香蕉皮-Argument200--不知道结论谬误结尾应该如何归纳？？

bananasliceUID: 2628141

Argument200-- Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male comsumer and emphasize both the effectivenes of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff  to nervous or suffering patients.

The speaker's assertion is that the dental advertisment should target male comsumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients. To support the statement the speaker cites a statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. Based on the statistics the speaker reasons that men are more likely to be distressed  about having dental work done than women are. I find this argument is not well supported, as follewing discussion shows.
the speaker do not provide the detailed number of men and women go to visit the dentist in this collected statistics. Then we can  not eliminate the assume that perhaps men patients' number is far more than women, which leads to the three times more difference in faint. Unless the speaker offers direct quantities to confirm us that the base of both men and women was the same, I can not come to the conclusion that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are relies on such vague statistics.
Second, the speaker's assertion that the dental advertisement should target on male comsumer might lead to the loss of female patients, considering that female patients would feel being overlooked or regarding the dental clinnic as male exclusive, the increase numberof male patients might small than the decrease number of female patients.
Last but not the least, the speaker believes that advertisment emphasize on both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients could attract comsumers, while it might not necessary the case , the speaker overlooked other possiblities which comsumers might interest such as the price of dental work or if the medical facilities is advanced. Since the speaker fails to  integrated consider the comsumers' interests in advertisements, the dicision is unreliable as it stands.
In sum, to better asses the assertion the speaker needs to confirm us the conclusion that  men are three times more than women in faint based on the same amount of men and women....

bananasliceUID: 2628141

我这道题写了有三个错误1 数据模糊，也许男女病人基数不一样，这才使得男病人晕过去的多于女的
                      2不应该针对男病人广告， 那样会失去女病人支持
                      3广告中强调对疼痛敏感的医生是不够的，忽略了病人可能关注的其他因素
后两个问题都是来自结论，我就不知道结尾应该说些什么来完善结论谬误了。。

missingusaUID: 2625832

lz可以参考此帖中关于结尾的部分:
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-607686-1-1.html
以及这个帖子中版友们的讨论:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=725772
希望对lz能够有所帮助~

bananasliceUID: 2628141

3# missingusa
相当受用~多谢了！！