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Students at university or in college should choose the most difficult classes even if they cannot get top grades (marks) in them
There are an increasing number of debates surfing in educational area. That is whether students should learn the most difficult classes along with rapidly fierce competition in their academic life. Nevertheless, I am firmly convinced that such a statement is not a rational requirement for students for the following reasons.

In the first place, the interesting interest is the most（more） excellent teacher for students compare to high-level subjects. Although some person hold such opinion that students would gain much knowledge from learning the most difficult classes, the serious outcome would be taken to students that if they were coerced to learn such difficult classes which they did not interested in, they would confront many serious problems during studying. At the same time, the subjects they learned are difficult and boring. Gradually they would become doubt about their own potential and capability. Moreover, the frustration from learning difficult classes attack their confidence and optimistic mood, therefore, they would turn to pessimism at 不知道有没有这个搭配everything they confront at present or in the future

In the second place, the most difficult classes did not the one which is fittest for every student. The best choice for students is to choose classes which are useful in their mind if the class indeed is beneficial to students' work or further education（whether the classes in their mind are indeed benificial ones to their work or future education.). For instance, a student who is major in humanities, it is unnecessary for him to take calculus classes去掉 which is not only difficult to him but also did not work （reflects）any necessary function in his future career, and the only thing enough for him is learned simple operation method. 想表达的是……Meanwhile, he may utilize the time saved in difficult classes to learn more useful knowledge such as how to plan his career in an efficient way and how to improve his interpersonal skills.
In conclusion, I believe that it is not a feasible way to take the most difficult classes for students. Meanwhile, the student should be encouraged by school authorities and family to choose classes which are definitely they interested （are definitely be interestedin and are good for developing their integrated skills.
词汇用的很好 很值得学习 还有结构论点都很明确 觉得有问题的都标识出了

stefanie299UID: 2667762

Human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animal

In this day and age, an increasing number of land needed by a growing number of population all over the world. Someone hold such opinion that government authorities should give priority to save land for ceaseless accumulating population, no matter for development of society or demands of residents' living. As far as I am concerned, nevertheless, it is necessary to saving land for endangered animals, which would bring about many advantages for individuals even the society as a whole.

Fist of all, animals, especially the endangered animal is play extremely irreplaceable role in human’s life. Human beings, as a largely part of nature, have obligations and responsibilities to create better environments for endangered animals. The Giant panda, the one of endangered animals in China, it is a symbol of China traditional culture as well. The worse environment conditions, the less number of Giant pandas. However, government authorities allocated funds to build a huge proper building for Giant pandas--the Wolong Nature Reserve in Sichuan Province in where the weather, the water resource and the bamboo are the most available resources for Giant pandas. At present, there are thousands of Giant pandas babies born in and growing up in Wolong Nature Reserve in Sichuan Province. Meanwhile, the Wolong Nature Reserve in Sichuan Province has sent dozens of Giant pandas to every province in China, at the same time spread over Taiwan, Hongkong and Macao.

In addition, the outcome will be serious if human beings explore lands for themselves other than take into account for endangered animals. In other words, lacking of lands for endangered animals would worsen the speed of extinction of endangered animals. First, endangered animals will generate many opportunities for children. Existing of endangered animals can expand children’s outlook by visiting them in zoo or other likely places. And it also won't let the regrettable phenomenon happen, that is, someday, might children see these endangered animals in documentaries or in encyclopedia, even in museum. Therefore, we should saving lands for endangered animals as a requisite.

In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that we can not fail to see the unparalleled role of endangered animal played in our own life. We should make our efforts to take any feasible measure to protect endangered animals rather than merely consider our private interests.

stefanie299UID: 2667762

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.


Some people hold such opinion that teachers should allocate homework to students everyday for which is beneficial to solidify the knowledge they learned in class. However, other point out the opposite viewpoint in such statement that instructors should not assign to students homework everyday because the students have right to relax themselves at time out of class rather than doing homework continuum. As far as I am concerned, the statement depending on different levels student.

Fist of all, there are almost two kinds of students should not be assigned homework everyday. Firstly, students in kindergarten or in elementary school should not be assigned homework everyday. Because one's childhood must be full of happy and fun, they could enjoy their childhood as much as possible instead of overwhelmed by strenuous homework. Otherwise everyday homework might defeat their enthusiasm at study. Secondly, students in university or college must not doing homework everyday, school authorities should lay more emphasis on cultivating students' self-learning capability instead of doing homework everyday mechanically. The most feasible way for them is teachers allocate certain thesis to them, then a group of student searching information, brainstorming, discussing how to finish homework efficiently and taking which method or project. Consequently, they would learn many from doing homework: the sense of team spirit, interpersonal skills and how to communicate or cooperate with others effectively.

Besides, teachers should allocate homework to the student at middle school or high school everyday. Someone point out that students at middle school or high school at present are suffered stress and pressure from study seriously, they should be suggested to relax themselves out of school rather than doing homework everyday. However, owing to middle school students have relative low self-discipline. It is compulsory for teacher assigning homework to them everyday, which is not only for students to understand what they leaned everyday well and deeply, but also bring about more chances for them to learn more knowledge that can not learn from class.

In conclusion, from what have been discussed above, I believe that the issue that whether teacher should allocate homework to students everyday should be rely on diverse level of students.

