡不着!!求指导。。。谢谢
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQgPFiE


4.30题目   
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD9rUil
Task 1 Describe a performer, an actor or a musician, etc. that you think is great. Please give specific reasons why you think he/she is a great performer.
Task 2  Some people would borrow money to buy things they need. Others would save up money until they can afford it. Which would you do and why?


4.29题目
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQil6nw
Task 1 What are some important effects of the worldwide availability of the Internet on modern people’s life? Use specific details and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some students prefer to go to universities or colleges in their hometown. Others prefer to go to universities or colleges in new cities or towns. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.


4.28
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgp0Jl2
Task 1  Talk about an activity you enjoyed doing with your family when you were a child. Describe the activity and explain why it was enjoyable to do this activity with your family.
Task 2 Some students prefer to study or work on difficult class assignments early in the morning. Other students prefer to do this type of work in the evening. Which do you prefer and why?



4.27
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDtIIDr
Task 1  Describe a day that you enjoyed the most or was the most special to you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2  Some people prefer to make decisions quickly. Others prefer to take their time. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.

The day I enjoyed most is the day I got the first price of an English Speech Competition in Junior 2. I was shy so my teacher wanted me to participate in the game to improve my public speaking skills. I practiced many times in my home, but I still get pretty nervous that day. At that time, my mom said to me, no matter what happens, I’m her best daughter. With her encouragement, I did well in that competition. Then, I used the price money to buy flowers for my mother. That day is unforgettable because I learned courage and love.

Well, I prefer make decisions after careful consideration. Because making decisions too quickly may cause us ignore some essential facts, and the choice would not be the best. Last week, my roommate, Jane, wanted to charge her meal card. She just thought about the time was still 15 ‘clock, and the closing time was 17 ‘clock . Without hesitation, she decided to go to the office. After arrived there, she realized that day was Saturday, the teachers didn’t work. If I were she, I would like to think about all the elements before I make decision.



4.26
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjFEUct
觉得第一个自己好鬼扯哦,但是后来想到了我可以说自己某一次上街shopping包被人偷了,刚好旁边巡逻的警察看到,马上开着警车帮我追之类的。。。
ps。还是得好好学习呀。。今天听力做了14分,不开心!!!
Task 1 Among the following professions, which do you think is the most important to a city? Police officer, building designer or transport worker.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the statement that students should be required to go to school before 16.

In my perspective, the most important profession is police officer. Because they can protect our safety. Some of them would even sacrifice themselves. When someone steals your handbag, when one of your relatives miss his or her way home, when some criminals take drug trade, it’s the policeman keep the peace of our society day and night. If there is no policeman, I can hardly imagine what the world will be? Therefore, I think police officer is dispensable in our society.

Well, I think students should go to school before 16. Because they need to learn skills in the school to get a better job in the future. Going out into the world too early, they will be not competitive. My friend, Michael, dropped out of school when he was just eleven. Now, without any practical knowledge, he works as a building worker in a countryside. The work is so hard but the salary is very low. If I were him, I would finish my study first. What’s more, children before 16 cannot protect themselves if they don’t attend schools.


4.25题目
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mghZfPA
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or story you concern recently. Explain why it's getting your attention. Include reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Employees should wear formal clothes. Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.

Well, the news I concerned recently is that I get a summer internship in the Dolphin-browser Company. There are one written test and three rounds of interview. Because I was too nervous to play well in the final interview with the head of department. I think it’s unlikely to pass it. But, two days ago I received a letter offering me the job as a Software Tester. I was so excited because it’s my ideal job meets all my requirements with the better salary and benefits.

In my perspective, I think employees can wear informal clothes. Because casual clothes can make people feel more comfortable and they can pay more attention to their jobs. My uncle works in Baidu Company as a software engineer. He likes sports and he often goes directly to the company after morning run. Because he hasn’t enough time to change his sportswear. Besides, my uncle thinks the informal clothes can make him feel relaxed and then he can code the programs more effectively.



