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10.22 The parents do not understand their children as well today as parents understood their children 50 years ago" m4 K3 g( R  a; O- m. W# S4 z
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A good friend of mine told me that when I chatted with him, I often mentioned my mom. Thus, he asked me whether she had a deeply effect on me during my growth up. I replied him "of course" without any hesitation. I am quite sure without any exaggeration that my mom is the person knows about me most in this world. However, some psychologists claim that parents may be not understand their children enough due to the more time spent for their work and the less communication with their children. I am totally against this kind of view, as least it is not suitable for me. I believe that parents today absolutely understand their parents－>children than the ones 50 years ago for the following reasons.嗯，事例开头，很赞！很自然……

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To begin with, even though parents today have to burden more responsibilities on their positions, they don't have emergent basic demands to cover so that they are able to consider more the integrated development for their children, and during the cultivation for their own kids, they have more opportunities to understand more aspects of their daughters and sons. Parents usually focused more on whether their kids are hungry or whether they could get a high score during the examination. While parents today concentrate on the development on their kids' interest in addition. Just like my mom, when I was young, once she knew I liked painting and dancing, she asked the special tutors to teach me about them. In general, parents today can find and pay attention to more aspects on their kids. Thus, how could we blame them not understanding us enough?结构写的很好，开头长句观点。然后解释一下，给出对比。后面例子说明，然后又总结。前呼后应。好结构; S0 i6 i1 k+ ]/ \- i

Besides, with the rapid development of science, it provides both parents and children with more approached to understand each other. For instance, one of my friends’ mother also registered an ID in the Facebook website, so she can understand what my friend worry about and excite for everyday. While in 50 years ago, it is totally unimaginable. In the past, if parents wanted to understand what their children thought about, they usually even took some extreme measures such as stole－》stealing their kids’ diaries. All of those kinds of things can be avoided and can be solved on the apparent Internet stage. As a daughter, I understand that we children also actually need to communicate with parents more. However, we usually lack a reasonable way, which can be solved today.+ x# Q7 p6 `* R3 T* U7 W
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In a conclusion, I am quite happy that my mom can also make friends with my friends. We can talk about a lot of things related to almost every aspect, such as my dream, my anger and even my love which she rarely talked with her parents before. I believe it also the common phenomenon today.

嗯，文章写的很好。尤其是第二段，结构非常好！
赞一下，作者的语言功底很棒，文章非常流畅！学习了

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161 People remember special gifts or presents that they have received.Why? Use special reasons and examples to support your answer

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When talking about gifts, until now, I still remembered a special gift I received on my 18-year-old birthday. It was a bottle of perfume received from my dear mom. Obviously, even though everyone may have received numerous presents as they growing up, which we may even not be able to remember the definite quantity and those people send them to us, we usually can remember the specials gifts. It is just because we sometimes choose to remember these things for the particular reasons.

To begin with, these gifts may be sent on the particular time. Just still take that bottle of perfume as an example. I received it on my 18-year-old birthday. It means from then on, I must be responsible for myself alone. Before doing things, I have to have a second thought, since my parents cannot help me in many aspects. I have to make many determinations alone, and burden the results from them, such as which major I would learn, which university to go to, and so forth. All of them will decide what kind of person I will be in the future. Thus, these birthday has left a deeply impression on me. So does the presents I received that day.  

In addition, these presents may have some special meanings and be sent by some special ones. When putting that bottle of perfume in my hand, she told me:" From today, you are not a little girl any more. You will be an adult, a lady. Every woman should have a bottle of their own perfume. So this is yours. You are an excellent student and girl. I hope to see an excellent lady in the future. I'm quite proud of you forever." I still remembered these words clearly even nom during the nervous test. When seeing that bottle of perfume everyday, or even smelling its scant, I will recall these words and my mom. It has affected a lot.

In a conclusion, gifts may be just some kinds of cold gadgets. However, the special gifts are never just gadgets. They may be some important marks and symbols. Just because of the willingness or the special meanings on these gifts, they become never cold but warmer to encourage us and have the influence on our life.


