cocoyoyo+GRE诊断+求高人为我Verbal突破150指路

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cocoyoyo+GRE诊断+求高人为我Verbal突破150指路

我知道150要求不高，但是一直没法突破，今天就厚着脸皮求诊断，也让大家看一下什么叫坚持不懈的学弱

1 个人基础
四级525 六级505 雅思6.5  托福92（还在刷）
第一次G 20150411 V141 Q160 总301 W2.5
第二次G 20150829 V143 Q170 总313 W3
第三次G 20160110 V145 Q166 总311 W2.5
第四次G 20160312 V144 Q166 总310 W3

2 复习方法
单词： 再要你命3000（掌握率90%）+佛脚单词（掌握率（70%））  外加同时准备托福，背着托福分科
主攻3000 用的杨树鹏17天的方法记3000 无限循环中
填空： 前两次考G主要用magoosh 填空刷了2-3遍 那些特色鲜明的题已经记住答案了 后两次考用的是在线练习网站考满分 那个里面的题比较杂 什么都有点 刷了XDF的各种题  刷了OG 150 巴朗 Kaplan 现在在刷500题  等价题的证券率最高 一般在50%-80%  单空50%  双空及三空就悲剧了完全处于随缘的状态 导致我都无法估计正确率 最近发现三空的正确率比双空高  双空练了很多 还是错很惨 词大多认识的情况下 双空能对一个空 一般很少两空都错 然并卵
阅读：前两次刷magoosh 今天1月用的是36套 当然OG 150 巴朗 Kaplan 也都刷了
做36套的时候正确率在50%徘徊  最近在做真题70篇（感觉这个资料和考试最接近） 阅读正确率很低 这是我最大的问题 而且我现在都不知道该用什么材料来练习了
数学：早期用magoosh 然而我已快记得大部分题了 现在用陈向东快速突破 主要问题是粗心 哎 我还数学系的呢 丢人

3 备考情况
15年4月到8月 4-7月 每天晚上1个小时 8月后20天脱产 每天9个小时
16年1月至今 每天4-5个小时  现在用的500+77机经真题
500题填空 每天2-3个section限时10分钟完成 对答案 用20分钟仔细分析每个题
77阅读 现在还不限时 力求读懂 做题 对答案 分析原文 在原文中标记答案对应句子
按照杨树鹏的方法同时在背3000+佛脚
除了数学用的是实体书 其他都是上网下资料对着电脑看
会在考满分上隔三差五做模考 verbal一直在145左右波动 Q168左右 然而我感觉这些模考就是个心理安慰 没啥用 和实际考试差距大 模考中填空正确率50% 阅读 40% 500+77第一遍还没刷完 其他我提过的资料至少一遍 magoosh2-3遍

4 具体问题
还不知道什么事“五步训练法”
我一直觉得我的V很有问题 只是填空比阅读稍好（在限时的情况下） 然而不限时的时候，阅读情况情况会有提高，不是读不懂，而是时间一紧张，就稀里糊涂过去了，导致没读懂就开始做题  我现在不知道该用什么材料训练 也不知道该怎么练了 备考时间太长 反而不知道该怎么办了

我最近一次考试是一个多月后 5月21号 我已经做好破釜沉舟的准备 就一次 不想再和ETS纠缠不清了  跪求方案 等杀G成功 必定回来回馈G友们！

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不懂，按照LZ的英语底子和复习的题量来看不应该是这个成绩啊？把之前几次的Diagnosis发上来看看？
以及如果能发几篇平时的AW习作可以让我更好地判断你的水平……

阅读的话要抛弃托福和四六级定位找同义改写的策略（现在ETS的陷阱很多都是针对这个方法出的），真正理解文章更重要。

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岳然 发表于 2016-4-6 16:28
不懂，按照LZ的英语底子和复习的题量来看不应该是这个成绩啊？把之前几次的Diagnosis发上来看看？
以及如果 ...

以下是我verbal145的diagnosis
Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        1        02:20
2        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        2        03:13
3        Multiple-choice – Select One        Right        3        01:46
4        Select-in-Passage        Wrong        3        01:27
5        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        4        01:16
6        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        4        02:44
7        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        4        00:51
Reading Comprehension - Shorter Passage:

Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        4        01:16
2        Multiple-choice – Select One or More        Right        4        00:16
3        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        5        01:23
Text Completion:

Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        2 blanks        Right        3        02:02
2        2 blanks        Wrong        3        01:54
3        1 blank        Wrong        3        00:54
4        3 blanks        Wrong        4        01:52
5        1 blank        Right        4        01:24
6        2 blanks        Wrong        5        00:38
Sentence Equivalence:

Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        N/A        Wrong        3        01:16
2        N/A        Wrong        3        01:20
3        N/A        Right        3        01:02
4        N/A        Wrong        3        00:58
Second Section
Reading Comprehension - Longer Passage:
Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        Multiple-choice – Select One        Right        1        02:26
2        Multiple-choice – Select One        Right        1        03:05
3        Multiple-choice – Select One        Omitted        1        00:02
Reading Comprehension - Shorter Passage:
Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        Multiple-choice – Select One        Right        1        01:55
2        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        1        01:58
3        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        2        00:47
4        Multiple-choice – Select One or More        Right        2        02:30
5        Multiple-choice – Select One        Right        2        01:33
6        Multiple-choice – Select One        Wrong        2        01:52
7        Multiple-choice – Select One        Right        3        00:32
Text Completion:
Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        3 blanks        Right        1        01:24
2        3 blanks        Right        2        02:03
3        2 blanks        Wrong        2        01:29
4        3 blanks        Right        3        01:39
5        1 blank        Wrong        3        01:14
6        1 blank        Wrong        4        00:34
Sentence Equivalence:
Description and Sample Questions
Reference #        Question Type        Right/Wrong        Difficulty Level        Time Spent
1        N/A        Right        1        01:08
2        N/A        Wrong        2        01:15
3        N/A        Wrong        3        01:28
4        N/A        Wrong        4        00:57

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岳然 发表于 2016-4-6 16:28
不懂，按照LZ的英语底子和复习的题量来看不应该是这个成绩啊？把之前几次的Diagnosis发上来看看？
以及如果 ...