4.24
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqp8KAC
今天第一次尝试不照着念,自己闭着眼说。。。实在说的太困难,求批评,你的批评就是我前进的动力啦。。。自己老觉得自己还好,真是别人不说还不知道自己错在哪。。。跪谢。。。
Task 1 Many students do volunteering in schools or communities. If you are a volunteer, what kind of volunteer work are you interested in? Gardening in a community, doing activities with children, or cleaning a place in a city. Explaining reasons and using examples to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money on projects that can encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyle. Please give your opinion and explanation.

Well, I prefer doing activity with children. Because my dream was to be a teacher when I was young. And there is a kindergarten near my home. I usually volunteer to look after the kids as soon as I have spare time. I play games with the children and we sing songs, dance and draw pictures together. We often have a good time. What’s more, smile in the children’s face make me feel that is the most beautiful thing in the world. So, I want to volunteer to do activity with children.

In my perspective, I agree the plan. Because health is very important to the citizens who make their contributions to the development of country. But they often ignore healthy problems because of too much pressure in the business. My uncle works in the Baidu Company. He is busy and he never takes exercise Finally, he got sick last week. If the government spends money to encourage a healthier lifestyle, people like my uncle will pay more attention to their body and can keep better spirits every day.


4.23
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDw00LF
Task 1 Some universities plan to replace paperbacks and magazines with electronic books. Do you agree or disagree? Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some university students like to take difficult classes. Others prefer to take easier classes in order to get good grade. Which one do you prefer and why? Please give specific reasons to support your idea.

Well, I agree with the plan using electronic books. Because e-books are easy to carry. I needed to do some research about big data service last summer.  And I had to take lots of professional books and papers from my dormitory to the library every day, it really makes me tired. So, my friends suggested e-books to me. Then I bought a kindle and used it to read materials.  My bag got lighter and my burden relieved a lot since the kindle replaced these heavy paper books. What’s more, it’s convenient to share notes of the electronic book with your classmates.

Well. I dislike taking difficult classes because it’s easy to give up. Last summer, I studied with my friend, Jane, in the Summer School of HK University. When we took courses, Jane selected the advanced math without any mathematic learning foundation. However, after several courses, she told me that the contents were too tough to continue and she wanted to quit. If I were she, I would like to select the primary math to arouse my interest first. In that way, it’s unlikely to get nothing after studying. So, I prefer easier courses.



4.22  
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i39P0Lf
Task 1 Which following way of education do you support most? Through books, through communication within the community, or travelling around the world. Please give specific reasons and examples.
Task 2 Some people like e-books. Some people prefer paper books. Which one do your prefer and why? Please give specific reasons to support your idea.

Well, in my perspective, travelling around the world is a nice choice for education. Because journey can expand our mind and gather experience, learning something out of the books. Once, I had a vacation with my family in HK, which is located in the south of China and famous as shopping paradise. I made friends with a local student, Ashley, who was an enthusiastic girl in HK University. She showed my family over the Disneyland and introduced us many delicious food, such as Hong Kong-style milk tea, egg tart and wanton noodle. Besides, I learned the language of Guangdong and some popular songs though the travel.

Well, I prefer e-books most. Because the e-books are easy to carry. For instance, I have done some research about big data service last summer. Taking a large sum of professional books and papers from my dormitory to the school library every day made me tired. So, my friends suggested the e-books to me. Then I bought a kindle in Amazon, adding all the materials into it. My bags got lighter and my burden relieved a lot since the kindle replaced these heavy paper books. What’s more, it’s convenient to find an e-book wherever you are or whenever you need. Therefore, I feel it’s better to choose the e-books.



421
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqfzqK0
Task 1 Among the following three types of books-mystery, science fiction and biography, which do you like the least? Explain why.
Task 2 Some people like to collect old things, others throw things away after they wear out. What about you?
Well, I don’t like the biography, because it’s too boring. And there is no haunting images or thrilling plots like other books. So, it’s hard to provoke my interests. For instance, once I went to the library with my roommate. I borrowed a biography of Michael Jackson, a singer who is famous for his Moon Walk, and my roommate wanted to read another fiction book. Unfortunately, after ten minutes, I fell asleep. But my roommate immersed herself into the fiction. The dull style of telling story about the same people all the time makes me fell sick. So, I prefer other types of books than the biography.

