进军美利坚作文小组作业by tracy

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Practic 6 Integrated Writing
According to the lecture, the speaker points out some flaws of the three reasons to the transition from cottage industry to the factory industry mentioned in the reading.

Firstly, the speaker says that technology is not as popular as the reading described. In the earlier industrilization, the owner of factories concerned more about hiring more workers rather than using machines, because the more workers they hired, the production they would gain. Moreover, the steam is still on experiment, and it had taken a long time to put it in practice.

Secondly,the speaker takes a case of another place of UK as an example to clerify that the legal protection for private property had nothing to do with the transition.

Finally, the speaker asserts that the production costs hasn't been reduced at all. Contrarily, in the early industrilization, it took more cost for land expansion, factory building, hiring superviser and switching from cottage production to factory production.

第一次写,感觉没啥可说的,凑了156个字,求很拍:handshake

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Firstly, the speaker says that technology is not as popular as the reading described. In the earlier industrilization, the owner of factories concerned more about hiring more workers rather than using machines, because the more workers they hired, the production they would gain. Moreover, the steam and other machines are/ is still on experiment, and it had taken a long time to put it in practice.! I* I& _4 e, r/ Z. [- B
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Secondly,the speaker takes a case of another place of UK as an example to clerify that the legal protection for private property had nothing to do with the transition. 这点我听的有出入

Finally, the speaker asserts that the production costs hasn't been reduced at all. Contrarily, in the early industrilization, it took more cost for land expansion, factory building, hiring superviser and switching from cottage production to factory production. 写的蛮简洁的不过点都说到了. 156是正常范围, 不怕他..!

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According to the lecture, the speaker points out some flaws of the three reasons to the transition from cottage industry to the factory industry mentioned in the reading.

Firstly, the speaker says that technology is not as popular as the reading described. In the earlier industrilization, the owner of factories concerned more about hiring more workers rather than using machines, because the more workers they hired, the production they would gain. Moreover, the steam(这里应该是strem engine吧？) is still on experiment, and it had taken a long time to put it in practice.
Secondly,the speaker takes a case of another place of UK(这个地方我听的是holland,厄。不太清楚) as an example to clerify that the legal protection for private property had nothing to do with the transition.
Finally, the speaker asserts that the production costs hasn't been reduced at all. Contrarily, in the early industrilization, it took more cost for land expansion, factory building, hiring superviser and switching from cottage production to factory production.

最后可以加个总结的句子哈~~

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tracy的第二次作业（本来应该是第三次的:L ）请下手，别客气！

Practice 7

The reading informs us that the decline of reading literature in America has three negative effecets. However, in the lecture, the speaker think this phenomenon is not necessarily so bad to the society as that the reading described.

Firstly, the decline of literature reading hasn't decrease people's ability to think as a whole. The speaker points out that except for literature, other types of books such as science fiction and storical reports could also inspire poeple's creation. Therefore, people just have many other way to develop their ability to think.

Secondly, the lack of interest in literature may not lead to decline of cultural level of the nation. Today's multimedia has provide people more choices. They could go to cinema, listen to records and watch vedios. The diversity of media has bloomed the cultural level of the nation.

Finally, the speaker admits that the decline of literature is a problem for the English literature. However, he think we should blame the writers rather than readers, because morden literature are not understandable. Hence, more and more readers choose not to read them.

Based on the evidences above, the speaker concludes that the decline of literature has no negative effects on the society.

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The reading informs us that the decline of reading literature in America has three negative effecets. However, in the lecture, the speaker think(s) this phenomenon is not necessarily so bad to the society as that the reading described.

Firstly, the decline of literature reading hasn't decrease people's ability to think as a whole. The speaker points out that except for literature, other types of books such as science fiction and storical reports could also inspire poeple's creation. Therefore, people just have many other way(s) to develop their ability to think.

Secondly, the lack of interest in literature may not lead to decline of cultural level of the nation. Today's multimedia has provide people more choices. They could go to cinema, listen to records and watch vedios. The diversity of media has bloomed the cultural level of the nation.

Finally, the speaker admits that the decline of literature is a problem for the English literature. However, he think we should blame the writers rather than readers, because morden literature are(is) not understandable. Hence, more and more readers choose not to read them(it).

Based on the evidences above, the speaker concludes that the decline of literature has no negative effects on the society.

