ibt凤凰涅磐小组 第五次作业

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

4月7日布置第五次作业
Writing:    No.6
if you can change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
这次作文请大家先在记事本中写，然后再copy到word纠错。
Speaking:
1.  If your friends from other country are going to visit your country, where do you suggest them to go? And state your reasons.
2.  Which of the following study method do you prefer? Though online courses or be in traditional classroom setting? And state your reasons.
4月8日中午12点以前交
本次Speaking上传口语录音mp3及文本！练习口音
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=643349&extra=
Listening:
OG,P157,practice set1 &2
Reading:
Delta, Exerice 1.6~1.8

Listening & Reading请大家自觉按时做，按照以往考生的上报，这两个部分没考好多半是练习不够。
这两个部分，只要大家用心去做，再加上时时复习JJ，应该不在话下，当然是在充分练习的前提下。
离toefl ibt只有一个月左右的时间了，大家一定抓紧啊！
请大家把所有作业（writing&speaking+...）放在一个帖子里，谢谢


moon<------>snow
泡沫<-------->amadeus_shea


[ 本帖最后由 ibt凤凰涅磐小组 于 2007-4-13 18:36 编辑 ]

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

4月7日布置第五次作业
Writing:    No.6
if you can change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.


I am a shanghaining, and I am proud of this modern city. It is so lovely and cute to me. However, shanghai is not perfect. It also needs promoting step by step. What I want to change about my hometown is definitely an important thing to this economy center of china----economic environment.

Firstly, a free economic environment can help consumption. If an employee pay same amount of work, the end will be different while he got a low or high salary. If the employee got a low salary, he will feel unhappy and he got a low consume ability simultaneously. Opposite to the depressing man, an high-salary employee will feel happy in working and he got a high consume ability. The high consume ability will animate consumption and markets. The service enterprise will got benefit at first, and the active atmosphere will benefit the companies which back the service enterprise, and the last, the fundamental enterprise---OEM will got the biggest profit, and the whole society will promote more quickly.

The next easy economic environment will bring is huge amount of investment. As we know, more profit usually means more dangerous. If our economic environment allows investment money into one projection more easily, the danger of the project will be push down. And we can see more and more successful projects in our society which will take more investment. For instance, everybody know that there are lots of profit in shanghai F1 grand prix, while we can not invest the project because the state control the project and keep it from investment, and at the last the state got a big cake with average audience rating. Now days, we can take part in the investment of the shanghai F1 grand prix annually in limited extent. We can hold a food or shop tent in racetrack. As a company, you can also pay money to get the title power for the grand prix and so on. You will pay the best service to get profit and the prix will get a good fame. These years, more and more people pay attention to shanghai F1 grand prix, withwhile, the state got a bigger cake.

The last, a good economic environment will make people life brilliant. A good economic environment is not only in “software”, it also need “hardware” which will make people life convenient concurrently. Good economic environment firstly need economic trade center. The building of the center make wide roads, wide internet, wide service come true. However, we residence also benefit from the construction.

In summary, the economic fundament decide the up building. Constructing the fundament of my hometown is the best present to our lovely hometown. And I consistent believe that shanghai will become the second New York-----the capital of the world.


Speaking:
1.  If your friends from other country are going to visit your country, where do you suggest them to go? And state your reasons.


if my foreign friends come to my country, I will suggest them to visit the great wall. It is a magnificent building indeed. The following three reasons will back my suggestion.

First, the great wall represents the Chinese civilization. Just like the pyramids are the symbol of the Egyptian, the great wall is the symbol of china.

Second, the great wall represents the Chinese wise. We can see that Chinese are the people who prefer peace to attraction. Chinese choose tolerant not invasion.

Third, the scene around the great wall is very beautiful and with Chinese character. Foreign friend will love it. I am absolutely sure.

2.  Which of the following study method do you prefer? Though online courses or be in traditional classroom setting? And state your reasons.


I prefer the later, the traditional –classroom teaching. And three reason will support me.

Firstly, I have experienced the online courses, it has its advantage. But I can’t concentrate on it after a period of time. And no one will make me back the right way.

Second, if I have some questions, I can ask teacher and get the answer quickly after class. But the student who takes online course can get the answer.

Last but never the least, can you bear looking at the PC screen 8 hours at least one day? I think no one can endure this unadvisable study method.

