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发表于 2009-11-28 00:01:28 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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138"Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress."
Mistakes-----discovery/progress
什么让我们进步
提纲:
+ 个人:吸取教训 、改变方向
【个人成长】【职业抉择】【性格完善】
   科学:在失败中找原因,接近真相
【无数实验 例】【
   社会:不完善社会出现问题解决
【人类社会进展】【中国 落后就要挨打】
- mistakes分数量、程度、时宜, 取决于我们是否在其中学习
   个人:一而再再而三 是坚持还是愚蠢
   科学:一味的失败 是执着还是浪费
   社会: 深度的失败 绝对并非进步
   【一战二战】【中国文革】
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下定义 mistakes =\=不完美
     诚然 追求完美
    Mistakes有限度 经思
People always say"only through mistakes can there be discoveries and progresses", in which I think a confusion between mistakes and imperfectness has been made. To get a thorough view for the issue, we must firstly make it clear that the former, which is avoidable, is just a small part of the latter, which always exists, not all.
Admittedly, imperfectness leads us to discoveries and progresses.As for individuals, we meet imperfectness through our lives, whether it's about characters or abilities.Failures in socializing force us to slove our character fallaciaties; mistakes in works alarm us to improve our poor abilities;a wrong direction let us down, however it's just from the wrong journey that we rethink about what is wrong, who we are, what the world actually is and what to do. It's easy to find multitude of people fighting zthrough the imperfect, finally getting better and better. When it comes to the society, things are not OK at the first beginning. On the very contray, imperfectness seems to be everywhere never out of our sight. It's not hard to find people complainning about those "should-not-be-so"-wars, poor plocies, hierachies, the huge rich poor gap, etc. Yes, that really hurts, but it's just the injuries that invoke us to a deeper analysis of the injury and search for a better society style. The human society development  from the primitive society  to the modern society is just a good sound evidence.

Despite of the whole vision of imperfectness, which seems to be somewhat contributive, it can not be used as an excuse for mistakes.Who of us will appreciate the person who make mistakes again and again,while still sticking to the point that only through mistakes can I get progresses? That's not fortitude, but stupid. Who of us would like to live in such a society where mistakes are respected as the mother of progresses, where lies, unfair treatment, violence are everywhere? Historians may say that mistakes in society lead to the elimination of those mistakes, thus a better society. But that really hurts. Just imagine, who of us would love to live in the Second World War, the big mistake of our whole human being? Or just go and ask any Chinese, who has not go ape yet, who will be williing to return to the Cultural Revolution when black is white, mistakes nearly ruined the country? Who will be so unnaturally "philosophical" to appreciate the hurts ? Personal mistakes are  already enough to suffer, let alone huge mistakes of the whole society, which is so influencial as to hurt more than "many". We are here to do the right rather than waiting for the show of mistakes.



To sum up, we must get the clear view that mistake is absolutely not equal to imperfect-the former is just a small part of the latter. Instead of mistakes ,it is our pursing for the better, for the perfect that encourages  us forward.  

初写体会:老生常谈很难谈,容易把自己绕蒙了,写到一半想把正负的定义范围变一下,于是前面说mistakes后说IMPERFECTINESS , 这样说确实轻松很多,却有种想法低级的感觉。
例子太少, 积累。
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额,修改见上。这次批得可能有点狠。。。。姐姐包涵。。

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