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Q: Some people think children should obey the rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think that children controlled too much can’t deal with problem themselves. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

正文：
Children education is always a big issue on and off campus. There is a heated debate about the degree of adults guidance on children.

  Approximately 30 years ago, there was a public consensus that children should do whatever their parents or teachers ask them to do. It was the basic as being a good child with good manners. It seemed that the high-quality implement of assigned work is the guarantee of a promising future. Their parents hard already drawn a blueprint for the children and what they needed to do was following it. As for the children obeying the rule is the cut shout for success, otherwise, it would be harder and harder.

  However, opinions are different among those who advocate the free development of children. They believe that the complete obey of predecessors’ orders can destroy the creativity of children. They are too reliable on their parents to make their own decision and host their own lives. Children are not the robots that can work directly to the order without any emotions. They have to learn the critical thinking and the ability of solving problems independently. It is by no means to be regarded as perfect just by finishing a tooled task.
   
    As for as I’m concerned, certain rules such as the national law, the school instructions and the family principle should be fully respected and obeyed. Adults, however, have no right to control children’s life by making every single to educate yourselves to think creatively , through offering suggestions and advice. It is children’s duty to make decisions for themselves and shoulder the responsibility of their decisions.