The three reasons mentioned above explained why I can’t choose the online course. So, I choose the traditional teaching

[ 本帖最后由 ibt凤凰涅磐小组 于 2007-4-9 18:18 编辑 ]

janesnowUID: 2272881

4月7日布置第五次作业
Writing:    No.6
if you can change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
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My hometown is under fast development. With big foreign companies plunge into my hometown, the streets here are full of the people country wide and world wide.
More cars and more house here, with traffic jam, noise and pollution. One important thing I want to change is the traffic of my hometown.

Most important reason is that the traffic jam waste much time. Eg: My way to school. i can’t control the time and sometimes cause me be late .

Then, traffic jam heavy the pollution of my hometown. Cars pausing in the road send out more harmful gas than when they run, because the motion works more time.

More over, due to the traffic jam, my hometown gets noisy. The driver may not be able to keep patient. Horns crowded the airs.

To change the situation, underground traffic system is helpful. Call people to use public traffic system.
Speaking:
1.  If your friends from other country are going to visit your country, where do you suggest them to go? And state your reasons.
        1.Advice them to go Shanghai.
        1.Due to some films, many foreign still consider China means countryside. it not really known by the world. It shows the modern of China.
        2.Here‘re people from all over the country. Help to know my country efficiently.
        3.With development high way system, easy to go other place of my country.

2.  Which of the following study method do you prefer? Though online courses or be in traditional classroom setting? And state your reasons.
     Prefer traditional classroom.
        1.Can compare with classmate. Change idea.
        2.Contact with teacher directly and vividly, from expressions.
        3.Facing with computer do bad to my skin. As a result, my skin gets old faster.

[ 本帖最后由 janesnow 于 2007-4-8 23:30 编辑 ]

横行泡沫UID: 2267226

作文还在努力中.....先交口语
speaking 1
I will suggest my friend to vist the greatwall because it is the most famous scenery ofour country,when
you stand on the great wall, you will feel proud of my country,
second  the great wall is called the 8th wonder of the world,you will be regret if you do not step on it
when you are in china.
the great wall is consist of the wisdom and  hardworking of chinese people, it is the great works of our human beings
and from the great wall you could see beautiful sight,such the amazing wooden sea.
so i recommend the great wall

speaking 2
i prefer the traditional course to the online course
first the online course do not have regular class time .and it can be efficent you can do other things
while taking the course. No one will whach out you,
second the traditional course is more convenient,if you have any questions you can ask your teacher after the
class,it more direct and useful.
third,  we often have many classmates around us when taking the tradition one .we could make friend while
online course can not. it is build your the ability as a social role
so i think the traditional course is better

[ 本帖最后由 横行泡沫 于 2007-4-8 16:48 编辑 ]

janesnowUID: 2272881

听了录音．．．满清晰的！但是和我一样，不流畅，看语音波形-——一样一顿一顿的，没有老美的抑扬~~还有我们的停顿都有小问题。
想听听ama ,moon, echo有什么看法

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

snow的录音我听过了，声音好轻啊。
说得满清晰的，但是不够流利。（我也不流利，汗，怎么还说别人）
希望下次能把口语文本传上来，有些地方我没听清，也不知道在说什么。

口语2题的第一个和第二个reason貌似一个意思。

今天回来拿书，就先听snow的了，周五再听泡沫的，要是还有其他人，准备一起听掉。

横行泡沫UID: 2267226

writing:

One important I will change about  my hometown is the education.Eucation is significant,because it can
cause great change in different areas.

First I will build many universities in my hometown,then it will attract many students from everywhere.
with more people enter the city,the small city will become a large one.Then the Goverment will renew the
traffic system ,broaden the road ,raise the speed of transportation.To better the educational system,the
city will build many different constructions associated with the universities,such as museums cinemas,parks
After build the universities,the city will enroll best teachers and professors from nationalwide.The related
facilities will come up ,such as library laboratory.

More talented people will eager to attend the city life .With more educated people,we could raise the standard
of the civilization level of the citizen. Educated people do great contribution to the economy,and raise the
GDP of the city.The living level is also raised then.

with the student from different provinces,we have a mixed and more advanced culture here. We learn from
others ,compete with different people, promote the culture to innovate.

