task 1:Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you. http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntwp4Qt
task 2:Some people prefer to plan what to do in their free time ahead of time, others prefer to not having such plans. Which do you prefer? Explain why. http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDeoVLZ
oli点评:
语音很棒,语调语速都不错~
task1,第一点关于swimming skill is important to you一点说服力都没有……其实你只说第二点就很好,把你教对方的细节说清楚,比如说教的时候你们会聊天,你了解到他是一个多么幽默的人,而他也觉得你的游泳技巧很好,很崇拜你,这就说明了你们为什么在游泳的过程中就成为了好朋友。记住,点的数量不重要,重要的是你有没有把一个点讲充分、讲圆满。其实一般一个点就可以讲35s,因为会有一些令人信服的细节。这种情况下不用追求要说到两个点的。
Task2,很好,有原因,有例子,有细节,说得很清楚。考场上说这个应该会拿到good的!
10.25号考,期待版主的再次点评! !
作业:10.22号 全套
Task 1: Your friend is about to open a new restaurant, what suggestions would you give this friend, it could be about the location and food. Give specific reasons and details in your response http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hq7VlR2
Task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the statement that sixteen-year-olds are old
enough to drive a car. Give specific reasons and details in your response. http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0Che4g
oli点评:
task3,前面的阅读部分讲得太多,你本来语速就不快,还有停顿,后面听力部分的复述就显得少,而且在60s内没讲完。尽量压缩阅读部分的叙述,25s足矣(其实20s就够了)。不过你语气挺镇定的,虽然有点不熟练,不过让人听起来感觉很自信,保持!
task4,例子的讲述太晚了(which is a psychological phenomenon是废话不用说),尤其是考虑到你语速不快和停顿(没错跟上题一样的问题)。给你一个建议,必须要在20s时就开始讲例子(而不是“教授讲了一个例子”这句话),因为还要在后面留出一点时间总结例子和术语的关系。不过你总结例子的能力很强,good!
task5,说自己的建议的时间太少,最好到30s,而不是12s。压缩前面(跟上面两道题的问题一样)
task6,同样的问题,开头概括部分太多,例子部分被压缩,信息点不够