总评：感觉你这几段都写得很少，建议每段都先说文章的观点，再说对应的教授的反对意见。总结可以不写~~~~~~~总之写的不错，没什么大错误。不过你的第三段的例子跟听力原文有出入~~~~

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The reading informs us that the decline of reading literature in America has three negative effecets. However, in the lecture, the speaker thinkS this phenomenon is not necessarily so bad to the society as that the reading described./ p6 ]4 Z3 t4 d. Y/ _7 r4 k
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Firstly, the decline of literature reading hasn't decrease people's ability to think as a whole. The speaker points out that except for literature,(删) other types of books such as science fiction and storical reports could also inspire poeple's creation. Therefore, people just（？） have many other ways to develop their ability to think.

Secondly, the lack of interest in literature may not lead to decline of cultural level of the nation. Today's multimedia has provide people more choices. They could go to cinema, listen to records（radio?） and watch vedios. The diversity of media has bloomed the cultural level of the nation.

Finally, the speaker admits that the decline of literature is a problem for the English literature. However, he think we should blame the writers rather than readers, because morden literature are not understandable. Hence, more and more readers choose not to read them.
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Based on the evidences above, the speaker concludes that the decline of literature has no negative effects on the society.
（总体都说全了 小错都是）

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tracy的9.5作业

In my opinion, the ability to establish a good relationship with students is more important than professional knowledge for a good teacher. The reasons are as follow:

Firstly, It can't be denied that knowledge is one important aim of education and professional knowledge is basic requirement for a teacher. However, a more fundamental task of education is to develop the learning skill of students. Therefore, teachers don't have to be Mr. Know-all. One important responsbility of teachers is to teach students how to find methods to learn, think and analysis by themselves. For example, a teacher of mathematics course doesn't have to know all answers to his questions, but he could inspire students to try and find answers.

Secondly, a good relationship between teacher and student could help student form interests on learning. Common sense informs us that we usually learn more from the teacher who we like. For example, a nice and humorous teacher's class could always attractes students' attention and increase the efficiency of learning. While, a teacher who is thought boring or tough by his students is always frustrated by little interest to his teaching and inappropriate behaviors in the class. Hence, a good relationship makes students be willing to listen to teacher's advices and follow their guidance.

Finally, another vital purpose of education is to help students to develop personality, and teacher plays an important role in this process. A teacher willing to listen to and understant student is always respected by them, even by students who are thought hopeless. Teachers advice could help them realize their mistakes and change. The spiritual guidance from teacher could dramtically change their life in the future. However, without a good relationship, they lose the key to the mind of student.

In sum, considering the purpose of education and responsbilities of teachers, except for good professional knowledge, teachers who could better get on with their students are more possible to make students develop well.

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tracy 的9.7作业 高分practice 8 早起的鸟儿有虫吃，哇咔咔...请动手吧！

According to the lecture, the speaker thinks that importing species are not necessarily to be harmful as the reading passages described. Then she gives three reasons as follows:

Firstly, the introduced species do not destroy native ones. The speaker points out that the eliminating of local species was largely caused by pollutions and infection diseases rather than by competitiveness with introduced species for life resources. The reading provides no evidence to prove that it was the result of importing sepicies.

Secondly, the speaker reasons that the imported species don't always destroy the ecosystem of region. Well controled introduced species could even bring about benefits to local ecological balance. They could provide more agriculture base and could help people manage environment better.

Finally, the imported species don't impose economic burden on the region. The speaker says that the mesquit trees not only has become the important shelter for animals of Mexican desert, but also has changed the argicultural condition of local environment and helped local people receive more economic gains.

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9.8 Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When it comes to the issue about daily homework, many people would relate to children's lack of enthusiasm for homework or overload of students. However, in my opinion, appropriate homework is necessary for students, because it plays an important role in the education.

First of all, homework provides a good oppotunity for students to put the knowledge in class into practice at home. Through thinking, gathering materials and analysis, they learn how to reason, study and solve assignments on their own. Moreover, homework provides students oppotunities to develop their time manage skill, study habit, self-decipline and sense of responsibility , which are essential for their independent study in the future.

Secondly, homework serves as a bridge between school and parents. Through supervising and helping children with their homework, parents keep being informed what is taught in school and participate in education of school. Hence, homework fullfills the gap between school and home and keeps education in continuing at home.

Finally, homework is not simply busy-work for students. It is school and teacher's responsbility to assign suitable amount and different types of homework to students.The lack of enthusiasm of homework should be contributed to too much homework which has frustrated students. An effective homework usually take the them few hours rather than a whole day or even longer. In addition, homework should have many different types. Practice homework such as repeating words and calculation help student to increase comprehension of knowledge in classes. Extension homework such as writing a paper and doing a project help student to learn by themselves. Therefore, the effects of homework highly depend on its quality.

