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发表于 2007-10-15 20:48:31 |只看该作者

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1. It's fine to write like that, though you may made a couple of grammar mistakes;d:

2. I would probably give the person a willow branch. Because in Chinese culture, a branch of willow the same thing as asking the guest to stay when considering the Chinese word of it in poems, and poems are part of the great culture in Chinese history.
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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Already Revised, plz check:-)
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-15 21:59:24 |只看该作者
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-749787-1-1.html
豆豆同学,有空的话,也帮我偶看看吧,谢谢了 ,21号就考了

[ 本帖最后由 zjx021 于 2007-10-16 15:10 编辑 ]
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OK, I'll just check it tmrw. really having a hard time about my apps... -_-|||
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-15 22:31:51 |只看该作者
关于A/B的写作,空了帮偶看看

豆豆加油咯,Thanks

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发表于 2007-10-16 01:23:08 |只看该作者
i try to absorb your advice, but not sure if i do better or worse, could me help again?

by the way, can you tell me what scores i can get according to your experience?

thanks a thousand.

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发表于 2007-10-16 19:09:09 |只看该作者
今天头疼。。。嗓子也哑了。。。不知道最近做什么坏事了。。。-_-|||
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-16 19:47:49 |只看该作者
注意休息拉~
GRE/TOEFL-->美版-->VISA-->行前-->Everywhere or Nowhere?
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一路走来,徜徉于各个版之间

只有工程科学版
,始终不变
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是啊,好好休息 拉
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发表于 2007-10-16 21:31:39 |只看该作者
我不行了。。。晕死了。。。估计是感冒了。。。

今天实在不能改作文了。。。对不住大家了!

感冒好了一定帮大家看!大家加油啊~~

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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-17 20:23:25 |只看该作者
顶起来~今天感觉好多了,哈~改作文咯
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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写的很不错^_^
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Life is like a 2πr.

Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. We ask ourselves, Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous? Actually, who are you not to be? We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same.

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发表于 2007-10-18 01:00:28 |只看该作者
thanks, this is my new works!

btw,i'm sorry i can't accord to the format totally, since the number of my topic is nethier JIJING nor OG, i got my topic list from a book, so please...

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发表于 2007-10-18 12:34:02 |只看该作者
把偶的地址留下,请豆豆指教. https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-750440-1-2.html

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发表于 2007-10-18 13:22:17 |只看该作者

我也写了篇关于运气的~

感觉抽象话题自己最不喜欢写~刚刚看了豆豆帮别人改的那个,我也去写了篇一个话题的,麻烦有空能帮我看写不?
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-750709-1-1.html

现在发贴数不够,好象不能用投票,连换自定义头像都不行啊~我要多发贴~~~~~

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