issue144 下周就考了，第一次艺术类题目，大家帮忙看看

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Who gives the society something of lasting value? The author claims that it is the artistnot(rather than) the critic that makes it. In my view, while I am firmly confirmed that artist created the art work, however, the author begs the question by overlooking the important function of the critic. (While 和However只需要写一个就可以表示转折了，实际上这两句话并没有存在转折关系可以写成：I barely agree with the speaker for the reason that the important function of the critic is underestimated, whereas in fact, in my view, the fact that artist do create those art of lasting value doesn't mean that the critic just create something not as valuable or even without any paticular value. ）

To begin with, it is true that it is the artists (双"it is" 重复了，不过不是大问题，语言美感而已） who created so much artist work and give their emotion to the art work. （感觉上用 “the work of art" 更好，我也不确定）It is Undeniable that all of the art work are created by the artist with their emotion not by the critic. It is Van Gogh who painted the "sun flower" that shows people the sense hope. It is Beethoven who composed those symphonies. It is Shakespeare who created the vivid characters of Julia and Romeo. Without these artists, it is impossible for us to possess so many treasures. Moreover, the artists often use their emotion to create the work and thus these work can show us a lot of things. When we listen to the Beethoven's symphony, most which were composed when he was blind, we will be provided confidence and graveness. When reading the Julia and Romeo, we will know how beautiful can love be. When we enjoy the "sun flower", we see not only a yellow flower, but also wish and hope. Hence, without artists and their emotion, we cannot enjoy so many masterpieces now.

However, we can not overlook the importance of critic, because it is critic that find the potential significance of many work. Most work are created to serve the public. However, most of the citizens are not familiar with art work, therefore, it is difficult for them to learn about the significance of these work. At the same time, most critics have studied the art for a long time and thus they may have a wide knowledge about these work and uncover the value of these work. Admittedly, not one is saint. So are those critics. Hence, at some time, it is inevitable that these critics may have a negative judgment about those work. But the real wonderful work will also be found by those critics after a short time. To shed light on this assertion, one needs look no further than the work of Van Gogh, who is the most famous postimpressionism artists. In his whole life, Van Gogh only sold two of his paintings. Why did he did not success when he was alive. The answer is easy. Since at that time, many critics prefer the impressionism work than the new style of work. However, after several years, it was still those critics who found the lasting value of postimpressionism and thus most of the painting by Van Gogh were sold in a high price. Therefore, we can see the importance of critics.

Moreover, adding further credibility to my position is the fact that critics are necessary for public to select valuable work and teach them how to enjoy them. Nowadays, there are too (删掉）many work published in the modern society. Every year, numerous art work such as movies, books and the like are produced by the editors. Then how can the public choose the ones that have significance from so many work? Therefore, at this time, we need critics.（These are the times when we need the value of critics) These critics have much more time to appreciate these work and evaluate this work. (only because they have more time?)Thus from these opinions we knew what kinds of movies are valuable and thus we choose these work to watch. Moreover, the opinions of the critic can better help us to learn about the content of these work. Through listening to the opinions, we knew that the movie Titanic is not only a disaster film but also show the greatness of love. Through listening to these opinions, we no longer think Hamlet is a pathetic character, the more (the more...the more要连用，不能单用）we will evaluate this character from different aspects. Hence, the critics can help us better understand the features of these work.（虽然语法上可以用，但是understand是动词形式的时候better放在后面更好）

All in all, from what has been discussed above, we can easily draw our conclusion that artists play an important role in creating the art work which has very lasting value for both human culture and civilization development. Meanwhile the critics showed us the potential significant value of these work and help us better select the work. In final analysis, it is the combination of artists and critic that gives the society something of lasting value.

个人之见：写赞成的部分感觉例子很多，分析不够，为什么艺术家制造的艺术品有lasting value，需要加以分析什么可以认为是lasting value.还有就是critics的价值在哪里，为什么show potentiality of some art work 和 help us select art 也是lasting value.就完美了，佩服楼主的速度啊~~~~~~