issue83 G-89-互助社-8.8日同主题写作，拍拍拍，有拍必回。。。

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来迟了，这几天有事耽误了。。。归队。。。
这篇issue开始觉得思路明确，没想到下笔了确感觉困难重重。。。
自己认为思路还比较明确，语言方面问题严重，各位拍吧。。。有拍必回。。

83"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."


观点：disagree
提纲：
1.Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state因为这些wilderness areas里面有丰富的资源
这些资源一有研究价值；二对维持生态平衡意义重大
2.even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people，仍然需要保护。因为：
一，需要考虑将来
二．即使很边远的地区，很少人可以进去，也能造成严重的破坏。


Overwhelming influenced by the proceeding of the industrialization, the environment increasingly suffers contaminations and threaten——rivers are polluted by the toxic waste, trees are cut down to satisfy the need of the human race , the air is not fresh now and the sky is not blue anymore. The most obvious evidence is that the area of wildness are descending rapidly due to the extension of cities, causing the disappearance of not only the forest but various kinds of animals Thus, it's high time for our government to take action to preserve publicly owned wilderness areas, even though the remote areas are seldom accessible ofto people.

To begin with, the wild areas are often the habitats of various kinds of flora and animals, especially the rare ones. Protection of these propagation resource has significant meanings. First, the observation of flora and the research of the animals' behavior plays a considerable part in helping people to understand and utilize the nature. The more we know about other species ,the more we know about we human and the whole nature. Despite in bionomy ,the study of these rare resource also has great value in other aspects. It's well known that many facilities and tools we use are manufactured by the ideas generated form the observation of animals' feature. For example, the structure and flying principle of helicopter are inspired by the dragonfly. All these have  shown that we can learn a lot from the nature. Second, the wilderness areas play an important role in keeping a balanced ecological system, and lack of preservation or even destroy to them would undoubtedly result in the broken of the stability of the nature. A case in point is that Amazon tropical rain forests in Brazil, which are called "the lung of the earth" ,produce twenty percent of oxygen we breathe every year. One can hardly imagine that without these forests how we could survive. In fact, however, the forests are disappearing at an unbelievable speed due to the immoderate exploration of the human race, causing serious problems such as the homeless animals , the loss of the water and soil and so on.. People now have to face the consequence and pay the cost of all the actions disrespecting the nature. In this sense, to preserve the public owned  wilderness areas really serves as a way to save the nature, the same way to save ourselves.

Further ,the wilderness, even the remote areas which accessible to only a few people also deserve people's attention and care. First, he views that the remote areas deserves no protection since it seldom be reached by people is short-sighted when we take the future into account. We should not lose sight to the fact that the development is at a high speed that the remote areas are likely to become easily accessible in the coming future. One apt illustration of this point is the desert in Israel. The first premier of Israel once predicted that, the desert in the south is the future of Israel. The prediction which sounds absurd at first now becomes true. Due to the efforts of the government, a water pipe with a length of 145 kilometers had been successfully built to carry the water from the north to the south, which eventually change the desert into oasis and thus lead to the fabulous success on the agriculture of Israel. In short, it is possible that people in the future access to the areas people think extremely remote today. We should be farseeing protecting the  remote areas for our offspring.

Second, without the protection of government, the environment might easily be damaged even though it is remote .Take the Asian Tiger in Russia for example. The number of Asian Tigers, which mostly live in the remote mountains far away from the cities in Russia, decreased sharply in the early 1980s'.Human activities are responsible for this. Hunters killed a large amount of the  tigers cruelly to get their hides ,which can be sold at a high price. The Asian Tiger are close to die out even though there are not too much hunters. The same thing happens on Tibetan antelope in Kekexili, China. Too many cases told us that we cannot neglect the remote areas in that just a few people could cause large damage in these areas, causing terrible aftermath.

To sum up, the wilderness areas, an important part of the ecological system ,deserve the government's protection. The  protection of the wilderness areas means not only the maintenance but also the development in that even the remote areas could be utilized in the future. Furthermore , it's the government's responsibility to preserve the wilderness areas, even the extremely remote areas which could be accessible to only a few people, since that without the control of govenment, people may act unreasoningly for their own interests in these areas ,leading  to the extreme damage to the nature.

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顶！:victory:

huangdaoUID：190018

占位 晚上改 别打我哦:L

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83"Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."


