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发表于 2003-1-20 00:52:27 |显示全部楼层
what most human beings really want is not discovery and change but reassurance.
life is just like a game. The problem is that it's not how you play the game, it's how the game plays you.

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发表于 2003-1-20 01:04:39 |显示全部楼层

等着,

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发表于 2003-1-20 20:34:12 |显示全部楼层

第一次写提纲

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1. it is not reassurance but change which  advanced human beings' life
            example :  Columbus's discovery of the new land - America  brought the global trade
                             Our life has changed dramatically due to the discovery of electricity
2. discovery and change is more challanging
            example:   if no change ,the life became dull
                             add color to the common life
3. Although sometimes reassurance is nessessay, changes shouldn't be abandoned
            example:   old people may prefer reassurance to change

第一次写,写完了就想吐,看了几篇范文,我就很疑惑,那些人也太牛了,45分钟写得那么好
郁闷呀,不过总算有第一次了,万事开头难吗.
星海独自抚瑶琴,
际遇纷乱觅知音.
争锋谁与双剑出,
霸业空留后人吟.
还记得STARCRAFT 么?

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发表于 2003-1-20 21:42:09 |显示全部楼层
Having a look at all these several thousand years’ history of human beings, we could notice without difficulty that people are looking for everything innovative, more interesting, more convenient, etc. So it is quite unwise to say that what most human beings really want is not discovery and change but reassurance.

Discovery and change, though may be slight, are inevitable after all. The apparent thing is time, which never stops. Even if all the watches and clocks stop, time still passes by. And chemical studies show that molecules consisting of a matter are in perpetual movement. So does discovery, which is always accidental, hence inevitable. Except some try to discovery something by his own wish, which is not assuredly to be successful, most discoveries are occasional. Take the discovery of gravitation by Newton for example, if he didn’t sit under the apple tree that day, he might not find the physical conception, because even if he sat there another day, what he thought, the situation of his brain cells might be different so that to off no chance for him to find the gravitation.

Probably because of such property of incessant changing of matters in this universe, people have a natural inclination to look for change and discovery. It is always impossible for people to be satisfied with the present state as Newton to be satisfied with noting the phenomenon but not knowing the theory. So we can say that the discovery of gravitation is not only occasional, but also destined. It is Newton’s subjective will to think about the reason that prompts him to make the discovery. Nowadays, as people have undergone so much and so great convenience that change and discovery bring to them, they are eagerer to make more changes and discoveries which will lead them a better life. It is no surprising if a new product of computer or mobile phone containing an interesting function is reported. People are inured to this fast-changing world.

However, in certain cases people will be sure to want reassurance, that’s why they buy insurance, they want themselves to keep healthy, and their wealthy secure. Even more, we want the earth to go back to the original beautiful one without damage and pollution to the environment, with keeping the advanced situation. They are waiting for endeavor of all human beings.

In short, we should always cherish hope in the change and discovery, like Scarlet said in Gone With The Wind, ‘Tomorrow, after all, is another day!’------a brand new day!
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发表于 2003-1-20 22:16:29 |显示全部楼层
哈哈~~~GTERYY你最后的结尾很好啊~~喜欢 :P

FLYING,第一次写写得很不错啊~~就这样把你的提纲发展开,就可以写一篇很不错的文章了~ +U+U
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