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2.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.


In education, teachers are those who provide schooling for others. Because of their vital roles to people’s lives, teachers are always honored as lifelong mentors throughout the history. They teach us not only knowledge in textbooks, but also lessons of life. However, it is not to say that our behavior and manners are solely determined by teachers. As far as I am concerned, it is not reasonable to pay teachers according to how well their students perform.

At the beginning, students’ performance is not dependent on teachers’ work. Admittedly, students’ actions can be reformed and regulated by teachers’ influence in some degree. However, once the character of a student is shaped, it seldom can be changed again by external world including the teachers. Therefore, enlightening teachers such as kindergarten nurses and primary school teachers play an extremely important position in cultivating kids’ or pupils’ characters, while the acts of high school and even college students are mainly controlled by themselves instead of their teachers. For example, students with perseverance may do better than impetuous students in academic study even though they are sitting in the same classroom and taught by the same teachers; and introverted students are less possible to make trouble than outgoing ones on campus when they are out of their teachers’ sight. In a word, teachers cannot reach every student’s all aspects of life through their limited work and students’ performance doesn’t depend on their teachers alone. So it is not irrational to pay teachers according to how their students behavior.

Let’s make an assumption that if the teachers were paid according to how their students perform one day in the future. Then, a plenty of related criteria would be made to measure how a student perform on campus, possibly resulting in sums of bad results. For instance, scores in examinations would tend to be faked for a high score was beneficial to both the students and the teachers. This could also explain the phenomenon that there are a few immoral teachers in colleges nowadays who are productive of academic papers with low qualities linked to their professional titles. As a matter of fact, the justice and health of education system are bound to die out sooner or later.

In my point of view, teachers should be paid according to students’ evaluation toward them and progress on their own research. To any type of teacher, their mainly task is to teach and to do research. Students’ evaluations over a teacher are the best references of his/her teaching ability and a certain pay for progress on research would encourage them to further their research. To sum up, I do not support the maintenance that teachers should be paid according to how the students perform.

奇流沙UID: 2698749

2.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.

In education, teachers are those who provide schooling for others. Because of their vital roles to people’s lives, teachers are always honored as lifelong mentors throughout the history. They teach us not only knowledge in textbooks, but also lessons of life. However, it is not to say that our behavior and manners are solely determined by teachers. As far as I am concerned, it is not reasonable to pay teachers according to how well their students perform.

At the beginning, students’ performance is not dependent on teachers’ work. Admittedly, students’ actions can be reformed and regulated by teachers’ influence in some degree. However, once the character of a student is shaped, it seldom can be changed again by external world including the teachers. Therefore, enlightening teachers such as kindergarten nurses and primary school teachers play an extremely important position in cultivating kids’ or pupils’ characters, while the acts of high school and even college students are mainly controlled by themselves instead of their teachers.（膜拜下~这么长的句子居然这么清晰~） For example, students with perseverance may do better than impetuous students in academic study even though they are sitting in the same classroom and taught by the same teachers; and introverted students are less possible to make trouble than outgoing ones on campus when they are out of their teachers’ sight. In a word, teachers cannot reach every student’s all aspects of life through their limited work and students’ performance doesn’t depend on their teachers alone. So it is not irrational to pay teachers according to how their students behavior.
论点：学生已形成的性格以及因此所影响的表现行为不仅仅是由老师影响的。
Let’s make an assumption that if the teachers were paid according to how their students perform one day in the future. Then, a plenty of related criteria（我想了半天还是用了standard这个土土的词，看到这个才发现还可以用这个词讲……） would be made to measure how a student perform on campus, possibly resulting in sums of bad results（重复，冒昧改下consequences如何？）. For instance, scores in examinations would tend to be faked for a high score was beneficial to both the students and the teachers. This could also explain the phenomenon that there are a few immoral teachers in colleges nowadays who are productive of academic papers with low qualities linked to their professional titles. As a matter of fact, the justice and health of education system are bound to die out sooner or later.

