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Friends act an important rule in our life.A smart friend can help us sometimes, and a humors friend can bring enjoyablethings to us. Is it a smart friend more important than a humors friend? In my opinion,a humors friend is more important.

To begin with, being with a humors friendis happier while a smart friend is not. A happy mood is the most luxury thingin the world. Humors friends are so good at telling funny stories that makes melaugh frequently take my friend John as an example; John is the most humorsperson in my friend cycle. He is an happy apple and I love to be with him. Itseems that he can make magic that everyone in my class loves to be friend withhim.



Last but not the least; humor is a abilityto communicate with others. It is helpful to be friends with a humors guybecause we can improve such ability and be more popular in the society.

To sum up, a friend who is humors is friendlier.It is an enjoyable thing to be friends with them.

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本帖最后由 独眼豆豆 于 2009-9-29 21:07 编辑

Friends act as an important rule in our life. A smart friend can help us sometimes, and a humors humorous friend can bring enjoyable things to us. Is it a smart friend more important than a humors friend? In my opinion, a humors friend is more important.

To begin with, being with a humors friend is happierhappy while with a smart friend is not. A happy mood is the most luxury thing in the world. Humors friends are so good at telling funny stories that makes me laugh frequently. Take my friend John as an example, John is the most humors person inof my friends cycle. He is an happy apple and I love to be with him. It seems that he can make magic thatand everyone in my class loves to bemake friend with him.

Last but not the least上一段,首先,下一段就最后了?; humor is an ability to communicate with others. It is helpful to be friends with a humors guy because we can improve such ability and be more popular in the society.

To sum up, a friend who is humors is friendliermore friendly. It is an enjoyable thing to be friends with themhumorous person.

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