11月28日作文

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11月28日作文内容如下：

11.28 Do you agree or disagree: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place.

The whole life comprises different things such as modern urban life, peaceful, relaxed rural living and abundent cultural experiences. So some people prefer to live in the city or country in whole life, while others believe moving to different regeions will provide more opportunities to live a corlourful life. Personally speaking, I would like to experience different culture and to explore unknown world in my life.

Granted that living in a fixed place, city or country means a stable life with your families and sometimes it may give you much more promotions in your career. However, migration life will make you view a splendid world in the life.

First of all, migration is a high efficient way for you to communicate with different people in exotic culture backgroud. Migrating people need to know how to get on well with people with different origins. It is acknowledged that international students are much adefter to deal with cross cultural affairs in the process of professional development than those who accept high education in domestic instituitions. Ms. Meilin Song, the wife of former president of China Jiang Kenshen, is a good example as an international student. She had perfect diplomatic performance during the World War II, which resulted from her early education in U.S.

Also, you can acquire much more knowledge from natural geological informations to art and liberal way of life if you live in different places in your life. In general, one will not only view completely different scenery places but also learn different languages and aware of dissimelar social life styles, which will broaden one’s eyesight and knowledge. So There is a famous Chinese saying: Walking thousands of miles way is equeal to reading thousands of books. A distinguished Chinese doctor, Li Shizhen, collected most useful herb medicines and medical prescriptions while travelling different parts of China, which helped him write an important medical work, Ben Cao Gang Mu.

In short, different living attitudes will lead to different life styles. A conservative man would like live a familiar city or place for whole life other than moving all over the country or the world. On the contrast, the man who always moves place to place will live a completely corlourful life.

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Granted that living in a fixed place, city or country means a stable life with your families and sometimes it may give you much more promotions in your career. However, migration （加of）life will make you view a splendid world in the(去掉) life.: J; T! v3 [" T8 c( A

2 I4 H, o3 s) z, A; }1 p6 CFirst of all, migration is a high efficient way for you to communicate with different people in exotic culture backgroud. Migrating people need to know how to get on well with people with different origins. It is acknowledged that international students are much adefter（改为easily） to deal with cross cultural affairs in the process of professional development than those who accept high education in domestic instituitions. Ms. Meilin Song, the wife of former president of China Jiang Kenshen, is a good example as an international student. She had perfect diplomatic performance during the World War II, which resulted from her early education in U.S.$ z- B8 c$ G7 y( l1 I. o4 D
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Also, you can acquire much more knowledge from natural geological informations to art and liberal way of life if you live in different places in your life. In general, one will not only view completely different scenery（去掉scenery） places but also learn different languages and aware of dissime（改为i）lar social life styles, which will broaden one’s eyesight（改为vision） and knowledge. So There is a famous Chinese saying: Walking thousands of miles way is equeal（equal） to reading thousands of books. A distinguished Chinese doctor, Li Shizhen, collected most useful herb medicines and medical prescriptions while travelling different parts of China, which helped him write an important medical work, Ben Cao Gang Mu.* |* g, Z+ h9 l" u; s# J0 D# t

  b2 H' ]! y, Y- |+ vIn short, different living attitudes will lead to different life styles. A conservative man would like live a familiar city or place for whole life other than moving all over the country or the world. On the contrast（contrary）, the man（改为people） who always moves （加from）place to place will live a completely corlourful life.

文章结构不错，作者善于举例，用词也较变化，但是作者写完后应该检查，放到Word文档中，有些词可以自己改过来的，有些表达还需注意。

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The whole life comprises different things such as modern urban life, peaceful, relaxed rural living and abundant cultural experiences. So some people prefer to live in the city or country in whole life, while others believe moving to different regions will provide more opportunities to live a colorful life. Personally speaking, I would like to experience different culture and to explore unknown world in my life.) T, d; w6 q6 s# E! d/ e0 H" \8 F. N"
Granted that living in a fixed place, city or country means a stable life with your families and sometimes it may give you much more promotions in your career. However, migration life will make you view a splendid world in the life.

First of all, migration is a high efficient way for you to communicate with different people in exotic cultural backgroud. Migrating people need to know how to get on well with people with different origins. It is acknowledged that international students are much adefter（应该是adepter） to deal with cross cultural affairs in the process of professional development than those who accept high education in domestic institutions. Ms. May-ling Song（宋美龄）, the wife of former president of China JiangKenshen, is a good example as an international student. She had perfect diplomatic performance during the World War II, which resulted from her early education in U.S.

Also, you can acquire much more knowledge from natural geological information（不可数名字不加复数） to art and liberal way of life if you live in different places in your life. In general, one will not only view completely different scenery places but also learn different languages and be（少了动词） aware of dissimilar social life styles, which will broaden one’s eyesight and knowledge. So there is a famous Chinese saying:（我记得英文不用：的，可以直接that吧） Walking thousands of miles way is equal to reading thousands of books. A distinguished Chinese doctor, Li Shizhen, collected most useful herb medicines and medical prescriptions while travelling different parts of China, which helped him write an important medical work, Ben Cao Gang Mu.

In short, different living attitudes will lead to different life styles. A conservative man would like to live in a familiar city or place for whole life other than moving all over the country or the world. On the contrast, the man who always moves from place to place will live a completely colourful life.
注意单词的拼写哈~~~~如果你是在word里写的应该会有自动报错的~~~还有句子的完整，有些动词不要缺了~~~~还有，貌似你的开头长了些~~~一段就够了吧