纯裸写第一篇且限时i球拍，跪谢!!

leonardo2UID: 2542344

基本情况：2月底，最近还要上托福，时间也比较紧了
              之前都在准备提纲，刚刚在没看什么开头、结尾方式及其他注意事项的情况下就裸写了第一篇，
              本来安排了60min的，后来看45min也写得差不多了就掐了，没结尾
              烂自然是知道的，自己看着都很恶心，纯裸写就是想让大家看看问题都在哪，
              基本原样奉上，就把拼写错误稍微改了改
              好重点安排下个月的突击方向，O(∩_∩)O谢谢~~

我在写的过程中感觉到最大的问题：每段都只有一个大例子，ms论证不够，但怎样展开论证呢，
                                             我觉得topic sentence一写也没什么好说的了就直接上例子了，
                                             结果段数巨多，每段字数又不够，如何解决较好？

TOPIC: ISSUE40 - "Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."
WORDS: 519          TIME: 00:43:35          DATE: 2010/1/29 1:28:41

  There is a long-term debate over the question that what should be the scholars and researchers concerned with, contribution to the society, or their own interests?
  Admittedly, the contribution to the society is a vital criterion to judge the researchers' work. To take a simple case, from the perspective of the common people, a software engineer seems to be more important than a scholar who studies those histories of other countries. What's more, those researchers whose work has benefited the society dramatically also tend to obtain higher salaries.
However, interest is also another treasure that the researchers should seek for. Although using social contribution as the criteria seems an excellent choice, it contains some problems. No one can deny that this simulation will influence the researchers' choice of their work. And the society is changing so fleetly that people's demand is also inconstant. If the researchers only catered to what the common people need, they might be unable to insist on their goal and want to change their research from time to time.
  On the other hand, interest should be a stronger driving force to make the researchers more determined. Interest is a more pure goal which is regardless of the social need. Japanese biologist Osamu is a marvelous example to prove this view. When he firstly discovered the green fluorescent protein, the scientists regard it as an insignificant work and neglect it. However, he didn't abandon his work only due to his love to the life sciences, as he said. After years the scientists gradually found that the protein is a useful marker in biological research and his outstanding research finally led him to the Nobel Prize in 2008.
  In addition, some idiosncratic researches may also create immense social value. 100 years ago, when Mendel conducted his strange experiments with peas in his garden, no one can predict that this eccentric monk would be the father of a novel branch of life sciences-- the genetics. Nowadays, with the help of genetic research, scientists are able to understand the pathological mechanism of many diseases more profoundly and come up with a brand-new medical method, called gene therapy.
  Indeed, some researches have direct values to the society while some others have a more indirect or potential value which may change the world. In fact, some vital technological developments are also based on the basic researches. For instance, without the concept of automaton model in mathematics and the development of digital logic circuits in physics, the appearance of computer is impossible.
  Due to the reason stated above, the best investor of such basic researches should be the government. Firstly, such works have immense value to the society but are difficult to obtain the fund due to the lack of direct profit. Secondly, though researchers' pursuit of their own interests are important, this by no means that any researches are permitted. Some works that will destroy the human themselves, such as biochemical weapons, and that the society is still debated, such as human cloning, should be prohibited. And the government should undertake the responsibility to supervise the researchers' work while funding them.

再次跪谢！

leonardo2UID: 2542344

真心希望各位大牛能够帮助一下，跟别人的第一篇比起来感觉差距很大，而且感觉有点离题

leonardo2UID: 2542344

大家帮帮忙啊，这是我第一篇，没人指导一下都不知道怎么继续 2# leonardo2