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Issue 47
Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.
社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视,比如人的推理和其他认知能力。
先说你的syllabus:
总论点:同意
分论点:(智力培养的重要性----产生原因----解决方法)
1、intellect的重要性,有利于成功,Bill Gates(Bill哥的成功很大程度上不是intellect而是emotional factors)
2、因为学校教育的一些不合理,导致了缺少智力培养。考试、追求高分、高分低能现象的产生。(例子完全错误,正是学校教育追求智力培养才重视考试,而忽略了其他方面,如情商,morality,马加爵是一个典型吧,intellect很高,但是都干了些什么?)
3、解决办法,社会应该加强对这一问题的重视程度。一些公司招聘的时候重视除分数外的许多因素,加强对员工的培训等。更多的企业、学校应该学习这些成功经验。
我觉得你把intellect理解错了,intellect很大意义上是我们通常说的智商,就是逻辑思考能力。基本上是与情商相对应。所以我觉得我对这个题目会持反对立场。我把我的syllabus说一下吧:
1. 与作者说的正好相反,现在的学校很强调intellect education.
2. 但是学校忽落了Emotion education.
3. 对于morality也是很重要的一个教育方面。
As we all know, intellect, including reasoning and other cognitive skills, is an important factor in the process of individual success and social development. However, society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.
Intellect, defined as the capacity for rational or intelligent thought, includes reasoning ability, capabilities of analyzing and solving problems, etc. It is a crucial factor in the process of not only individual success, but also the development of society. Take Bill Gates, the founder of one famous corporation in the world, as an example. If he had not owned high intellect, Microsoft under his control, would have had no opportunity to develop advanced computer operating systems and dominate the PC market triumphantly.(如上所说,Bill 开创Microsoft 是很大的勇气和很高的情商,他手下的那些编程的伙计,intellect也很高,怎么还是给Bill打工,而没有自己开公司呢?) Therefore, intellect has an important influence on the individual success. As for the development of a society, the function of intellect also could not be neglected. Social development depends on exploring more unknown fields, other than fields being existed. Discovering the unknown areas rests on the ability of reasoning, a factor included in intellect and an impetus for social development.(我反而觉得这个才能支持你的论点,But to my disappointment没有详细论述) As a result, intellect is a basic factor promoting individual success and social development.
The phenomenon that society does not place enough emphasis on the training of intellect is produced by the defect of existing educational system to some extent, such as overemphasizing on scores.(分数与智力?) Grades, standards to measure how much knowledge in textbooks being mastered by students, have many defects. For example, the capability trained in the test is the repeating of what the book says, while others, such as creative thinking and reasoning, could not be improved from this process. A consequence of these standard tests is the fact that some students, owning high scores in the school, have difficulties to fit for the job requiring them to use their cognitive skills, other tan repeating. Only if educational systems could pay more attention on the training of the development of students' whole abilities, jobs requiring more cognitive skills are easier to be taken on than ever. Then, the improvement of educational systems will bring advantages to society.(难以信服!举个例子,高等数学,几乎每个大学生都学吧,高数的考试也很多吧,分数不重要吗?但是高数显然能培养人的思考和逻辑能力吧)
The approach of solving this problem is that not only educational systems, but also whole society should begin to attach importance to the training of intellect, as doing in some successful companies and universities nowadays. Some successful companies and universities adopt many measures to overcome defects in existing school education. For example, Microsoft has a strict procedure of enrolling employees, including an elaborate designed test which could scientific evaluate various intellect levels of job-finders. Employees in this company will receive a systematic training to improve their comprehensive intellect not only reasoning, but also other cognitive skills. There is another instance about the successful pushing an approach which reduces the pressure of pursuing high scores in Chinese elementary school recent years. As a result, a survey taken by an authoritative organization shows that the general abilities have obviously increasing after carrying out the approach, and recommends other schools to adopt this approach. From these examples, we could draw a conclusion that some good ways to solve the problem of ignoring intellect could be used as references by both educational systems and the whole society.(我举一个很反动的例子,以前美国黑人选举投票之前都要通过intellect test, 通过才可以选举,你能说这是society不重视吗?)
To sum up, society should pay more attention on intellect by adopting some effective approaches immediately, since it is too important to be neglected. (557 words) |
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