暑期活动－AW-issue105-kuku

赵祎UID: 3579509

105) Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.


I agree partly to the claim that imagination is a quite valuable asset of human being, but remain my reservation on whether it is more precious than experience, for the reason given is not a out of comprehensive consideration, and I will elaborate my opinions below.　

It is one of the most distinctive trait of human beings for the endowed ability to imagine, namely, to form images or ideas in mind without sensitive perception from those that have already exist. This may, and already have, help us form ideas to deal with tough issues or create new inventions for better use. The countless fantastic art works and most of the things we are using today, if not all, are the fruits of the fecund soil of imagination. People thought of flying in the sky like the eagles and the birds, and the idea comes up to them that the hot air, which could bring things up, may also bring people to the air, then came the fire balloon. The willingness to save more time and energy by traveling on foor make prehistory people thinking of utilizing the round wheel to carry people from place to place, which is the original form of car.

However, imagination may not be constricted by the knowledge and experiences all the time. It seems that, in some art works, especially when it comes to the works like of the surrealism, artist may struggle to break the constraint of the real object to make some extraordinary break through. But even in these cases, they may structure a distorted clock or frame their images of dreamscapes may consist components of real things, and make adaptations and changes from them. A work that comes from nothing may be regarded as insane or impenetrable, at best.

Moreover, if we move on to think further deeply for the numerous inventions in our lives, it is not difficult to grasp the idea that they may not simply coming out of imagination, but on the basis of a good knowledge backup. Fire balloon may not come out if people don’t know that hot air is inclined to go up and may possibly bring other objects up, cars would not be invented if people do not have the experiences observing that round objects can move much more easier than other shapes. Nearly all the new ideas or inventions may base on knowledges or experience ahead of it, and imagination is exactly a proper tool that can integrate those beforehand information to form new ones. Without knowledge and experiences, imagination may lose a great deal of it’s force.

In conclusion, imagination conceivably may be a great asset of human being that has not only help the emerging and development of nearly all the instruments and objects today, but also been the unlimited sources of creative art works. However, we still discriminate the importance of it with that of experiences and knowledge, as they virtually develop together reciprocally. Imagination may work well when it utilize and integrate the experiences and knowledge which actually form a web of information that imagination relies on.

dingchenchenUID: 3602968

同学你好~
你的格式不对，你没有授权王老师让王老师帮你改作文，一楼要授权王老师改你的作文以及你的写作目录，后面的楼是写作文的。
具体格式参见 锤先森G330，他是老学生了，链接如下
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... 289&fromuid=3602968

还有你需要学习王老师的“1+3”模式，在6分博客里有，链接如下：
GRE作文6分教学博客https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1777232-1-1.html

我也是新手，互相学习哈~
下面我来点评一下作文哈，我的点评里有不妥当之处就指出来哈，互相学习~

I agree partly to the claim that imagination is a quite valuable asset of human being, but remain my reservation on whether it is more precious than experience, for the reason given is not a out of comprehensive consideration, and I will elaborate my opinions below.
我觉得你的第一段需要断句，并且没有按照王老师的“1+3”模式来写，也就是首段要把后面三个中间段的主旨句同意转换一下，这样可以提高作文的档次。应该这样表述吧对“1+3”。。。。。。。

还有，最好做表格，这样老师可以点评你的每一个有问题的句子。表格现在excel中做，然后粘贴到寄托编辑框里，要把编辑框右上角“纯文本”的勾去掉。表格参见我的一篇吧：
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... 069&fromuid=3602968
这篇背批地比较惨，呵呵。。。不过这样才能进步~非常感谢王老师一直以来对我们作文的批改~

还有，老师说，句子要模仿老师的，这样不容易出错。我语言问题很严重，就尽量按照老师说的做，模仿老师的句子。


一起加油哈~

covan834UID: 3580369

appreciate it