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发表于 2009-9-30 15:14:51 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 daisy840228 于 2009-9-30 18:15 编辑

9.29 是应该放更多的钱在access internet 上,而不是public transportation 同意还是不要?  

With the advent of computer technology, especially the internet, more and more people are clined to surf the internet for a variety of intentions, such as entertaining, obtaining academic knowledge, seeking information, taking courses, shopping. On the other hand, the traditional way to these intentions, such as taking any vehicles to cinema,theater, school, work office, mall seems to be facing more challenges. Therefore,should government pay money on access of internet? Yes. And probably good as well. Will public transportation be displaced, and deserve no development and no financial aid? I believe not.

To be frank, surf online does provide fresh learning and entertaining experience unheard of before. The most distinct benefit comes from a vast ocean of information. people,who have any need, take full advantage of this point. We are almost free to know any information and get anything, as shoes, clothes, even foods that fit into their daily schedule. Compared with the traditional idea of “going to get”, this is much more convenient and save a great amount of time which may contribute to traffic condition.

However, it is clear to me that surf online has certain innate setbacks which render it unable to compete with the tradit. Firstly, although internet makes learning and working online feasible and popular, it can never replace the importance of studing at school, and working in office.Take learning as an example, students like to study at school in the world characterized by an interlaying of international net where most knowledge can be learned from internet.why? Because the communication with the classmates and professors is much vivid and bring benefit to the comprehending due to the body gesture and the tone. On the other hand, Taking part in students union could intensify the interpersonal and communicational skill, which is very important in the rapidly developed society. For example, if a student enroll in studying department of students union, he or she would consider how to organize other students to take part in some interesting learning session, and how to invite professor to give some interesting lecture, which will both give him or her opportunity to develop the interpersonal and communicational and even organizational skill. Therefore, communication with other people face-to-face and organizing an activity are what you may not get easily from the internet, and somehow make the transportation vital to the communities.

Yet, another important downside of online education is that it can not satisfy people's need of entertainment and relax to some extent.  People are fond of  travelling around, watching movie in cinema, and shoping in the mall. Take travelling as an instance,it is human being's nature to close to nature, so people like to travel around to enjoy the nature, such as, walking in the blue sky,  seeing smelling the grass and flowers, listening to cries of birds, feeling the bracing breeze on face, soaking hands in the water. It's incomparable to those that people simply see  the picture and listen the voice of water running on a computer imagineing the wonderful of nature. Therefore, transportation cannot be replaced by just surfing the internet.

To sum up, internet is fascinating in some ways and access of internet does offer people different experiences. However, it can not and should not replace traditional transportion, due to the need of moving of studing, working and entertaining. Since now traffic condition is not good and much worse than the access of internet, I believe we should pay more money in transportation to make world more beautiful.

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Withthe advent of computer technology, especially the internet, more and morepeople are clinked to surf on the internet for avariety of intentions, such as entertaining, obtaining academic knowledge,seeking information, taking courses, shopping. On the other hand, thetraditional way to these intentions, such as taking any vehicles tocinema,theater, school, work office, mall seems to be facing more challenges.Should government pay money on access internet? Yes. And probably good as well.Will public transportation be displaced, and deserve no development and nofinancial aid? I believe not.& |4 E! J# }0 {8 e- k6 e

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However, it is clear to me that surf online has certain innate setbacks whichrender it unable to compete with the tradit. Firstly, although internet makeslearning and working online feasible and popular, it can never replace theimportance of studing at school, and working in office.Take learning as anexample, students like to study at school, in the world characterized by aninterlaying of international net.why? because the communication with theclassmates and professors, the body gesture, the tone, all ofthis  would enhance the ability of studying and get a betterunderstanding of some difficult point effectively. On the other hand,theactivity in students union could more intense the interpersonal andcommunicational skill, which is very important in the rapidly developedsociety.For example, if a student enroll in studying department of studentsunion, he or she would consider how to organize other students to take part insome interesting learning session, and how to invite professor to give someinteresting lecture, which will all give him or her opportunity to develop theinterpersonal and communicational and organizational skill.They are both whatyou can not get from the internet, and somehow make the transportation vital tothe communities.
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6 E! T0 G9 y; Z9 P: L- {Yet,another important downside of online education is that it has the potential todo harm to people's eyes and skin due to radioactio,so people are not supposedto use computer for a long time.People still clined to travel around, watchmovie in cinema, shoping in the mall. For instance
It's human being's nature to close to nature, sopeople like to travel around, to enjoy the nature, especially the green tree,the clear water, the blue sky, to relax. It's incomparable to simply watchingthe picture and listen the voice of water running on a computer.Therefore,transportation cannot be replaced by access internet.; I# ^8 @7 m4 D, Z& r" a

9 Y1 I) M0 d6 r' OTo sum up,access internet is fascinating in some ways and does offer differentexperience. However, it cannot and should not replace traditional transportion,due to the need of moving of studing, working and entertaining. Since nowtraffic condition is not good, and much worse the access internet, I believe weshould pay more money in transportation to make world more beautifu
我觉得好好啊,尤其是词汇。。。学习啦
不好意思啊,由于我水平的问题,只能瞻仰了
我们,都很托福。。。

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