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[活动] 小玮 2.17 TOP 6 综合作文作业 [复制链接]

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本帖最后由 linawanggta 于 2010-2-17 23:46 编辑

The listening passages contends thatalthough communal online encyclopedia is not perfect in every respects, it actually valuable method at present in comparison with the traditional version. This opinion refutes the idea in reading passages completely.


To begin with, the listening passage argues against the consideration of error in the communal online encyclopedia mentioned by the reading passage. To support his viewpoints, the speaker illustrate that error is inevitable even in the traditional encyclopedia. Incontrast, on line encyclopedia wins benefit on this point, gaining the convenience of being revised on time.It takes even decade for the printed encyclopedia to be corrected.

Moreover, the listening passage goes on to discuss that several strategies are useful when it comes to protecting online encyclopedia from malicious attack. Online version may be saved as read-only format, the changes from outside other than the editor are not allowed. Or it may take consideration of only reliable. Assigning special editors to take full responsibility the scrutiny say eliminating the vicious revision.

Furthermore, the listening passages holdthe viewpoint that the limited space in traditional encyclopedia fails in satisfyinga large range of interest from the public. In accordance with the listening passages, for the limitation on printed version, traditional encyclopedia editors have to always restrain the knowledge scope based on their own preference and judgments which might be partial and away from the accurate consideration of the readers.
In this regard, online version outstripsthe printed one by rendering a variety of information which well caters toreaders with different tastes.
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怎么没有人改作文。。

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