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10.26 In university students should take the history courses no matter what field they study.

As an old Chinese motto said, the history can help us know what we have got and lost. When reading our textbook, we usually can see that the author take a lot of chapters to demonstrate the history of the subject. Many educationalists insist that in universities students should take the history courses no matter what field they study. Even though I quite disgust learning the history lessons since in middle school, I still believe that studying the history in quite necessary.

To begin with, taking the general history courses can enrich the background knowledge for every student. In general, the major professor more often focuses on the major field so as to ignore some common knowledge. Through taking history courses, we can acknowledge what we cannot get from the major study. Just take myself as an example. The professor in our law school will never talk about what the Norman Conquer is. While I can know not only its details but also the effects for Britain through the history course. Maybe It seems nothing serious concerned with my major. However, it can actually widen my scope of knowledge. What’s important, we can learn the history which we are quite interested in from history courses.

In addition, since among different fields of knowledge, there are the inevitable relationships, taking history courses can help the major study. No matter what we learn, we should build our own knowledge system based on some background learning. Just imagine that student major in law even doesn't know the history of The Declaration of the Human Right, or that a student major in diplomacy even doesn't know the history of relationships between China and the U.S.. What a great tragedy! Thus, in some certain circumstances, some common sense relating the history is necessary for us.

In a conclusion, as we all know, we choose to enter universities for studying in the special subject. Nonetheless, sometimes the learning in general field such as the history can also benefit us a lot. It can get us out of the limitation of the major and show us a broader sky which embraces the knowledge about our major, as well as beyond the major and the certain subject.

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As an old Chinese motto said（goes:）, the history can help us know what we have got and lost. When reading our textbook, we usually can see that the author take a lot of chapters to demonstrate the history of the subject. Many educationalists insist that in universities students should take the history courses no matter what field they study. Even though I quite disgust learning the history lessons since (删去，since 至从什么什么....)in middle school, I still believe that studying the history in（is） quite necessary.

To begin with, taking the general history courses can enrich the background knowledge for every student. In general, the major professor more often focuses on the major field so as to(为了 ignore 然后才 focus on ?)  ignore some common knowledge. Through taking history courses, we can acknowledge what we cannot get from the major study(we can get more familiar with our  subjects). Just take myself as an example. The professor in our law school will never talk about what the Norman Conquer is. While I can know not only its details but also the effects for Britain(know what?) through the history course.
Maybe It seems nothing serious concerned with my major. However, it can actually widen my scope of knowledge. What’s important , more importantly  we can learn the history
which we are quite interested in from history courses.

In addition, since among different fields of knowledge, there are the 删去吧inevitable relationships, taking history courses can help the major study. No matter what we learn, we should build our own knowledge system based on some background learning. Just imagine that student major in law even doesn't（应该和前面的 major 一致） know the history of The Declaration of the Human Right, or that a student major in diplomacy even doesn't know the history of relationships between China and the U.S.. What is a great tragedy（会不会太过了）! Thus, in some certain circumstances, some common sense relating to the history is necessary for us.
感觉这个观点和第一个观点一样

In a conclusion, as we all know, we choose to enter universities for studying in the special subject. Nonetheless, sometimes the learning in general field such as the history can also benefit us a lot. It can get us out of the limitation of the major and show us a broader sky which embraces the knowledge about our major, as well as beyond the major and the certain subject.

我感觉论点上 有重叠
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然后有些 表达 我觉得挺生疏的！句子结构不错，但有些简单的错误一定要避免。 加油

