12月5日 03的综合写作 恐龙是冷血动物么？

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

12月5日的综合写作

In the set of materials we can know that the dinosaurs were endfotherms from the evidence in teh reading part. While, in the lecture we get some different information.

First of all, the professor in the lecture tell us that the polar dinosaures fossils could not prove that dinosaurs were endotherms because the temperature in polar was quite warmer than today. When the cold period of a year came in polar the dinosaures could not move to other areas like modern dinosaures, however, they could still live there. That means the dinosaures were not endotherms.

Talking about the leg position and movement of dinosaures, the professor says the reason why the legs of the dinosaures were under the body is that they wanted to support the weight of their large bodies.And the body structure could suggests that dinosaurs were endotherms.

At last, we can know from the lecture that we can see the growth rings in the Haversian canals which indicate that dinosaures growed slowly or even stopped growing in cold period and growed fast in warm period. If they were endotherms they would grow in the same pace. So the found of Haversian canals could not prove the dinosaures were endotherms.

relanaUID: 2343882

我怎么跟你考得不一样

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

2# relana

我做的是练习，不是今天考试的机经。:lol

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

自己顶一下

tina-gaoUID: 2719334

哈哈，我来看看，结构还比较清晰，没什么太大的错误，但是要注意少量的单词拼写和时态上的变化。建议你用上些比较像样的衔接词和句子显得自己比较“专家”点，可以从TPO阅读和老托阅读中挑些出来，效果会很不错。看过Chineselady一篇综合作文，里面有些词用的不错。继续加油哦，我明年1月考呢。。。

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

我二月七号考，呵呵！加油！

hulinlin24UID: 2731389

In the set of materials we can know that the dinosaurs were endfotherms from the evidence in the reading part. While, in the lecture we get some different informations.

First of all, the professor in the lecture tells us that the polar dinosaures fossils could not prove that dinosaurs were endotherms because the temperature in polar was quite warmer than today. When the cold period of a year came in polar the dinosaures could not move to other areas like modern dinosaures, however,(应该不是转折用so )they could still live there. That means the dinosaures were not endotherms.

Talking about the leg position and movement of dinosaures, the professor says the reason why the legs of the dinosaures were under the body is that they wanted to support the weight of their large bodies.And the body structure could suggests that dinosaurs were endotherms.

At last, we can know from the lecture that we can see the growth rings in the Haversian canals which indicate that dinosaures growed slowly or even stopped growing in cold period and growed fast in warm period. If they were endotherms they would grow in the same pace. So the found of Haversian canals could not prove the dinosaures were endotherms.

写得蛮好的，内容完整，也没什么大的错误，注意下小的语法错误就好了，尽量用词书面化一点，我这是在没话找话了
最好听力和reading部分联系起来说下，要体现出一点联系

莘梓UID: 2732079

In the set of materials we can know that the dinosaurs were endfotherms from the evidence in teh reading part. While, in the lecture we get some different information.

First of all, the professor in the lecture tell us that the polar dinosaures fossils could not prove that dinosaurs were endotherms because the temperature in polar was quite warmer than today. When the cold period of a year came in polar the dinosaures could not move to other areas like modern dinosaures, however, they could still live there. That means the dinosaures were not endotherms.

Talking about the leg position and movement of dinosaures, the professor says the reason why the legs of the dinosaures were under the body is that they wanted to support the weight of their large bodies. And the body structure could suggests that dinosaurs were endotherms.怎么又是endotherm了？前面讲的是听力说恐龙腿长在下面但是不是endotherm的原因，应该接着说她是如何和阅读不同的，如何驳斥阅读的。

At last, we can know from the lecture that we can see the growth rings in the Haversian canals which indicate that dinosaures growed slowly or even stopped growing in cold period and growed fast in warm period. If they were endotherms they would grow in the same pace. So the found of Haversian canals could not prove the dinosaures were endotherms.这段表述比我好，赞！
总体不错，上回的问题都克服了，这篇的问题可能是第二个没有联系阅读文章，整体还是很有提高的，小三儿加油！

happyfaith2008UID: 2709856

第二个理由段最后一句忘加  not 了，实在是失误，导致整个意思都变了。谢谢阿梓这么细心！
刚刚期末考试回来，那个解脱啊！不过后天接着考试。。。。。。
小三儿会加油的！