观点：disagree
提纲：
1.Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state因为这些wilderness areas里面有丰富的资源
这些资源一有研究价值；二对维持生态平衡意义重大
2.even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people，仍然需要保护。因为：
一，需要考虑将来
二．即使很边远的地区，很少人可以进去，也能造成严重的破坏。


Overwhelming 感觉严重了 influenced by the proceeding of the industrialization, the environment increasingly suffers contaminations and threaten——rivers are polluted by the toxic waste, trees are cut down to satisfy the need of the human race , the air is not fresh now and the sky is not blue 推荐一个azure anymore. The most obvious evidence 后面的是证据吗？原因用cause 是不是好些？而且说实话 是原因之一吧 别给人有argument的余地啊is that the area of wildness are descending rapidly due to the extension of cities, causing the disappearance of not only the forest but various kinds of animals Thus, it's high time for our government to take action to preserve publicly owned wilderness areas, even though the remote areas are seldom accessible ofto people.

To begin with, the wild areas are often the habitats of various kinds of flora and animals, especially the rare ones. Protection of these propagation resource has significant meanings. First, the observation of flora and the research of the animals' behavior plays a considerable part in helping people to understand and utilize the nature. The more we know about other species ,the more we know about we human and the whole nature. Despite in？是尽管的意思吧 用except for 是不是好点 bionomy ,the study of these rare resource also has great value in other aspects. It's well known that many facilities and tools we use are manufactured by the ideas generated form the observation of animals' feature. For example, the structure and flying principle of helicopter are inspired by the dragonfly. All these have  shown that we can learn a lot from the nature. 这儿可以另起一段了， 看起来也好些Second, the wilderness areas play an important role in keeping a balanced ecological system, and lack of preservation or even destroy 好像只有动词义 可以用damage吧？ to them would undoubtedly result in the broken of the stability 用 the instability？ of the nature. A case in point is that Amazon tropical rain forests in Brazil, which are called "the lung of the earth" ,produce twenty percent of oxygen we 用people吧 breathe every year. One can hardly imagine that without these forests how we could survive. In fact, however, the forests are disappearing at an unbelievable speed due to the immoderate exploration of the human race, causing serious problems such as the homeless animals , the loss of the water and soil and so on.. People now have to face the consequence and pay the cost of all the actions disrespecting the nature. In this sense, to preserve the public 词？owned  wilderness areas really serves as a way to save the nature, the same way to save ourselves.个人意见：后一部分是不是写对人类的影响更有说服力呢？

Further ,the wilderness, even the remote areas which accessible to only a few people also deserve people's attention and care. First, he his？ views that the remote areas deserves no protection since it seldom be is？ reached by people is short-sighted when we take the future into account. We should not lose sight to the fact that the development is at such a high speed that the remote areas are likely to become easily accessible in the coming future. One apt illustration of this point is the desert in Israel. The first premier of Israel once predicted that, the desert in the south is the future of Israel. The prediction which sounds absurd at first now becomes true. Due to the efforts of the government, a water pipe with a length of 145 kilometers had been successfully built to carry the water from the north to the south, which eventually change the desert into oasis and thus lead to the fabulous success on the agriculture of Israel.结果是不是有点多余？对于主题来说 In short, it is possible that people in the future access to the areas people think extremely remote today. We should be farseeing protecting the  remote areas for our offspring.

Second, without the protection of government, the environment might easily be damaged even though it is remote .Take the Asian Tiger in Russia for example. The number of Asian Tigers, which mostly live in the remote mountains far away from the cities in Russia, decreased sharply in the early 1980s'.Human activities are responsible for this. Hunters killed a large amount of the  tigers cruelly to get their hides ,which can be sold at a high price. The Asian Tiger are close to die out even though there are not too much hunters. The same thing happens on Tibetan antelope in Kekexili, China. Too many cases told us that we cannot neglect the remote areas in that just a few people could cause large damage in these areas, causing terrible aftermath.
是不是应该说清楚环境破坏和生物灭绝是一回事？（我是感觉不是哦）

To sum up, the wilderness areas, an important part of the ecological system ,deserve the government's protection. The  protection of the wilderness areas means not only the maintenance but also the development in that even the remote areas could be utilized in the future.这句话是不是有结构问题？ Furthermore , it's the government's responsibility to preserve the wilderness areas, even the extremely remote areas which could be accessible to only a few people, since that without the control of govenment, people may act unreasoningly for their own interests in these areas ,leading  to the extreme damage to the nature.

观点是比较清晰 语言也不错 有点小错
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