In my point of view, teachers should be paid according to students’ evaluation toward them and progress on their own research. To any type of teacher, their mainly task is to teach and to do research. Students’ evaluations over a teacher are the best references of his/her teaching ability and a certain pay for progress on research would encourage them to further their research. To sum up, I do not support the maintenance that teachers should be paid according to how the students perform.
粉色—好地方
红色—修改（没动啥，几乎没问题……）
最后一段提出自己对于问题的解决方法。很新颖，但是是不是也会有点危险？毕竟文章没有要提出自己的看法，这只是观点支持反对型文章。 考场上会不会没有时间想出没有漏洞的方案？但是在这里是兴致发挥也不错，考场上慎用~~

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3.1：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas.


A thousand people may have a thousand kinds of definitions of success. In my opinion, anyone who realizes his dreams during his life can be defined as a successful person. However, no matter which kind of definition, good looks and dresses are no more important than good ideas for success, to a sizable percentage of the population at least.

Different groups of people require different elements for success. It is hard to say which element is more important than another one as a generalization to the world as a whole. To the public stars, especially to models and some certain movie stars, good looks and dresses are really their first consideration to succeed. Nevertheless, how about those people who are not characterized as engaging appearance; because appearance is born that they cannot control it or change it. Are they destined to be in the dry tree all their lives once they come to this world? From this perspective, we can easily find the statement given above ridiculous. As for engineers, what really matters is their technology skills; and for teachers in school, it is their teaching methods and research abilities that we care much about. Any statement about the priority over success will be in vain because of its hasty generalization.

Actually, there are large amounts of people around us prove to the world that they succeed without good looks and dresses. Take the renowned entrepreneur Jack Ma as an example. No one in the world would deny his success in E-Commerce while no one in the world would admit him as good-looking, either. It is because of
his creative idea applied into a new field for commerce that make him to be invited to give lectures in the world-famous universities and colleges such as Harvard, MIT, Wharton Business School and so forth. Moreover, who discovered the Theory of Relativity that changed people’s concept of this world? But what this old man---Albert Einstein----impressed us most is his messy hair and scruffy beard, and more importantly, his big brain filled with novel ideas. It is those people who own creative ideas rather than good look that changed this world and improved our lives.

In the nutshell, good looks are innate and good dresses are bought while success is earned by efforts. Good ideas are always of paramount importance for success. In a word, I don’t think good looks and dresses are more important than good ideas for success.

(哎~~结尾还是不够丰富。。。。憋不出来了反正~~)

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3.2：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.


As the society has experienced great changes these years and our lives are improving day by day, we are burdening more and more responsibilities as individuals of this society as a whole nowadays. In my opinion, it is essential for the young people to have to ability to plan and organize, reaching fitness in both physiology and psychology, for things are becoming more and more complicated within the limited time in modern society.

Young people need to have the ability to plan and organize to guarantee physiological health. Without physical fitness, we are not able to continue our work or study. There are an increasing number of investigations showing that people working in offices tend to get job-related illness, such as repetitive strain injury or repetitive motion syndrome, especially for people who are doing the same things all day. Spinal diseases and back pain are common among them. As a matter of fact, all these illness will lead to a serious health problem one day which will definitely exert bad effects to their vocations. However, this trend can be reduced only by a set of proper plans to their jobs. Stand up and make a cup of coffee, discussing over the complicated problems confused you with the other colleagues, and do some neck and waist movements to relax yourself at the some time, instead of sitting there tightly and staring at the computer all day long but complaining your confusions after work. Different arrangements will result in different efficiency in jobs and different physical conditions as well. In this degree, anyone who will value his own health in modern society will value the importance of ability of planning and organizing, too.

Psychological fitness also determines the essentiality of planning and organizing ability in modern society. At the age of information and knowledge explosion, people are enforced to learn all kinds of know-how or skills in order to live a good life, especially to students in schools. Without an appropriate plan and organization of their study, students will find it hard to continue their learning process, leading to a lot of psychological diseases such as depression and anxiety. Experts in education have discovered that cross-curriculum method will improve the learning efficiency greatly. Therefore, students can make a plan according to this method before they start to set foot in some new fields. Moreover, a sufficient amount of exercises over study will also contribute a lot to their mental health. In a word, young people who want to have a light-hearted and happy learning process will absolutely possess the ability of planning and organizing currently in modern society.