3月一次模考的 issue 粘贴到word里发现好多拼写错误，然而为了真实，还是 要原样贴过来
issue
题目Should government officials depend on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve, as the statements suggests?
我的
I am not completly agree with this judgment because I thinkt that gobernment officials' juedgment and the will of the people they serve are both should be considerated.
Most of the government officials have been work for their job for a long time, so  they have their own experience to handle difficult problems and give their useful judgment. People should give governmet officials enough trust, they are the specialists on the government work afer all. For instance, sometimes the will of people the government officials serve just concern about the individual person, we addmit that the need of individual people is important and should be concerned, however, governmet officials should not only consider about the individual's need but also the profit of the whole country. For example, some people always hope that they could pay less tax to the governmet so that they will have much more money to live a better life. Nevertheless, without enough tax to build the medical and enducational facilities, people still can not enjoy their dream life. So unquestioningly carry out the will of the people is not wisdom for the whole country.
On the other hand, it is unwise for the governmet officials only rely on their own judgment without consider the will of the people they serve. The will of people do reflect some problems of people's daily life such as the hight education fee of children, unconveniet facilities of foundmental health care and so on. If government officials ignore the urgent need of people, there will be dangerous potential for the whole country. In the river of long history, many tyrants just enjoy their sybarite life and  never care about their people who had to end their empero life. The failure of such tyrant is also the same to the government officials who ignore the will of people.
In a word, governmet officials should not only rely on their own judgement but also carry out the will of the people they serve and find a balance point between them.

argument
题目
"It is time for the city of Grandview to stop funding the Grandview Symphony Orchestra. It is true that the symphony struggled financially for many years, but last year private contributions to the symphony increased by 200 percent and attendance at the symphony's concerts-in-the-park series doubled. In addition, the symphony has just announced an increase in ticket prices for next year. For these reasons, we recommend that the city eliminate funding for the Grandview Symphony Orchestra from next year's budget. We predict that the symphony will flourish in the years to come even without funding from the city."
我的
The memo said that it is time for the city to stop funding the Grandview Symphony Orchestra and then give some reasons, but I think the following reasons are unbelievelable.
The augmentation think that the symphony struggled financially for many years and last year the private contributions to the symphont increased by 200 percent and attendance ata the symphony doubled so that they do not need the funding for next year's budget. Many years financially struggled of the symphony means that the symphony may have the financial difficulty all the time, that is to say, the symphony may be  still need the funding of the goverment in the next year. There is no relationship between this year's private contributions and next year's  situation.
The memo mention the second reason is that the symphony has just announced an increase in ticket prices for the next year. An increase  in ticket prices does not equal to an increase in profits  in the next year. The symphony might still be difficult in finance because the increase in ticket prices does not complate for their budget. What is worse is that becaue of  the high ticket prices there will be less people come to the symphony so that the symphony earn much les than before and they do need the funding to help them handle the financial problem.
The city of Grandview predict that the symphony will flourish in the years to come without funding from the city. The city just predict without any data statistics to analyse the financial situation of the symphony, so the predict is unreasonable.
The city of Grandview should do researches and statistic analyse to descide whether they should stop the funding.

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cocoyoyo 发表于 2016-4-6 19:25
3月一次模考的 issue 粘贴到word里发现好多拼写错误，然而为了真实，还是 要原样贴过来
issue
题目Sho ...

从这两篇作文来看你的英语底子太薄弱，除了拼写以外，基本每一句话都会有句法和词法的错误。在这个基础上准备GRE比较吃力不讨好。建议先从基础抓起，如果有必要应该找本英语语法书好好看看，尤其是多读读里面的例句培养语感。单词方面也是同样的道理，先巩固夯实四六级词汇，好好读读词典中的例句，看看这些单词在句子中如何使用。

从GRE的Diagnosis来看，你的阅读确实做得不好。阅读是Verbal考察的核心能力，可以说填空考察的其实也是阅读能力。提高阅读，不仅需要大量读，更需要选择适合自己水平的材料，在目前这个阶段，建议你以托福TPO的文章为主，先把GRE暂时放一放，达到一定水平以后可以买一本杨鹏的长难句，学习一下怎么快速分析句子的结构。

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岳然 发表于 2016-4-6 21:23
从这两篇作文来看你的英语底子太薄弱，除了拼写以外，基本每一句话都会有句法和词法的错误。在这个基础上 ...

版主大大这个建议很适合我！！！

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岳然 发表于 2016-4-6 21:23
从这两篇作文来看你的英语底子太薄弱，除了拼写以外，基本每一句话都会有句法和词法的错误。在这个基础上 ...

求版主大人帮我分析一下T。T
感激不尽，发了一个名为【大三狗求考前冲刺计划】的帖子，我也是521考，刚才magoosh very hard TC正确率30%我都想死了。。。