ARGUMENT143 [REBORN FROM THE ASHES] TASK ONE by bear

emteddybearUID: 2699606

WORDS: 382
TIME: 01:00:00
DATE: 2009-11-16 1:08:53

很惭愧只写出了这么多，前面看帖子花了太多的时间，还有很多没有看到，现在只能写到这么多了，先交了这个不合格得作业，明天自己再好好改改

Based on the recent study on the United States economy, the author concludes that the editor of newspaper makes a mistake. But the author doesn't provide
convincing evidences to us.

Firstly, it indicates that far more jobs have been created than have been eliminated. But the increase rate of the people was not listed, which is so important that it is no meaning to talk about the number of the created or eliminated jobs. What's more, there is also nothing about the condition about the job. Maybe they are not very fit for the competent workers, only fit for some
coolie. And the rate between old stagers and undergraduates. It is possible that many companies only want to hire graduation students.

Secondly, it is vague to say that many of those who lost their jobs have found new employment, because it doesn't describe the exactly number of the new employment. Maybe, just a few people have found a new job. And there is no evidence to show that how long takes them to find a new job, maybe longer than the editor tells us.

Thirdly, it does not describe the concept of the so-called "two-thirds", and does not tell us what are the "two-thirds" belonging to. After reading that evidence, we also don't know the condition about the competent workers who lost jobs, which is the mainly about in this argument. And how about the remaining “one-third”? The same situation is for the so-called "vast-majority". In order to illustrate this problem, the exactly number should be listed. Although vast majority jobs are full-time, maybe they are not for the competent workers, which are talked in the second paragraph.

Last but not the least, there is no anything about the condition of the country’s economic at present. So there is no right to say the average condition. For instant, all the world is facing the grate depression, the level of he average must be very low, so even they are paid above-average wages, their economic hardship must be exist.

To sum up, the argument is not persuasive for its standpoints; it should provide more information about the report which it based on. And necessary data should be listed because only data can tell the convince readers.