Well, I prefer throw things away after use. Because I think collecting old things in the room will take up too much space. One of my friends, Jane, likes collecting old things and her room is filled with dresses, drink bottles and shoeboxes. Everyone invited to her room feels that the space is in a mess, which always makes them uncomfortable. If I were she, I would abandon the whole spare things to keep the environment clean. The second reason for me to support the idea is that too many old things will cause it difficult to find what you really need in a minute.



420口语作业。。。第一天录,求狠批,谢谢,本人不是玻璃心

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6FePNc

Task 1 Describe a piece of news or a story you concern recently. Explain why it gets your attention. Include reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer friends who share similar views. Others prefer those who have different standpoints. Which do you prefer and why?


Well, a piece of news recently I heard is that I have got a summer internship in the Dolphin-browser Company. I was so excited because it’s my ideal job that fulfills my requirements with the better salary and benefits. As you know, practice is very significant to me. So, I have studied every day since the beginning of this semester. There are one written test and three rounds of interviews. Due to excessive tension, I thought I didn’t play well in the final interview with hr. Fortunately, God never disappoints the studious. Two days ago I received a letter offering me the job of serving as a Software Tester. I want to share the joy with all my friends.

Well, I prefer friends who share different points. Because we think more comprehensively when we are brainstorming with friends who have different views. Once our teacher gave the class a math problem. 90% of my classmates thought that the answer was 4. But one student, Mike,   insisted the result was 5 and he listed detailed and clear reasons. Finally, our math teacher proved Mike was right. So, communicating with the dissident will let us take a fresh look at problems. The second reason for me to support the idea is that we can learn new knowledge from them.

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whuph 发表于 2014-4-20 21:24
420口语作业。。。第一天录,求狠批,谢谢,本人不是玻璃心

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6FePNc

你好,我也是第一天录音哈,一个月后考试。我听力你的录音,感觉声音很洪亮。第一题中间稍微几个单词有点停顿,但是内容还是比较充实的,时间超过了45秒。第二题第一个例子时间太长,第二个原因没有例子,感觉有点没有说服力。最好也有例子。

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shj1987 发表于 2014-4-20 22:04
你好,我也是第一天录音哈,一个月后考试。我听力你的录音,感觉声音很洪亮。第一题中间稍微几个单词有点 ...

因为我是用手机对着嘴巴录的。。。我今天是改你的吗?

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whuph 发表于 2014-4-20 23:21
因为我是用手机对着嘴巴录的。。。我今天是改你的吗?

你好,不是我修改的。大家一起评论哈,一起提高

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shj1987 发表于 2014-4-21 09:42
你好,不是我修改的。大家一起评论哈,一起提高

哦哦哦,好嘛好嘛。。。太需要你了~~~

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whuph 发表于 2014-4-20 21:24
420口语作业。。。第一天录,求狠批,谢谢,本人不是玻璃心

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Well, a piece of news recently I heard 发音不对 is that I have got a summer 同发音internship in the Dolphin-browser Company. I was so exacted 拼错了~ because it’s my ideal job that fulfills my requirements with the better salary and benefits. As you know, practice is very significant to me. So, I have studied every day since the beginning of this semester 这个发音完全不对. There are one written test and three rounds of interviews. Due to excessive tension, I thought I didn’t play well in the final interview with hr. Fortunately, God never disappoints the studious. Two days ago I received a letter offering me the job of serving as a Software Tester. I want to share the joy with all my friends.

楼主的录音有点奇怪,说不出来,有点太洪亮了==. 感觉楼主应该是念得吧? 这太流利,而且感觉比较书面语, 如果考试这样可能会被怀疑是背下来的. 如果是读的建议尽快摆脱, 如果是说完再把稿子写下来方便我们修改那就太认真,太感谢了~

Well, I prefer friends who share different points. Because we think more compre'hensively 重音可以再注意一下 when we are brainstorming with friends who have different views. Once 发音再饱满一点 our teacher gave the class a math problem. 90% of my classmates thought that the answer was 4. But one student, Mike,   insisted the result was 5 and he listed detailed and clear reasons. Finally, our math teacher proved Mike was right. So, communicating with the dissident will let us take a fresh look at problems. The second reason for me to support the idea is that we can learn new know'ledge重音 from them.