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Some people hold such opinion that teachers should allocate homework to students everyday for which is beneficial to solidify the knowledge they have learned in class. However, others point out the opposite viewpoint in such statement that instructors should not assign (to) students homework everyday because the students have right to relax themselves (at time) out of class rather than doing homework continuum??. As far as I am concerned, the statement depending on different levels student.题目分析的挺好的，最后一句要修改。说清楚，否则不容易理解

Fist of all, in my opinion, there are almost two kinds of students should not be assigned homework everyday. //Firstly//   The first is the student in kindergarten or in elementary school . Because one's childhood must be full of happy and fun, they should enjoy their childhood as much as possible instead of being overwhelmed by strenuous homework. Otherwise everyday homework might defeat their enthusiasm //at//  for study. //Secondly//, The second is the student in university or college, school authorities should lay more emphasis on cultivating students' self-learning capability instead of mechanicallydoing homework everyday. The most feasible way //for them// is teachers allocate certain thesis//project to them, then a group of student searching information, //brainstorming, //  discussing how to finish homework efficiently and taking which method or project. Consequently, they would learn //many// a lot from doing homework: the sense of team spirit???/// cooperation, interpersonal skills//communication , and how to communicate or cooperate with others effectively.



Besides, teachers should allocate homework to the student at middle school or high school everyday. Someone point out that students at middle school or high school at present are seriously suffered stress and pressure from study , they should be suggested to relax themselves out of school rather than doing homework everyday. However, owing to low//lack of self discipline for middle school students .  assigning compulsory homework by teachers  is not only good for students to understand what they leaned everyday well and deeply, but also bring about more chances for them to learn more knowledge that can not learn from class.
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In conclusion, from what have been discussed above, I believe that the issue that whether teacher should allocate homework to students everyday should be rely on diverse level of students.

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tqidtestUID: 2766196

Some people hold such opinion that teachers should allocate homework to students everyday for which is beneficial to solidify the knowledge they have learned in class. However, others point out the opposite viewpoint in such statement that instructors should not assign (to) students homework everyday because the students have right to relax themselves (at time) out of class rather than doing homework continuum??这个词有问题. As far as I am concerned, the statement depending on different levels student.题目分析的挺好的，最后一句要修改。说清楚，否则不容易理解 Fist of all, 加 in my opinion, 因为两种学生是自己定义的，there are almost two kinds of students should not be assigned homework everyday.   建议改成 The first kind is the student in kindergarten or in elementary school . Because one's childhood must be full of happy and fun, they should而不是could enjoy their childhood as much as possible instead of being overwhelmed by strenuous homework. Otherwise everyday homework might defeat their enthusiasm   for而不是at study. 建议改成 The second is the student in university or college, school authorities should lay more emphasis on cultivating students' self-learning capability instead of mechanicallydoing homework everyday. The most feasible way //for them//建议省略 is teachers allocate certain thesis/建议改成/project to them, then a group of student searching information, //brainstorming, //建议删掉  discussing how to finish homework efficiently and taking which method or project. Consequently, they would learn //many/复数改成 a lot from doing homework: the sense of team spirit建议改成 cooperation, interpersonal skills/建议改成/communication , //and how to communicate or cooperate with others effectively建议删掉//、、. Besides, teachers should allocate homework to the student at middle school or high school everyday. Someone point out that students at middle school or high school at present are seriously副词不要离修饰太远 suffered stress and pressure from study , they should be suggested to relax themselves out of school rather than doing homework everyday. However, owing to low建议改成lack of self discipline for middle school students .  assigning compulsory homework by teachers  is not only good for students to understand what they leaned everyday well and deeply, but also bring about more chances for them to learn more knowledge that can not learn from class.  这句话我修改了一下顺序。。。 |& U In conclusion, from what have been discussed above, I believe that the issue that whether teacher should allocate homework to students everyday should be rely on diverse level of students. 还有什么疑问？文章写的不错，之所以没有说明，是因为我觉得每个人写东西思路不一样。如果我给你改成我的想法，你以后同样遇到这种问题还是会按照你的思路写下去的。而如果自己觉得红色的地方有问题，便会找到自己的思路。所以只要没有什么严重的语法错误，我觉得就不会出什么大问题。

stefanie299UID: 2667762

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嗯。。有道理，你的想法和我老师给我改的评语是一样的。但有些方面的修改我不赞成

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stefanie299UID: 2667762

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students who keep their rooms neat and organized tend to be more successful than students who do not.

There is a suspending debate in today's society that whether one's success is relate to his/her daily behavior such as cleaning and keeping his/her room neat. Some people says that it is a ridiculous saying that one's routine habits deciding his whole career, because the success is confined by many factors rather than merely the living habit. Nevertheless, as for me, the subtle behavior habit like keeping one's room tidy and ordered is exactly an important factor to push one paves to successful way easily.

First of all, keeping rooms neat is a good way for students learning skills. As an old saying goes that, one's attitude deciding his everything. During this process, they may learn how to put furniture in a feasible way, and how to arrange their limited leisure time to do things as many as possible. Students who can learn from this process much more than others who do not doing house works. And this definitely is beneficial to reach one's success easily in some extent.

In addition, the habit of keeping rooms tidy and organized is also an important factor to make one more successful than others. Because, cleaning and keeping rooms ordered and comfortable is a good way for students to relax themselves. Students in today's society are overwhelmed more pressure and stress from study than before. Doing some house works is a better way for them to sooth their strained mood and nerve. During cleaning, they are able to see the dirty and messy their environments turn to neat and tidy. Therefore such experience like as a way of pushing bad mood and passive emotion out of their body. At the same time, they might refill energy and vigor from doing house works for the following study. Facing and handling what difficulties they confront with refresh mood. Admittedly, they would more successful than others who do not.

From what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that students be supposed to be persuaded keeping their rooms ordered and neat which is beneficial for them to cultivate good habit and that is definite good way to help them become successful person.

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