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7 I5 f/ m" K3 v  c; sAs an old Chinese motto said（goes:）, the history can help us know what we have got and lost. When reading our textbook, we usually can see that the author take a lot of chapters to demonstrate the history of the subject. Many educationalists insist that in universities students should take the history courses no matter what field they study. Even though I quite disgust learning the history lessons since (删去，since 至从什么什么....)in middle school, I still believe that studying the history in（is） quite necessary.
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To begin with, taking the general history courses can enrich the background knowledge for every student. In general, the major professor more often focuses on the major field so as to(为了 ignore 然后才 focus on ?)  ignore some common knowledge. Through taking history courses, we can acknowledge what we cannot get from the major study(we can get more familiar with our  subjects). Just take myself as an example. The professor in our law school will never talk about what the Norman Conquer is. While I can know not only its details but also the effects for Britain(know what?) through the history course.
8 \  ^# _2 g. u& B; \9 g# }" P9 rMaybe It seems nothing serious concerned with my major. However, it can actually widen my scope of knowledge. What’s important , more importantly  we can learn the history
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! e1 g5 _, x/ ^3 jIn addition, since among different fields of knowledge, there are the 删去吧inevitable relationships, taking history courses can help the major study. No matter what we learn, we should build our own knowledge system based on some background learning. Just imagine that student major in law even doesn't（应该和前面的 major 一致） know the history of The Declaration of the Human Right, or that a student major in diplomacy even doesn't know the history of relationships between China and the U.S.. What is a great tragedy（会不会太过了）! Thus, in some certain circumstances, some common sense relating to the history is necessary for us.
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In a conclusion, as we all know, we choose to enter universities for studying in the special subject. Nonetheless, sometimes the learning in general field such as the history can also benefit us a lot. It can get us out of the limitation of the major and show us a broader sky which embraces the knowledge about our major, as well as beyond the major and the certain subject.
语法上hype改的很细，基本同意，个人认为第二段没什么必要，历史专业的肯定要学历史啊，这是必然，没什么好说的，关键在说为什么每个人都要？

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还有因为每次我都晚交，即使mail了旸旸，他还是忘记把我分组，所以我干脆先占位在补上，因为从来没人那么早改过我的文章，不是有意欺骗你的！！！！sorry

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36# daisy840228 没事~~我这就去改~~O(∩_∩)O~

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哈哈，还没交昨天的作业，

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10.29 Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

I have prepared this Toefl test for 3 months. Since this test covers all the aspects of the application for the English, I need to improve myself in all the fields, among reading, listening, speaking and writing. So for a pleasant score of Toefl, I need to make a reasonable schedule for my preparation. Actually, due to the development of the society, not only for the preparation for the test, but also for accomplishing all kinds of tasks today, to plan and organize is a quite essential step.

To begin with, since we need to do more things in a certain time, to plan and organize our work can contribute to the higher efficiency. In the job market, the integrated elites are the most welcome one forever. There is no doubt that they can accomplish more things during the same time, and more importantly with the same quality. While what makes them to be the elite and the top one? Of course, the ability to plan and organize is the key point. Jean, a friend of mine was admitted to the UCLA. When in China, she can do a variety of things in the same 24 hours. It owes to her effective time table, which arrange the time from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m.. She usually learnt English and prepared for Toefl in the morning and studied her major psychology in the afternoon. Besides, she also set 1 hour aside everyday to relax and ensure the high efficiency to further study. She always makes full use of every minute. In my view, without her accurate arrangement, she can never successfully go to the UCLA.

In addition, no matter how many things we should do, most of them have the internal relationship. Because of that, to plan and organize before doing can help us a lot. When preparing the Toefl test, it appears 4 parts separately. However, among them, it is not difficult to find out their internal relationships. Listening is the base for speaking and integrated writing. And vocabulary is the premise for reading, listening, speaking and writing. Thus, building a strong foundation of the vocabulary and listening is what I should do first. After understanding those relationships, I can found my shortage and be easier to improve my scores. In fact, both our job and life are the special tests. We finally need give others and ourselves a result. Just figure out the relationships, and make a scientific plan for them. Them, everyone will be not far for success.

In a conclusion, no matter which approach to the success, it will never be easy. While to plan and organize what we will do is always the easiest or the nearest one to our dream.