In sum, as an essential part of education, homework largely influents the development of students. It is necessary to assign appropriate homework to students every day.

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According to the lecture, the speaker thinks that importing species are（这里改用is,如果用are 则是imported species） not necessarily to be harmful as the reading passages described. Then she gives three reasons as follows:


Firstly, the introduced species do not destroy native ones. The speaker points out that the eliminating of local species was largely caused by pollutions(pollution) and infection(_infectious)  diseases rather than by competitiveness with introduced species for life resources. The reading provides no evidence to prove that it was the result of importing sepicies

Secondly, the speaker reasons that the imported species don't always destroy the ecosystem of region. Well controled introduced species could even bring about benefits to local ecological balance. They could provide more agriculture base and could help people manage environment better.

/ M& r, O: R; O( V7 \Finally, the imported species don't impose economic burden on the region. The speaker says that the mesquit trees not only has become the important shelter for animals of Mexican desert, but also has changed the argicultural condition of local environment and helped local people receive more economic gains.


总体不错哈！加油

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9.9 高分120 practice9
The reading passages introduce us three theories explaining how bids navigate. However, in the lecture, the speaker doubts these theories by three reasons.

Firstly,the sun and the star may not help birds find their home. The speaker points out that most birds migrate at night, so the sun couldn't guide birds find the right orientation to home. Moreover, exept only one species is known for sure that they could use star compass, there is no evidence support that other species could also use the star.

Secondly, landmark may do nothing about the birds navigation. The speaker reasons that only birds have travelled before, could they remember the landmark on the way. However, birds that are puted in a totally strange place still could find their way home. Hence, landmark may not be the reason to birds' navigation.

Finally, the magetic sensor of birds is too limit to be used to find orientations. Even though magnetic sensor could help birds to know south and north, but the destination of birds is complicated. Even human can't find the right way using equipment like birds magnetic sensors.

In sum, based on the evidences above, the speaker concludes that the three theories mentioned in the reading material are in doubt.

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9.8 Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When it comes to the issue about daily homework, many people would relate to children's lack of enthusiasm for homework or overload of students. However, in my opinion, appropriate homework is necessary for students, because it plays an important role in the education.

First of all, homework provides a good oppotunity（opportunity） for students to put the knowledge in class into practice at home. Through thinking, gathering materials and analysis, they learn how to reason, study and solve assignments on their own. Moreover, homework provides students oppotunities（opportunities） to develop their time manage skill, study habit, self-decipline and sense of responsibility , which are essential for their independent study in the future.

Secondly, homework serves as a bridge between school and parents. Through supervising and helping children with their homework, parents keep being informed what is taught in school and participate in education of school. Hence, homework fullfills the gap between school and home and keeps education in continuing at home.

Finally, homework is not simply busy-work for students. It is school and teacher's responsbility to assign suitable amount and different types of homework to students.The lack of enthusiasm of homework should be contributed to too much homework which has frustrated students. An effective homework usually take the（多余了） them few hours rather than a whole day or even longer. In addition, homework should have many different types. Practice homework such as repeating words and calculation help student to increase comprehension of knowledge in classes. Extension homework such as writing a paper and doing a project help student to learn by themselves. Therefore, the effects of homework highly depend on its quality.

In sum, as an essential part of education, homework largely influents（influences） the development of students. It is necessary to assign appropriate homework to students every day.

总的，写得挺好的，就是单词的拼写和词性要搞清楚

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The reading passages introduce us three theories explaining how bids navigate. However, in the lecture, the speaker doubts these theories by three reasons.

Firstly,the sun and the star may not help birds find their home. The speaker points out that most birds migrate at night, so the sun couldn't guide birds finding the right orientation to home. Moreover, exept only one species is known for sure that they could use star compass, there is no evidence supporting that other species could also use the star.

Secondly, landmark may do nothing about the birds navigation. The speaker reasons that only birds have travelled before, could they remember the landmark on the way. However, birds that are puted in a totally strange place still could find their way home. Hence, landmark may not be the reason to birds' navigation.

Finally, the magetic sensor of birds is too limit to be used to find orientations. Even though magnetic sensor could help birds to know south and north, but the destination of birds is complicated. Even human can't find the right way using equipment like birds magnetic sensors.

In sum, based on the evidences above, the speaker concludes that the three theories mentioned in the reading material are in doubt.