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Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy the friendship.
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Some people think that when their friends are doing something wrong, they would prefer to connive the behaviors instead of persuading the friends. The reasons that preventing the friends doing the things they like would destroy the friendship between them. Although no one can deny the unhappiness others' advise would bring, I would want to say that if I am facing with the same situation, I would choose to stop the improper actions for some reasons I would list as following.

Firstly,if we don not do some action to stop our friends, they would make mistakes all the time in the future. In our daily lives, everyone would make the mistakes.There is a Chinese tradition saying that person is not the God, so how can hemake no mistakes? In fact, even the most famous man can not avoid the errors.However, we should not make the same mistake again and again. When we seems to agree with the wrong friends, they might think that he is right all the time.So at last, perhaps the same mistake would happen to him once again or for several times. Owing to that, it is impossible for the friends to be asuccessful man.

Secondly,saying something to persuade the friends would teach them how to listen to others' advice. In the history of human beings, almost every famous person wasthe one who can listen to others' proposal and consider others' feeling. It is the foundation of success. To be a good friend, we should help our friends to succeed as much as we can. Thus, we have the responsibility to let them knowthe importance of listening to others. For example, one of my roommates was the person who hated everyone who criticize him, which caused him not harmonious with others. But after he entering the university, all of the roommates tried to communicate with him when he was wrong. As a result, he became happy to listen to others and get along well with everyone in my class.


Inaddition, the true friendship would not be destroyed by some unhappy words oractions. In some situations, the relationship between the friends would be harmonious as before if one of them says some words others don not like to hear. However, some days later, the sound friendship would recovery as good asbefore. The real friendship would not be influenced by the minor disturbance.In my high school, I pointed out the errors that did by my best friend. In the beginning, he did not like to talk with me. However, some days later, he came to me and told me that he known he was wrong. The real friendship would not be broken if you are doing the right things.

Of course, under certain conditions, we can ignore the friends' mistakes. But, in most time, we should try to persuade our friends to do the wrong things.Indeed, we are doing the things that are good for him. It would help us makethe friendship more reliable.

liunian1031UID: 2670872

Some people think that when their friends are doing something wrong, they would prefer to connive the behaviors instead of persuading the friends. The reasons that preventing the friends doing the things they like would destroy the friendship between them. Although no one can deny the unhappiness others' advise would bring, I would want to say that if I am facing with the same situation, I would choose to stop the improper actions for some reasons I would list as following.


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Firstly,if we don not do some action to stop our friends, they would make mistakes all the time in the future（这里说下the same mistakes更好吧~）. In our daily lives（看着有点怪，这个daily life有复数么？）, everyone would make the mistakes.There is a Chinese tradition saying that person is not the God, so how can hemake no mistakes? In fact, even the most famous man can not avoid the errors.However, we should not make the same mistake again and again. When we seems to agree with the wrong friends, they might think that he is right all the time（注意人称）.So at last, perhaps the same mistake would happen to him once again or for several times. Owing to that, it is impossible for the friends to be asuccessful man. 5 c- U9 I# P* H* f5 b; p

Secondly,saying something to persuade the friends would teach them how to listen to others' advice. In the history of human beings, almost every famous person wasthe one who can listen to others' proposal and consider others' feeling. It is the foundation of success. To be a good friend, we should help our friends to succeed as much as we can. Thus, we have the responsibility to let them knowthe importance of listening to others. For example, one of my roommates was the person who hated everyone who criticize him, which caused him not harmonious with others. But after he entering (entered) the university, all of the roommates tried to communicate with him when he was wrong. As a result, he became happy to listen to others and get along well with everyone in my class.

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Inaddition, the true friendship would not be destroyed by some unhappy words oractions（没查到这个词，写错了没？）. In some situations, the relationship between the friends would be harmonious as before if one of them says some words others don not like to hear. However, some days later, the sound friendship would recovery as good asbefore. The real friendship would not be influenced by the minor disturbance.In my high school, I pointed out the errors that did by my best friend. In the beginning, he did not like to talk with me. However, some days later, he came to me and told me that he known he was wrong. The real friendship would not be broken if you are doing the right things.


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Of course, under certain conditions, we can ignore the friends' mistakes. But, in most time, we should try to persuade our friends (not) to do the wrong things.Indeed, we are doing the things that are good for him. It would help us makethe friendship more reliable.


527字是不是太多了点……总体不错，注意下笔误~例子都挺得体的~~加油~

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Some people think that when their friends are doing something wrong, they would prefer to connive the behaviors instead of persuading the friends. The reasons that preventing the friends doing the things they like would destroy the friendship between them. Although no one can deny the unhappiness others' advise (advice) would bring, I would want to say that if I am facing with the same situation, I would choose to stop the improper actions for some reasons I would list as following.

Firstly, if we don not do some action（这个表达不是很好，采取行动：take action） to stop our friends, they would make mistakes all the time(依旧是表达不好，太绝对了) in the future. In our daily lives, everyone would make the mistakes（重复得太多了）. There is a Chinese tradition saying that person is not the God, so how can he make no mistakes? In fact, even the most famous man（有没有名跟犯错没啥关系：most intelligent person） can not avoid the errors. However, we should not make the same mistake again and again. When we seems to agree with the wrong friends, they might think that he is right all the time. So at last, perhaps the same mistake would happen to him once again or for several times. Owing to that, it is impossible for the friends to be a successful man.

Secondly, saying something to persuade the friends would teach them how to listen to others' advice. In the history of human beings, almost every famous person was the one who can listen to others' proposal and consider others' feeling. It is the foundation of success. To be a good friend, we should help our friends to succeed as much as we can. Thus, we have the responsibility to let them know the importance of listening to others. For example, one of my roommates was the person who hated everyone who criticize(~s) him, which caused him not harmonious with others. But after he entering the university, all of the roommates tried to communicate with him when he was wrong. As a result, he became happy to listen to others and get along well with everyone in my class.


In addition, the true friendship would not be destroyed by some unhappy words or actions. In some situations, the relationship between the friends would be harmonious as before if one of them says some words others don not like to hear. However, some days later, the sound friendship would recovery as good as before. The real friendship would not be influenced by the minor disturbance. In my high school, I pointed out the errors that did by my best friend. In the beginning, he did not like to talk with me. However, some days later, he came to me and told me that he known he was wrong. The real friendship would not be broken if you are doing the right things

Of course, under certain conditions, we can ignore the friends' mistakes. But, in most time, we should try to persuade our friends to do the wrong things(逻辑错误). Indeed, we are doing the things that are good for him. It would help us make the friendship more reliable.