超时五分钟！

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10.29 Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
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I have prepared this Toefl test for 3 months. Since this test covers all the aspects of the application for the English, I need to improve myself in all the fields, among reading, listening, speaking and writing. So for a pleasant score of Toefl, I need to make a reasonable schedule for my preparation. Actually, due to the development of the society, not only for the preparation for the test, but also for accomplishing all kinds of tasks today, to plan and organize is a quite essential step.
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To begin with, since we need to do more things in a certain time, to plan and organize our work can contribute to the higher efficiency. In the job market, the integrated elites are the most welcome one(popular one 是不是更好一些？) forever. There is no doubt that they can accomplish more things during the same time, and more importantly with the same quality. While what makes them to be the elite and the top one? Of course, the ability to plan and organize is the key point. Jean, a friend of mine was admitted to the UCLA. When in China, she can do a variety of things in the same 24 hours. It owes to her effective time table, which arrange the time from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m.. She usually learnt English and prepared for Toefl in the morning and studied her major psychology in the afternoon. Besides, she also set 1 hour aside everyday to relax and ensure the high efficiency to further study. She always makes full use of every minute. In my view, without her accurate arrangement, she can never successfully go to the UCLA.
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" a" _9 I( j* G' k/ }In addition, no matter how many things we should do, most of them have the internal relationship. Because of that, to plan and organize before doing can help us a lot. When preparing the Toefl test, it appears 4 parts separately. However, among them, it is not difficult to find out their internal relationships. Listening is the base for (of) speaking and integrated writing. And vocabulary is the premise for reading, listening, speaking and writing. Thus, building a strong foundation of the vocabulary and listening is what I should do first. After understanding those relationships, I can found my shortage and be easier to improve my scores. In fact, both our job and life are the special tests. We finally need give others and ourselves a result(results). Just figure out the relationships, and make a scientific plan for them. Them, everyone will be not far for success./ {  d5 W6 d* r3 w" }! L4 ~  H' g
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In a conclusion, no matter which approach to the success, it will never be easy. While to plan and organize what we will do is always the easiest or the nearest one to our dream.(最后这两句话挺好的，收了)
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超时五分钟！

整体感觉很流畅，而且用词也很好，另外例子举得也是很平易近人。
结构上一开始就说托福的准备，下面分论点又分别举准备托福的例子，这个结构感觉挺好的，有种前后呼应的感觉，学习了。

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I have prepared this Toefl test for 3 months. Since this test covers all the aspects of the application for the English, I need to improve myself in all the fields, among->such as reading, listening, speaking and writing. So for a pleasant score of Toefl, I need to make a reasonable schedule for my preparation. Actually, due to the development of the society, not only for the preparation for the test, but also for accomplishing all kinds of tasks today, to plan and organize is a quite essential step. 开头的地方可以有个过度, 多少有点突然.

To begin with, since we need to do more things in a certain time, to plan and organize our work can contribute to the higher efficiency. In the job market, the integrated elites are the most welcome->popular one forever没明白forever在这里杂个意思. There is no doubt that they can accomplish more things during the same time, and more importantly with the same quality. While what makes them to be the elite and the top one? Of course, the ability to plan and organize is the key point. Jean, a friend of mine was admitted to the UCLA. When (she was) in China, she can do a variety of things in the same 24 hours. It owes to her effective time table, which arrange the time from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m.. She usually learnt English and prepared for Toefl in the morning and studied her major psychology in the afternoon. Besides, she also set 1 hour aside everyday to relax and ensure the high efficiency to further study. She always makes full use of every minute. In my view, without her accurate arrangement, she can never successfully go to the UCLA 朋友的例子在中国的地方可以用过去式吧, 你的口气像是他应该在UCLA了. 例子内容不错

of them have the internal relationship. Because of that, to plan and organize before doing-->starting can help us a lot. When preparing the Toefl test, it appears--has 4 parts separately. However, among them, it is not difficult to find out their internal relationships. Listening is the base for speaking and integrated writing. And vocabulary is the premise for reading, listening, speaking and writing. Thus, building a strong foundation of the vocabulary and listening is what I should do first. After understanding those relationships, I can found-find my shortage and be easier to improve my scores. In fact, both our job and life are the special tests. We finally need (to ) give others and ourselves a result. Just figure out the relationships, and make a scientific plan for them. Them, everyone will be not far for success. 2个例子都是学习而且都跟托福有关,显得有些单薄.不很丰富

n a conclusion, no matter which approach to the success, it will never be easy. While to plan and organize what we will do is always the easiest or the nearest one to ( reach) our dream. 有小的语法,没什么严重的. 回答的不错比较到位. 中间地方不算丰富, 中间2段的意思重复.