Young people are the hopes to a country to have a bright future and a healthy nation largely depends on its citizens’, especially its young generations’, physiological and psychological fitness. In sum, I do agree with the statement that it is essential for young people have the ability to plan and organize.

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3.1：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Good looks and dresses are more important for success than good ideas.2 q7 l& p! a# P! ]# R

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A thousandpeople may have a thousand kinds of definitions of success. In myopinion, anyone who realizes his dreams during his life can be definedas a successful person. However, no matter which kind of definition,good looks and dresses are no more important than good ideas forsuccess, to a sizable percentage of the population at least.
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Differentgroups of people require different elements(怎么都觉得别扭啊,quality) for success. It is hard tosay which element is more important than another one as ageneralization to(of) the world as a whole. To the public stars, especiallyto models and some certain movie stars(这个public star难道不包含movie star?), good looks and dresses arereally their first consideration to succeed(不觉得该是名词形式么,success). Nevertheless, how aboutthose people who are not characterized as engaging appearance;(?) becauseappearance is born that(删去) they cannot control it or change it.这几句话是怎么回事 Are theydestined to be in the dry tree(处于劣势) all their lives once(ever since) they come to thisworld? From this perspective, we can easily find the statement givenabove ridiculous. As for engineers, what really matters is theirtechnology skills; and for teachers in school, it is their teachingmethods and research abilities that we care much about. Any statementabout the priority over(in) success will be in vain because of its hastygeneralization. 有点没有太明白你的意思
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* Y  Q9 D1 Q. X9 |, E9 EActually,there are large amounts of people around us prove(proving) to the world thatthey succeed without good looks and dresses. Take the renownedentrepreneur Jack Ma as an example. No one in the world would deny hissuccess in E-Commerce while no one in the world would admit him asgood-looking, either. It is because of
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In thenutshell, good looks are innate and good dresses are bought whilesuccess is earned by efforts. Good ideas are always of paramountimportance for success. In a word, I don’t think good looks and dressesare more important than good ideas for success.
你的二三段让人感觉非常地不顺啊，还有啊，不知道我跟你说过没有，你不喜欢把论点在段首提出么？还是你喜欢就是比较散文化一点的风格，所以故意的。反正我的感觉是，虽然你的整篇文章都围绕一个话题讲，但是有点乱，东一句西一句的。
最后，你的很多用法还是不错的，赞一下.再有就是我也觉得这篇的确是非常不好写，这种很显然的事非常折磨人，写成这样也非常不错了，稍微加强一下逻辑性就好了。

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3.2：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern society has become more complex, so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
As the society has experienced great changes these years and our lives are improving day by day, we are burdening more and more responsibilities as（请教：这个as是作为，还是因为捏？）individuals of this society as a whole nowadays. In my opinion, it is essential for the young people to have to（the?） ability to plan and organize, reaching fitness in both physiology and psychology, for things are becoming more and more complicated within the limited time in modern society.

Young people need to have the ability to plan and organize to guarantee physiological health. Without physical fitness, we are not able to continue our work or study. There are an increasing number of(这样不觉得繁琐咩？直接用increasing行不行？) investigations showing that people working in offices tend to get job-related illness, such as repetitive strain injury or repetitive motion syndrome（牛！~~\(≧▽≦)/~）, especially for people who are doing the same things all day. Spinal diseases and back pain are common among them. As a matter of fact, all these illness will lead to a serious health problem one day which will definitely exert bad effects to their vocations. However, this trend can be reduced only by a set of proper plans to their jobs. Stand up and make a cup of coffee, discussing over the complicated problems confused you with the other colleagues, and do some neck and waist movements to relax yourself at the some time, instead of sitting there tightly and staring at the computer all day long but complaining your confusions after work. Different arrangements will result in different efficiency in jobs and different physical conditions as well. In this degree, anyone who will value his own health in modern society will value the importance of ability of planning and organizing, too.
表达太强大了……拜倒……
但是私以为，lz文中计划和组织的能力都是很小的方面了，其实好像举得例子不用计划不用组织也可以啊……不能很充分的论证论点啊……
Psychological fitness also determines the essentiality of planning and organizing ability in modern society. At the age of information and knowledge explosion, people are enforced to learn all kinds of know-how or skills in order to live a good life, especially to students in schools. Without an appropriate plan and organization of their study, students will find it hard to continue their learning process, leading to a lot of psychological diseases such as depression and anxiety. Experts in education（我记得你以前用过一个词educationist,其实这是废话一句……） have discovered that cross-curriculum method will improve the learning efficiency greatly. Therefore, students can make a plan according to this method before they start to set foot in some new fields. （此处要是再有详细的说明就好了）Moreover, a sufficient amount of exercises over study will also contribute a lot to their mental health. In a word, young people who want to have a light-hearted and happy learning process will absolutely possess the ability of planning and organizing currently in modern society.

