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本帖最后由 zscarl 于 2009-5-26 09:10 编辑
Cam5-test3-task2 (43 min, 319 words)
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged, others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion. (欢迎猛拍, 请打分. 感觉这个题目不好写, 如果写2个看法的优点和缺点, 将有4个方面可写, 望大虾赐教)
In current society, two divided views on our children to become useful adults have drawn widespread argument, some people think that children should build up a sense of competition, while others prefer to promote co-operation among children. I agree with the second view.
To illustrate the advantages of co-operation, firstly, it will nurture our children to appreciate team work in the future, specifically, such team work is compulsory for a lot of work such as construction, ship building etc, secondly, it will equip our children with better social responsibilities when co-operating with each other, it is obvious that they will realize their inconsiderable act will affect the while team, therefore they will be more responsible on their decisions and behaviors. Lastly scientific research and development can be more efficient with the co-operating among researchers. For instance, we all understand Intel is the most famous CPU maker, but it cannot be successful without the close co-operation among its engineers and researchers, with more knowledge sharing and ideas exchanging, the progress can be improved dramatically compared with individual work.
However, there are certain drawbacks to introduce co-operation to children, on the on hand, children will have difficulties to position themselves in a team, more specifically, it may happen that nobody wants to lead the team or everyone wants to be the leader, that will certainly reduce team’s efficiency and performance when the final decision cannot satisfy most of the team members, on the other hand, it may discourage continuous personal improvement, to the individuals, it will make them feel their effort has very limited effect on the overall progress, but with proper team organization, awarding systems, such limitation can be minimized.
In summary, to teach our children to co-operate among themselves will make them become more useful adults despite some downsides. I believe that with proper encouragement incentive and systemic organization, those disadvantages of co-operation can be reduced to ignorable level.
Cam5-test4-task2 (37min, 256 words)
Research indicates that characteristics we are born with have much influence on our personality and development than experience we may have in our life. (欢迎猛拍, 请打分. 为节省时间查看语错误, 故意减少文章字数)
In contemporary society, argument on the key effect to influence our personality and development has drawn increased attention, some people think that experience we have is more important than the characteristics we are born, I prefer the former view.
The experience we have during our growth plays the most significant role on our personality and development. To illustrate further, firstly, training is widely believed to affect our development vitally, take academic training for an example, every country has their educations systems to develop people’s potential, while some countries even rule legalization to enforce compulsory education to certain level. Secondly, one’s personality can be changed dramatically upon the different environment. For instance, on will become extrovert surrounded by friends, family members with similar characters. Lastly individual effort can change the natural weakness become to strength specifically, blind people has more sensitive hearing, some famous musicians are the good proves.
Admittedly, genetic characteristics can also influence our personality and development, On the one hand, high IQ parents more likely to have high IQ babies, it can be an important advantages for their development compared with normal IQ children, On the other hand, physical appearance can affect children’s growth too, if one has remarkable height, he/she will have higher change to be an outstanding basketball player, however, it al so need proper training, personal hard work as well as interest.
In summary, the characteristic we born with can somehow influence our personality and development, but it is not so important as experience such as training, environment, and individual effort. |
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