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10.30 A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.

As China is a big country which hold the most population in the world, its development has the huge influence for both abroad and at home. Especially after the finance tsunami in the 2008, it has been more and more important in economic and political fields. However, if a university plans to develop a new research center in our country, I still prefer a research in agriculture and farming.

Firstly, since we have been far from the year which most people suffered from the starvation, the safety of the agriculture and crops should be ensured at the first place forever. It is obvious that agriculture is the foundation for all the development. That is why we've solved it before other departments. However, we should continue to be focused it on. On the one hand, we cannot predict what kinds of disaster we will meet. As a kind of explanation for the disappearance of a kind of civilization in Mexico thousands years ago, the 6-year summer drought may be the major reason charged of that. Thus, we should never look down on the power of nature and ignore the research and development for agriculture. On the other hand, even for the worst preparation, if the third world war broke out one day, a developed agriculture would also be a powerful arm to protect ourselves.

Secondly, due to the vast territory in China, the research for agriculture has a great meaning for it. As far as I know, there are more than 5 kinds of different climate and more than 3 kinds of soil in China.  As for the diversity of climate and soil, it has great potential to improving our agriculture. The invention of the new kind of paddy in China may be the powerful evidence. In such complex circumstances, the research for farming may be more deserved. The breakthrough of agriculture in China is also a kind of contribution for the whole world.

However, as for business research, China has a totally different model of development from most countries in the world. Owing to its special political environment, the result of business research in China may not be suitable for most countries in the world. For example, the market economy, in which the government still has the unbelievable power for regulating, will never be taken into action in the U.S. Thus, in China the business research will be limited in some certain directions.

To sum up, considering the significance of the agriculture and the limitation of the business research, to build a agriculture center will be more sensible and economic.

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10.30 A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.

As China is a big country which hold the most population in the world, its development has the huge influence for both abroad and at home. Especially after the finance tsunami in the 2008, it has been more and more important in economic and political fields. However, if a university plans to develop a new research center in our country, I still prefer a research in agriculture and farming.

Firstly, since we have been far from the year which most people suffered from the starvation, the safety of the agriculture and crops should be ensured at the first place forever. It is obvious that agriculture is the foundation for all the development. That is why we've solved it before other departments. However, we should continue to be focused it on. On the one hand, we cannot predict what kinds of disaster we will meet. As a kind of explanation for the disappearance of a kind of civilization in Mexico thousands years ago, the 6-year summer drought may be the major reason charged of that. Thus, we should never look down on the power of nature and ignore the research and development for agriculture. On the other hand, even for the worst preparation, if the third world war broke out one day, a developed agriculture would also be a powerful arm to protect ourselves.

Secondly, due to the vast territory in China, the research for agriculture has a great meaning for it. As far as I know, there are more than 5 kinds of different climate and more than 3 kinds of soil in China.  As for the diversity of climate and soil, it has great potential to improving our agriculture. The invention of the new kind of paddy in China may be the powerful evidence. In such complex circumstances, the research for farming may be more deserved. The breakthrough of agriculture in China is also a kind of contribution for the whole world.

However, as for business research, China has a totally different model of development from most countries in the world. Owing to its special political environment, the result of business research in China may not be suitable for most countries in the world. For example, the market economy, in which the government still has the unbelievable power for regulating, will never be taken into action in the U.S. Thus, in China the business research will be limited in some certain directions.

To sum up, considering the significance of the agriculture and the limitation of the business research, to build a agriculture center will be more sensible and economic.


