The issue at hand is whether the government should spend more money on education for young children than in[这个应该多余了] university. Undoubtedly it will trigger a severe hated debate on[这个…语气太过于激烈了吧] such controversial issue due to various angles[从不同的角度,我不确定可不可以这样表达,我也想过,但是没敢用,写了aspect] and experiences of individuals. While I concede that the education of children is important to some extent, nevertheless, the college education should be put on the first place among those two things.
To begin with, I hold the view that the college education requires much more funds and investment for students to perfect experiment facilities for student to do academic research. While for children, there hardly needs such investments. To put it another way, their requirement are not the complex and diversified compared[没明白] with college. Furthermore, college may need to invest on some Co-operation programs to facilitate their student better prepared for the future job hunting. According to a survey on the budget of Research-oriented Universities in our nation, three quarters among them have deficits which caused by the ever-increasing improvement of better teaching environment.
Furthermore, compared with investment on college education, spending money on the education of young children may have several unexpected drawbacks. No one can deny the childhood is the most precious time free of pressure and full of joy and happiness. Suppose we provide perfect education facilities to educate them, it will take up plenty of time on the study or courses which are still profound for them. It will undoubtedly severe impacts their proper development both physically and psychologically. We should let them grow in a much nature environment. Thus, investment on children education will not only be nearly impossible to achieve its final goals and expected values, but also puts heavy burden on the young children[这个结论有点……].
Thus, as far as I am concerned, government should place the college education on a relatively critical position when spending money when compared with children education.