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本帖最后由 mikestone 于 2010-2-3 00:47 编辑
My view to the issue is that facts are stubborn things in some realms. However, in many cases, facts can be altered by our wishes, our inclinations, or the dictates of our passions.
To begin, in some fields, facts are stubborn things. They are objective and cannot be changed by our wishes and desires. For example, the sun is not the center of the universe. The earth travels around the sun. They are eternal facts and we are unable to alter them. Likely, we can find lots of theorems and axioms in science and society. They are essentials of the world and don't vary according to our wishes and desires.
However, facts are not always stubborn. In our daily life, 'facts', mentioned, are usually our ideas, or thoughts towards the real world. Sometimes these ideas and thoughts are limited by our experience and knowledge; and the facts in our mind may be not correct. For instance, 150 years ago, scientists took the thought that a molecule is the smallest particle. However, after 60 years, they found their theories were wrong. Actually, an atom is smaller than a molecule. So, the facts are changed as the development of our knowledge and experience. Moreover, in some cases, facts can be altered by our efforts and abilities, because these facts are temporary ones. For example, Jim is not a good student at the beginning. However, he spends more time in studies and becomes one of the best in his class. As we see, he changes the facts. When it comes to science, human visited the moon in the last century with the development of space technology, which made our ancestor’s dreams come true. We human beings cannot elevate one-ton-blocks; however, we invent machines which solve the problems. More examples like these can be proposed. In short, by our efforts and abilities, we can change some facts. Therefore, facts are not as stubborn as they seem. Sometimes they vary from time to time.
Since facts vary from time to time, we need to make the best use of them. On one hand, we have to quest those facts—knowledge, theorems and axioms, etc., in the progress of studying. This can help us to receive more correct ones. On the other hand, we should believe that we can change some facts. For example, the girl in the film ‘Homeless to Harvard’ finally changes her destiny through efforts. Furthermore, we can use those stubborn facts to create more profits. For instance, we now can generate electricity by using the gravity of water.
In sum, facts are not always stubborn things. Sometimes we should believe that they can be changed. And furthermore, we should make the best use of them.
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As the speaker's statement, facts have already existed cannot changed by our wishes for both a particular affairs and an individual. Yet it does not mean that we cannot do anything, we can create future facts by our inclinations.
Facts cannot be changed for people whatever they are robust or invalid, smart or awkward. Nowadays, we cannot deny that some people born very robust, but others born weak, some people are wholesome and others are maimed, which seems to be unfair. And everyone wants to become a smart and healthy person, but a disabled cannot change his faith. People cannot alter these qualities of birth but accept it.
这段说人的出身就是一个fact,无论他喜不喜欢。
When some consequences become facts, we also cannot change it. For example, you attend a football team in your class and join a competition. Your team failed the competition because of your mistake, which may be one of the most miserable things in your life. However, when you come to this situation, you can only calm down and accept the fact. In other words, all the affairs happened are facts, which consist of your life, thus you can only accept facts have already exist.
(这里主语最好不要用you,可以用one之类的。)即成的事实(结果)不可以改变,这个和第二段说的一样。
However, we cannot be too pessimism because we can change future facts which are decided by our inclinations to some extent. Firstly, it applies to individuals' qualities of birth. For instance, if a person born a blind, miserable faith is not he must face to. As I known, many blind men become masseurs or musicians. God deprives them of eyesight but award them more sensible touch and better hearing. They overcome many difficulties normal people do not go through, and experience many feelings normal people do not have. These blind masseurs and musicians have a different and happy life. Thus, we do should accept born facts but we can have future facts by our inclinations. Secondly, when we do works we can also change lots of things. For example, if a person behaves very awful in the presentation due to tension. His fail of presentation have become a fact, which he must accept, but is it all the things he can do? Obviously, he can amend his mistake. He can apply for another presentation and prepare well for it. Even though he cannot have another chance, he can summarize his experience and write a short paper which also is beneficial to him. Thus, facing with facts not accord with our inclination, we can amend it by numerous means.
不能改变即成的事实但是可以改变未来。两方面说的时候也是先说可以改变命运和可以改变将来,分别呼应了第2段和第3段。
To sum up, the statement that facts cannot be changed by our inclinations is proved by many events in our life. But we can also obtain future facts accorded with(according to?) our inclination.
整体而言,整篇文章是切合社会生活的一个方面来论述的,我也比较支持类似的论述方法,容易把问题分析透彻。但是读起来可能会很平淡。
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