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10.30 A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
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As China is a big country which hold the most population in the world, its development has the huge influence for both abroad and at home－for 后面要加名词之类的吧？. Especially after the finance tsunami in the 2008, it has been more and more important in economic and political fields. However, if a university plans to develop a new research center in our country, I still prefer a research in agriculture and farming.- o) _% `7 f% J+ e6 H, ~
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Firstly, since we have been far from the year which most people suffered from the starvation, the safety of the agriculture and crops should be ensured at the first place forever.－感觉这两句不构成因果，although吧 It is obvious that agriculture is the foundation for all the development. That is why we've solved it before other departments. However, we should continue to －foucus on 主动语态吧be focused it on. On the one hand,－不用the，不知道有否这种the one的用法 we cannot predict what kinds of disaster we will meet. As a kind of explanation for the disappearance of a kind of civilization in Mexico thousands －建议thousands of 或several thousands years ago, the 6-year summer drought may be the major reason charged of that. Thus, we should never look down on the power of nature and ignore the research and development for agriculture. On the other hand, even for the worst preparation, if the third world war broke out one day, a developed agriculture would also be a powerful arm to protect ourselves.2 C, M, A" －如果最后在点点农业研究所会更扣题w: A5 V2 a0 a
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Secondly, due to the vast territory in China, the research for agriculture has a great meaning for it. As far as I know, there are more than 5 kinds of different climate and more than 3 kinds of soil in China.  As for the diversity of climate and soil, it has great potential to improving－improve our agriculture. The invention of the new kind of paddy in China may be the powerful evidence. In such complex circumstances, the research for farming may be more deserved. The breakthrough of agriculture in China is also a kind of contribution for the whole world.; A+ [* u$ }, V4 e+ D5 M

3 F7 [4 I3 M/ a- Q" oHowever, as for business research, China has a totally different model of development from most countries in the world. Owing to its special political environment, the result of business research in China may not be suitable for most countries in the world. For example, the market economy, in which the government still has the unbelievable power for regulating, will never be taken into action in the U.S. Thus, in China the business research will be limited in some certain directions.7 d' b* s*－这一段觉得有点怪，也没说是国外的university，也没说一定要为全世界做贡献，本国的大学或者他国的大学专门研究中国的商业发展借鉴创新之类的，我觉得也说得过去。
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11.2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

For most of us, the first word we learnt to speak is "mom". Since parents and family are actually the first teachers for us, they have a deeply influence on us. They teach us about what is good and bad. From them, we initially know about the appearance of the world. So some one may argue that they are the best teacher because we can learn from the stories they told us, the angers to us, the encouragements for us, in a word, the daily life with them. However, we still cannot be sure that they are the best teacher.

To begin with, admittedly, the parents can influent us by their behavior among the daily life. However, most people around can affect us as well. As an old Chinese motto goes, among any three fellows, it must have someone we can learn from. Everyone's one word, one small behavior may totally change everyone's life. I still remember the words Jason, a friend of mine, told me 3 years ago. "Don't take complaints as a habit." Whenever I felt down and was not satisfied with some disorder stuff, whenever I wanted to owe my failure to environment or others, this word would come into my mind and taught me not to complain anything, and just to try to do my best. Such kinds of example cannot be counted out during my twenty years. If parents can be the best teacher just for its influence during my life, then everyone ever teaches my something can also be my best teacher. If everyone can be the best, what the best teacher means then?

Besides, even our parents know more things than us in most circumstances, they still may make mistakes. So we just can treat them as our teacher on certain condition, but not as a simple best teacher covering all the aspects for us. It is without doubt that everyone has quarreled with their dads and moms. Just recall the situation of the quarrels. Is it us but not the parents who make the mistake? Do you have sometime that felt quite innocent? Have you ever been blamed just for some mistakes made by neighbor’s kids? I think everyone will have the same answer. Because our parents is just the parents instead of the God who will never be wrong. Maybe after the quarrel, we also can insist what we believe in. However, it is quite obvious that we cannot regard our parents as the best teacher then.

To sum up, even we quite respect our parents, even without them we cannot live healthy and well now, treating them as the best teachers is still a correct decision. Never respect someone as the best teachers and believe in them easily. Since what a large world is, teachers can be everyone we meet, and whoever you meet is just the ordinary people who will make mistakes.