这例子太详细了... 还有数字,我感觉这更像是写作文.. 主要是不知道楼主怎么录的~
看得出楼主的决心,继续加油~

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Well, a piece of news recently I heard 发音不对 is that I have got a summer 同发音internsh ...

因为我是第一天录。。所以我想着我先积累一下,再脱口说。。。我是先写再照着念的。。。
确实不好,但是前两天试了直接说根本录不下来。。。

可能我把手机离嘴巴太近了,以后注意一点。。。
O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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Well, a piece of news recently I heard 发音不对 is that I have got a summer 同发音internsh ...

once的发音饱满是什么意思呀??

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whuph 发表于 2014-4-21 17:27
once的发音饱满是什么意思呀??

你可以搜一些发音,比如有道,听一下

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活性氧 发表于 2014-4-21 23:26
你可以搜一些发音,比如有道,听一下

哦哦哦,好的。。。O(∩_∩)O谢谢,我觉得我有很多单词发音是错的。。。sigh。。。。

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T1 要是不看文本还真听不出来啊。singer的读音特别像single,style的st都被吞音了,另外断句的问题,比如Unfortunately, after ten minutes, I fell asleep.没听到停顿,所以没看文本之前也没听出来。
T2 collect听起来是connect
句法什么的都很棒,就是读音需要注意,断句,另外语气太平淡了。

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我来批改4.22啦

task1:
总体来说例证不太合适吧,个人感觉没有很好地和education联系起来。
Well, in my perspective, travelling around the world is a nice choice for education. Because journey can expand our mind and gather experience, learning something out of the books. (expand和gather的主语不一致的吧,一个是journey一个是你啊,还有后面的learning用的也奇怪)Once, I had a vacation with my family in HK, which is located in the south of China and famous as shopping paradise.(这样听起来好费劲,后面可以拆出来,and it's famous as shopping paradise这样子都行,口语里没必要追求长句子,口语老师说最好通篇都是sb do sth 加点短语插入就行 ) I made friends with a local student, Ashley, who was (这里是was 还是is 呢?俺也不知道。直接删了who was 也行啊)an enthusiastic girl in HK University. She showed my family over the Disneyland and introduced us many delicious food, such as Hong Kong-style milk tea, egg tart and wanton noodle. Besides, I learned the language of Guangdong (Cantonese)and some popular songs though the travel.


task2:

Well, I prefer e-books most. Because the e-books are easy to carry. For instance, (口语比较少用这个吧,for example就够了)I have done (这里不需要这个完成时态吧,I needed to do就好啦)some research about big data service last summer. Taking a large sum of professional books and papers from my dormitory to the school library every day made me tired. (and I had to take a lots of professional books and papers from my dormitory to the library every day,it really makes me tired. ps:为了让句子听起来没这么长,可以适当的在 a lot of / every day/really加重语气,再多点停顿酱紫。)So, my friends suggested the e-books to me. Then I bought a kindle in Amazon, adding all the materials into it. (这个用法很奇怪哎,adding?  "and added"就好了吧)My bags got lighter and my burden relieved a lot since the kindle replaced these heavy paper books. What’s more, it’s convenient to find an e-book wherever you are or whenever you need. Therefore, I feel it’s better to choose the e-books.


总体来说,我赶脚楼楼像在写作文。
口语的不在乎句子多复杂,能让人听懂才好,多点details语言丰富饱满就更好了。楼主的TASK2我第一次几乎木有听懂,得慢慢分析一下句子成分才行==。
还有语气起伏的问题,需要强的的地方加重语气,多点情感会比较好。

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我的我发上来了哦 你的呢~

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yummywang 发表于 2014-4-25 17:23
我的我发上来了哦 你的呢~

我们是互改424的啦。。。我的在第二楼来着~~

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