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glly7 发表于 2014-12-3 15:19
你好！你的那句话引起我的思考。记得以前都是agree or disagree 类型的，现在变的这种本质上和那种有什么 ...

仅个人观点以供参考：Do you like to ... 与Do you agree or disagree...的主要区别在于前者是问偏好，后者是问观点。写前者的时候主要侧重的应该是用个人的亲身体验去说明自己的偏好，写后者的时候侧重的应该是写自己支持该观点的具体理由。

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12.3独立写作

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医改了。。。

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不好意思~昨天后来木有网了。。。
现在才给你改好。。

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sayings 发表于 2014-12-5 13:01
不好意思~昨天后来木有网了。。。
现在才给你改好。。

很感谢，你的我可能要晚上给你改啦发过去。这两天工作太忙，下午又要参加一场职业考试，所以很抱歉

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sayings 发表于 2014-12-5 13:01
不好意思~昨天后来木有网了。。。
现在才给你改好。。

你好！请教下你把crisis 改成crises是出于什么考虑？
另，我觉得你说的那种对比，蛮好！谢谢！

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glly7 发表于 2014-12-6 11:29
你好！请教下你把crisis 改成crises是出于什么考虑？
另，我觉得你说的那种对比，蛮好！谢谢！

复数呀。。。

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12.07独立写作

Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large assignments. Which do you prefer and why?


When it comes to whether the final grade is determined by numerous small assignments or only a few large assignments, we have different views of that problem. In my opinion, clearly, having their final grades determined by a few large assignments is a better way in point.
First, we all know that the final grade aims to reflect our capacity, which emerged by virtue of the difficulty of assignments. That is to say, a few of large assignments, which is more difficult, can examine the students in a deeper degree than lots of small assignments. Then, we could realized the nuance among students, which is the main aim of the final grade.
Furthermore, every single assignment could create an environment for students to build their tenacity, which is the basic requirement for everyone to success. For example, students, who finish a small assignment, would take a litter time, and even far behind the crucial point, which contributes to the real assistance for their growing. In the contrast, students would take a long time to do a big assignment, and during the long time, they have to experience a lot of different problems, which could easily get us involved in a bad status. So by resolving those problems, they can build their strong tenacity as well as the large assignment. Thus making students to better access the success.
The chief reason is the large-assignment-determined final grade is benefit for students to have a comprehensive development. That is no deny that a single small assignments cost a little time, but we have to waste out time, before and after the assignment, to be ready. So the number of assignments make students have little time to grow comprehensively, do exercises, holiday with family or friends and so on. On contrast, the large assignment could satisfy the studying requirement more intensely, which the first way cannot create, then students would have more time to do exercise, or enjoy time with family, to have a better growing.
Based on the capacity, tenacity, and comprehensive development of students, I prefer to choose a large-assignment-determined final grade pattern.

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glly7 发表于 2014-12-7 16:23
12.07独立写作

hey，我的电脑打不开docx。。so，你能复制粘贴在这里吗，麻烦啦！

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Minnieee 发表于 2014-12-8 03:18
hey，我的电脑打不开docx。。so，你能复制粘贴在这里吗，麻烦啦！

你好，我已经黏贴在上面啦

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我好改作文改错人了。。。我好像没和你分在一组。。但是我已经改完了就给你贴上了。。

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医改了。。。

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童鞋。。12.8的在哪里啊？

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1.7独立写作

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1.7已改

额。。我不太懂会不会像之前那样有些字看不清，如果有看不清的楼楼告诉我，我直接贴在你楼里。。。

你批改我作文中问的问题我都回答在批改你的文稿中咯～