After study here for several years ,many students may want to stay here and live here.So they become a part
of the labor of the city.with the knowledge they learned from the university,they are much strenghened,and
do better job. the city could use them as a precious human resourse,when develop the city
So build colleges and change the educational system ,pay great attention to the public education ,will do
significant reward ,if you do put in enough investment.

amadeus_sheaUID: 2231224

I was born and grew up in a city settled in west China, named Chengdu. As one of the most important cities in west China, Chengdu has experienced a dramatically rapid development these years due to the policy of Development of Western China, established by the central government. While being much more modernized day by day, still, there is something to which people in Chengdu have to pay attention. From my point of view, one of them is the protection of historical resorts.

With a history of over three thousand years, Chengdu is very famous for its traditional and historical culture. For example, as the capital city of kingdom Shu during the time of Three Kingdoms, there are many temples and shrines left from that time telling us how prosperous this city used to be. Also, there are streets and houses built in Ming and Qing Dynasty in which still live people today. All of them are the witnesses of our history and they should be well protected.

Secondly, these historic resorts are attractive to tourists. An investigation suggested that, every year, millions of tourists from other provinces and other countries come to visit Chengdu and they contribute a lot to the annual GDP of this city. Thus, tourism has become one of the key industries of Chengdu. As most of the tourism come for the traditional culture here, those historical resorts have become a unique point in the tourism industry of Chengdu. To protect them well, on the other hand, can reinforce the attraction of our city and also, is benefit to the fiscal revenue of the city.

Last, the reason for which I believe we should pay attention to the protection of the historical resorts is that some of them have already been damaged and still lots of them are in danger. According to a government report of last year, 2 main historic streets in Chengdu, which have a history dates back to Ming Dynasty, have disappeared due to the expansion of real estate industry and 30 percent of the historic temples of Kingdom Shu are experiencing erosion from the polluted environment in different extents. It is the high time we should be aware that we shall lose those pressures if the trend continues. Thus, the protection of those historical resorts is rather crucial.

We love our cities, not only because it is modernized, but also the history and culture of our city with which we grew up. We enjoy those amazing sights left by our ancestors, and n

ow, we have to consider, what we should give to our posterities.

口语附件怎么传阿？

[ 本帖最后由 amadeus_shea 于 2007-4-13 18:55 编辑 ]

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

moon<------>snow
泡沫<-------->amadeus_shea

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

To 泡沫：
   下次请把所有作业（writing&speaking+...）放在一个帖子里

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

这次作业今晚我会批好，大家最好也今天搞定。
第6次作业会在晚上8点布置好

[ 本帖最后由 ibt凤凰涅磐小组 于 2007-4-13 19:45 编辑 ]

横行泡沫UID: 2267226

批改a madeus 的作文：

I was born and grew up in a city settled in west China, named Chengdu. As one of the most important city(cities) in west China, Chengdu has experienced a dramatically rapid development these years due to the policy of Development of Western China, established by the central government. While being much more modernized day by day, still, there is something to(这个to移到attention后面感觉好一点) which people in Chengdu have to pay attention. From my point of view, one of them is the protection of historical resorts.（应该是resourse）
With a history of over three thousand years, Chengdu is very famous for its traditional and historical culture. For example, as the capital city of kingdom Shu during the time of Three Kingdoms, there are many temples and shrines left from that time telling us how prosperous this city used to be. Also, there are streets and houses built in Ming and Qing Dynasty（Dynasties 复数） in which still live people today. All of them are the witnesses of our history and they should be well protected.
Secondly, these historic resorts（resourses） are attractive to tourists. An investigation suggested that, every year, millions of tourists from other provinces and other countries come to visit Chengdu and the (the 去掉或者改成 they)contribute a lot to the annual GDP of this city. Thus, tourism has become one of the key industries of Chengdu. As most of the tourism（应该是tourists） come for the traditional culture here, those historical resorts（resourse） have become a unique point in the tourism industry of Chengdu. To protect them well, on the other hand, can reinforce the attraction of our city and also, is benefit to the fiscal revenue of the city.
Last, the reason for which I believe we should pay attention to the protection of the historical resorts（resourse） is that some of them have already been damaged and still lots of them are in danger. According to a government report of last year, 2 main historic streets in Chengdu, which have a history dates back to Ming Dynasty, have disappeared due to the expansion of real estate industry and 30 percent of the historic temples of Kingdom Shu are experiencing erosion from the polluted environment in different extents. It is the high time we should be aware that we shall lose those pressures（应该用这个词preciousness） if the trend continues. Thus, the protection of those historical resorts（resourse） is rather crucial.
We love our cities, not only because it is modernized, but also the history and culture of our city with which we grew up. We enjoy those amazing sights left by our ancestors, and now, we have to consider, what we should give to our posterities.

