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发表于 2009-12-26 23:23:53 |只看该作者
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呵呵 楼主真是大好人啊.
请楼主帮我看看这篇作文

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发表于 2009-12-27 00:37:54 |只看该作者
楼主好人

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发表于 2009-12-27 10:36:09 |只看该作者
感觉这篇写得很不怎么样 请楼主大人帮忙看看 谢谢了!
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1045794&extra=

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发表于 2009-12-27 10:42:22 |只看该作者
楼主,最近很忙吗! 怎么没看见现身啊!

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顶顶顶!!!

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帮忙提起来!

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顶,支持的

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幫忙改一下啊..  作文問題很大啊..
考高分是一个撕心裂肺的过程 你熬吗?

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发表于 2009-12-28 02:09:47 |只看该作者
38楼:这一篇我等下睡觉起来会改的哦。。-.- 上一篇实际是上个礼拜因为网络原因没有安排,虽然排到这个礼拜但是不算你这个礼拜的份,所以这一篇算是你这个礼拜的啦~这次之后再占楼就再往后排了哦~谢谢合作~

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发表于 2009-12-28 02:55:21 |只看该作者
39# mpromanus

好的..好的.. 我想著這不是剛好一周了么.. 呵呵~~
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Agree or disagree:It is better to finish one project then staring another than doing several at the same time.

There is general discussion nowadays about whether it is better to accomplish one project then beginning another than doing several things at the same time. Those who oppose the view argue that people have to deal with several things in the modern society because individuals are confronted with stress from family and social. However, as for me, I agree with the statement.

One advantage of doing one project at a time is that people can fully use his energy to concentrate on the project to finish it at a time instead of several other projects. It is undeniable that the energy of people is limited. If one do several projects at the same time, he or she will allocate the limited energy to different projects rather than one project while it may  bring negative influence to finish projects. To take an example, Liuming, who is an manager in Huawei, write reports about the finance and allocate mission to his subordinates at the same time. Nevertheless, he write less one zero on the fiancé report because he do two projects at once. He ultimately bring millions loss because of the zero. Therefore, it is obviously more better to utilize the limited energy to finish one project.
  In addition, doing one project can reduce stress on the job. People must be facing various stress in work whatever you are a teacher, cleaner or office clerk. It is indisputable that people may feel anxious or oppression, especially when he is troubled with some problems in the project. If one have to dispose several projects at one time, he will behave more anxious because of the tremendous stress from those projects. For instance, my brother run one commerce company. Once, I went to his company to take some goods which he brought form England as gift to family. When I sit in his office, he not only took telephone to partner but also commanded his worker to carry the goods to warehouse. I saw the anxious on his face because he had to do various projects at the same time. Thus, it is a wisely choice for people to do one project at a time.
In conclusion, it is apparently more better for people to do one project at a time and start another in the follow.

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发表于 2009-12-28 21:58:12 |只看该作者
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不好意思,发错了,再发一遍

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42楼童鞋,不要紧的,你应该是可以编辑你发过的回复的,把贴错的拿掉就好了。。

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