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Though someone ,holding that printed book always playing a(an) important part in our life,
i(I) am concerned that the situation of that books will have a favorable attitude toward decline (这种表达方式的情况下主语应该是人)in 20 years when considering the development of technology,
the requirement of daily life ,and the convenience . / T4 p. I  f! }/ X. `" n

It is always top of the list of my point that advanced technology put our life forward ,more available things are applied to our entertainment and job by improving the performance and practicability of facility and by elevating our economic level.
for(For) example, the advent of computer has spawned many advances in education , helping us reading book more efficient and free（换成方便更好一些吧） and increaseing（increasing） our interest in studying . similarly (Similarly),the advanced （最好换一个词 modern or development避免重复）technology has emancipated printers by receiving （不应该用节约或者减少一类的词吗）time to expand creative possibilities and by doing relegating（？） repetitive talks to computers . perhaps （Perhaps） the most important( is) ,however (连词用的不对吧?), science brought about more and more impetus to education,therefore enhancing the development of society and technology in return .(最重要的是科学技术推进了教育发展，反过来增进了社会和教育的进步？读的不是很明白)

It constitute another reason for my point of view that the increasing development of our society parallels more demands.consider(Considering),for example ,we have to reading (read)more books in unit to come up with（with 啥？） . Anyone would agree that i (I)only desire to have my own life ,comfort ,easy（ease）,and no pressure . But what if you are washed out ?or （Or）what if you have no capital to sustain your life?  Indisputably ,realizing our dream requires us to study efficient(efficiently) ,do things to elevate our capacity ,thereby giving us a favorable position toward our dream.

To further clarify this ,we would add that we could occupy many advantages if read e-book. Students who often read e-book could remove any good sentences he like(likes) to certain place easily and read them next time and more times ,then your capacity boosts. On the contrary,
although students who only read printed book can also do that , you actually would find they do it less efficient(efficiently) and more complicate(complex) . A survey shows that efficiency can put us forward directly. So that it is .

Judging from all the evidences offered above .we could arrive at this conclusion technology direct (directs)printed book to disappear .moreover ,it is partly beneficial for us ,especially students, (who should) catch up with the rapidly development of society.