好文！！！

[ 本帖最后由 横行泡沫 于 2007-4-13 19:22 编辑 ]

ibt凤凰涅磐小组UID: 2308768

moon批改 泡沫作文：

One important I will change about  my hometown is the education. Education is significant, because it can cause the great change in different areas.

First I will build many universities in my hometown, then(thus) it will attract many students from everywhere. with more people enter the city, the small city will become a large one. Then the Goverment will renew the traffic system ,broaden the road ,raise the speed of transportation. To better the educational system(make the educational system better), the
city will build many different constructions associated with the universities, such as museums cinemas, parks After having built the universities, the city will enroll best teachers and professors from national wide. The related facilities will come up ,such as library laboratory.

More talented people will eager to attend the city life .With more educated people, we could raise the standard of the civilization level of the citizen. Educated people do great contribution to the economy, and raise the GDP of the city. The living level is also raised then. with the student from different provinces, we have a mixed and more advanced culture here. We can learn from each others , compete with different people, promote the culture to innovate.

After study here for several years, many students may want to stay here and live here. So they become a part of the labor of the city. with the knowledge they learned from the university, they are much strengthened(full of the power of knowledge), and do better job(finish the task better). the city could use them as a precious human resourse(resource),

when develop the city, So build colleges and change the educational system ,pay great attention to the public education ,will do significant reward ,if you do put in enough investment.

(the most important thing to my hometown which I want to change most is the education system. If we pay enough attention and investment on the public education, we will got a significant reward which will benefit us a lot.)


思路不错，字数太少。

[ 本帖最后由 ibt凤凰涅磐小组 于 2007-4-13 22:25 编辑 ]

amadeus_sheaUID: 2231224

谢谢泡沫哦~ 用resorts是指旅游胜地的意思哦~
你的作文我尽快改出来~

amadeus_sheaUID: 2231224

I am a shanghaining, and I am proud of this modern city. It is so lovely and cute to me. However, shanghai is not perfect. It also(still应该好点) needs promoting(improvement?) step by step. What I want to change about my hometown is definitely an important thing to this economy center of china----economic environment.

Firstly, a free economic environment can help(用inspire好些吧，我个人认为) consumption. If an employee pay same amount of work(没太理解什么意思...), the end will be different while he got(gets) a low or high salary. If the employee got a low salary, he will feel unhappy and he got a low consume ability simultaneously. Opposite to the depressing(depressed) man, an high-salary employee will feel happy in working and he got a high consume ability. The high consume ability will animate consumption and markets. The service enterprise will got(get) benefit at first, and the active atmosphere will benefit the companies which back the service enterprise(?), and the last, the fundamental enterprise---OEM will got(get) the biggest profit, and the whole society will promote(improve?) more quickly.

The next, an easy economic environment will bring is(a) huge amount of investment. As we know, more profit usually means more dangerous(danger). If our economic environment allows investment money(删除) into one projection more easily, the danger of the project will be push(pushed) down. And we can see more and more successful projects in our society which will take(用attract吧) more investment. For instance, everybody know that there are lots of profit in shanghai F1 grand prix, while we can not invest the project because the state control the project and keep it from investment, and at the last the state got a big cake with average audience rating. Now days(Nowadays), we can take part in the investment of the shanghai F1 grand prix annually in limited extent. We can hold a food or shop tent in racetrack. As a company, you can also pay money to get the title power for the grand prix and so on. You will pay the best service to get profit and the prix will get a good fame. These years, more and more people pay attention to shanghai F1 grand prix, withwhile(?), the state got a bigger cake.

The last, a good economic environment will make people's life brilliant. A good economic environment is not only in “software”, it also need “hardware” which will make people life convenient concurrently. Good economic environment firstly need economic trade center. The building of the center make wide roads, wide internet, and wide service come true. However, we residence(residents) also benefit from the construction.

In summary, the economic fundament decides the up building. Constructing the fundament of my hometown is the best present to our lovely hometown. And I consistent believe that shanghai will become the second New York-----the capital of the world.