Young people are the hopes to a country to have a bright future and a healthy nation largely depends on its citizens’, especially its young generations’, physiological and psychological fitness. In sum, I do agree with the statement that it is essential for young people have the ability to plan and organize.

哦，lz是从工作和学习两个方面来举例子的……意见如上，再次拜倒在lz强大的表达能力上……

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3.4：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability of writing and reading is less important than before.


Since the society has experienced great changes, we are now living in an era of knowledge and information explosion. In order to improve our competitiveness in this society, in my opinion, the ability of writing and reading is no less important, even more important, than before.

First, writing ability is becoming more and more essential nowadays. The rapid development of society provides more opportunities for us to success and more keen competition in the society as well. People in every corner are forcing to write sums of things everyday, such as applications for a job, personal statement for applying colleges or universities and so forth. Without a good ability of writing to explain clearly and formally what we want to express, the employees may find it hard to discover what the advantages are within us. Consequently, we are possible in the dry tree before we can have a face-to-face interview with the employees. As the society is becoming more complicated than before, the employees always do not have enough time to interview every applicant asking for a job or position. They need to find out whether this person is the one they need as soon as possible merely from his/her paper application and continue the following process like having an appointment. Thus, in this degree, it will largely depend on the applicant’s ability of writing that whether s/he can grasp the opportunity in the future job market.

Second, it is obvious that the ability of reading is more important than before since we are living in an ocean of information and need to find out what information is useful and helpful to us within the least time. The ability of reading is essential in our daily life in many aspects. We have to skim the newspaper in just a few minutes even though it may cover events occurred all over the world yesterday. We also need to find out what information is helpful for us to solve the problem among a sea of materials. The less time we need to find out what is important to us, the better position we will have in this intensely competitive society.

To sum up, I do not agree with the statement that the ability of writing and reading is less important than before.

（第一次限时，超了好多，写得也挫了好多~~~唉，还得继续加油咯~~~~）

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Since the society has experienced great changes, we are now living in an era of knowledge and information explosion. In order to improve our competitiveness in this society, in my opinion, the ability of writing and reading is no less important, even more important, than before.
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First, writing ability is becoming more and more essential nowadays. The rapid development of society provides more opportunities for us to success and more keen competition in the society as well. People in every corner are forcing to write sums of things everyday, such as applications for a job, personal statement for applying colleges or universities and so forth. Without a good ability of writing to explain clearly and formally what we want to express, the employees may find it hard to discover what the advantages are within us. Consequently, we are possible in the dry tree before we can have a face-to-face interview with the employees. As the society is becoming more complicated than before, the employees always do not have enough time to interview every applicant asking for a job or position. They need to find out whether this person is the one they need as soon as possible merely from his/her paper application and continue the following process like having an appointment. Thus, in this degree, it will largely depend on the applicant’s ability of writing that whether s/he can grasp the opportunity in the future job market.& X0 I3 T  I4 u% ~( m

Second, it is obvious that the ability of reading is more important than before since we are living in an ocean of information and need to find out what information is useful and helpful to us within the least time. The ability of reading is essential in our daily life in many aspects. We have to skim the newspaper in just a few minutes even though it may cover events occurred all over the world yesterday. We also need to find out what information is helpful for us to solve the problem among a sea of materials. The less time we need to find out what is important to us, the better position we will have in this intensely competitive society. + v: E3 s6 H0 U) D' j9 M
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To sum up, I do not agree with the statement that the ability of writing and reading is less important than before.
楼主太谦虚了，我觉得写得真的很不错。用词很地道，句式变化也蛮多的。不过最后一段好像有点短，显得文章结束得太过匆忙了。

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3.4：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability of writing and reading is less important than before.

Since the society has experienced great changes, we are now living in an era of knowledge and information explosion. In order to improve our competitiveness in this society, in my opinion, the ability of writing and reading is no less important, even more important, than before.

First, writing ability is becoming more and more essential nowadays. The rapid development of society provides more opportunities for us to success and more keen competition in the society as well. People in every corner are forcing to write sums of things everyday, such as applications for a job, personal statement for applying colleges or universities and so forth. Without a good ability of writing to explain clearly and formally what we want to express, the employees may find it hard to discover what the advantages are within us. Consequently, we are possible in the dry tree（赞~\(≧▽≦)/~） before we can have a face-to-face interview with the employees. As the society is becoming more complicated than before, the employees always do not have enough time to interview every applicant asking for a job or position. They need to find out whether this person is the one they need as soon as possible merely from his/her paper application and continue the following process like having an appointment（没有必要的描述去掉）. Thus, in this degree, it will largely depend on the applicant’s ability of writing that whether s/he can grasp the opportunity in the future job market.

Second, it is obvious that the ability of reading is more important than before since we are living in an ocean of information and need to find out what information is useful and helpful to us within the least time. The ability of reading is essential in our daily life in many aspects. We have to skim the newspaper in just a few minutes even though it may cover events occurred all over the world yesterday. We also need to find out what information is helpful for us to solve the problem among a sea of materials. The less time we need to find out what is important to us, the better position we will have in this intensely competitive society.

To sum up, I do not agree with the statement that the ability of writing and reading is less important than before.尾段简洁过头了……(⊙_⊙)
咋说咧，今天的风格好像变了个人似的，但是你说是限时的咩，不过以前的文章感觉很华美，今天是很现实。其实我觉得今天的文章更适合托福的八股文考法（哦，我太能摧残美了……）不过童鞋你要是考试还有时间的话，可以继续那种优美的写法，毕竟之后是为写申请服务的，so~~也顺便让大众享受一把咩~但是时间不多的话，还是简单就这篇的风格继续呗~
Ps：童鞋你今个也把读和写分开来讨论了呀~~~O(∩_∩)O~

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3.6：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should pay more attention on health care issues than on environmental issues.

The slogan of “of the people, by the people, for the people” is what the government always maintains, which covers one of the aspects that government should help to solve sums of issues bothering its people, such as health care issues and environmental issues and so forth. As far as I am concerned, environmental issues are as important as health care issues to be given enough attention on.

First, environmental issues are rising to health care issues sometimes. On the other saying, many health care issues result from environmental problems. For instance, acid rain is one of the criminals of airway inflammation and sandstorm does a lot of damages to people’s eyesight. To pay attention to environmental issues is to pay attention to health care issues in this degree. People are always taking the health care into considerations when forcing the government to solve environmental problems as soon as possible. Landfill locations, deforestations, waste water pollutions are always threatening people’s survival; nearly all the environmental issues are bound with health care issues.

Environmental issues not only result in health care issues, but also influence the whole nation’s economy system and even survival. An increasing number of investigations are showing that any government who ignores the importance of environment protection during the process of economical construction will definitely pay much more to rescue its living environment than the number he gets from it. Otherwise, the whole economy system will collapse for losing its substantial basis. Health care issues may possibly decrease people’s living standard, environmental issues, however, may threaten the nation’s survival as a whole. The most relevant example is the increasing Yangtze River flooding in China. As the mother who nurtured over 1.3 billion children, Yangtze River was heavily polluted by the chemical factories along her sides. Fortunately, China Government is beginning to realize the seriousness of this issue and introducing a few reliable laws to protect his mother. From this respect, we will find out that environmental issues should be paid no less attention on than on health care issues.

As another event related to the whole nation’s living standard and even survival, environmental issues are as important as health care issues. In my opinion, government should pay enough attention to both health care issues and environmental issues to realize its goal of “of/by/for the people”.

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3.6：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Government should pay more attention on health care issues than on environmental issues.
    The slogan of “of the people, by the people, for the people” is what the government always maintains, which covers one of the aspects that government should help to solve sums of issues bothering its people, such as health care issues and environmental issues and so forth. As far as I am concerned, environmental issues are as important as health care issues to be given enough attention on.
    First, environmental issues are rising to health care issues sometimes. On the other saying, many health care issues result from environmental problems. For instance, acid rain is one of the criminals of airway inflammation and sandstorm does a lot of damages to people’s eyesight. To pay attention to environmental issues is to pay attention to health care issues in this degree. People are always taking the health care into considerations when forcing the government to solve environmental problems as soon as possible(这句我感觉不太地道). Landfill locations, deforestations, waste water pollutions are always threatening people’s survival; nearly all the environmental issues are bound with health care issues. （例子不错！）
    Environmental issues not only result in health care issues, but also influence the whole nation’s economy system and even survival. An increasing number of investigations are showing that any government who ignores the importance of environment protection during the process of economical construction will definitely pay much more to rescue its living environment than the number he gets from it（赞！）. Otherwise, the whole economy system will collapse for losing its substantial basis. Health care issues may possibly decrease people’s living standard, environmental issues, however, may threaten the nation’s survival as a whole. (Health care issues may possibly decrease people’s living standard. Environmental issues, however, may threaten the nation’s survival as a whole.(我感觉应该是两个句子，However所在的句子，一般前面是句号)) The most relevant example is the increasing Yangtze River flooding in China. As the mother who nurtured over 1.3 billion children, Yangtze River was heavily polluted by the chemical factories along her sides. Fortunately, China Government is beginning to realize the seriousness of this issue and introducing a few reliable laws to protect his mother. From this respect, we will find out that environmental issues should be paid no less attention on than on health care issues.
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    As another event related to the whole nation’s living standard and even survival, environmental issues are as important as health care issues. In my opinion, government should pay enough attention to both health care issues and environmental issues to realize its goal of “of/by/for the people”.




词汇丰富，句式多变，例子生动，很不错！一点点建议：全文更紧凑一点！不当之处请谅解！

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3.7：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

There are varieties of ways, such as Internet, TV, magazines and so forth, through which we can learn a lot about a country. Visiting museums is another way among them, however, in my opinion, not the best way to learn about a country. My explanation is as following.

Just like the varieties of ways to learn about a country, there also exist several kinds of museums, like history museum and geography museum, to give a general introduction about a country as a whole. National Geography Museum always mainly talks about location distribution of a country; people may have a general idea about how large it is or what the main economical substances of its local cities and towns are. Geography museum can give people an impression of the country in a geographical degree while the history museum is in charge of telling visitors where this country originates from and how it has developed. History of a nation, which includes most of its culture within, is a vital aspect if one is willing to get known it well. Anyone who wants to have an in-depth concept of a country would not ignore its special culture. Therefore, visiting museums is indeed an appropriate way to learn about a country in this degree.

Nevertheless, any informed person will find that what I have mentioned above about the main responsibilities of different museums and what we can get from them are all superficial. It is not to say that history and culture of a country can only give us an elementary knowledge about a nation, it is to say that the way of visiting museums can only leave us a superficial idea about a country. Because all what we learn from a museum are all accessible from other means like books, TVs and magazines at home. Consequently, those who want to know a country deeply will have to look for another approach. As far as I am concerned, paying a personal tour to a country and getting involved to the natives and the culture there will definitely provide us with the firsthand feeling about a country. In a word, visiting museums seem not to be the best way to learn about a country, to me at least.

In the nutshell, I do agree with the statement that visiting museums is one of the numerous ways to learn about a country. But when it comes to the best way, I don’t think visiting museums is the answer.