2010年独立作文互改小组优秀作文评选贴

beverly910614UID: 2728081

你这次又搞啥啊~~~
晕 都快考试了你~加油吧~

奇流沙UID: 2698749

2010年2月24日   作者：Uranus1989    提交者：奇流沙
内容：
2.24 Do you agree or disagree: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another place.

Some people may prefer to live in the same community all their life since this can prevent them from suffering the difficulties of accustoming to the new environment. However, this situation is sometime impractical and most people may still choose to move to different places during their lifetime. Therefore, I disagree that people should stick in the same place all life.' S0

To start off, most people may choose their living place according to their working place. That is, people may be inclined to live in a place which is close to their company. Therefore, since many people may change their job to pursue greater profit, it is likely that they will move to different places to live. For example, when people attend their graduate courses, they may tend to live near their graduate schools which are usually located in the countryside. However, when they begin their career as an employee or so forth, they may move their home to the prosperous cities in which there are more job opportunities.

Besides, people may change their living place in order to enjoy better living conditions and this case is also quite popular nowadays. For example, when many people firstly start their own business, they may be unable to afford the exorbitant living price in some districts and therefore they may choose to live in some places with cheaper housing price such as countryside or suburb. However, when they gradually become well-off, they may move their homes to some places with better living conditions. In other words, the desire to live in a cozy place propels people to frequently change their living places（不如直接用move因为这样的话会有歧义——1.搬家2.改变居住的地方，就是把自己住的地方拆了建建了又拆……摸鼻子，我好暴力……）.

Last but not the least, many parents may change their living places so as to give their children a better education. For example, some parents may prefer to live nearby some preliminary schools or high schools. In this way, parents can prevent their children from wasting a long time on taking the bus. It seems that the issue of the education has gradually grown to a big concern which affects the parents’ choices of the house location. Therefore, sometimes, parents may frequently change their living place in order to meet the demands of their children’s education.

In a nutshell, it is quite impossible that people may stay in the same place such as the countryside or city during their lifetime. In fact, they may frequently change their living places due to different requirements.

奇流沙UID: 2698749

2010年2月26日   
作者：谈笑Kathy   提交者：奇流沙
猛然发现只有我在这贴好作文咩？~~
Agree or not? Playing sports can teach us the importance lesson of life.

Playing sports, such as badminton, tennis and golf, is an integral part in our daily life. Some people do sports in order to keep fit while others simply enjoy the fun and excitement. Thought it may be possible to measure the value of sports in term of joyfulness, it is extremely difficult to estimate the true value of what sports teach us in our life. Because the lesson sports teaches us lies in many aspects. The spirit of persistence, the attitude while facing success and failure and the essence of competition are what sports can teach us as the lessons of life.

It has been said that the spirit of persistence is the first lesson individual can learn while playing sports. In every process of doing sports, ranging from training as a new-hand to competing with others, persistence is of paramount important. Take playing tennis as an example. A new-hand should learn forehand, backhand and how to serve the ball in the beginning. To make the gesture natural, practicing for tens of thousands of times in the burning sun, repeating the same movement must be a routine. Such practicing will definitely temper one’s willpower, making him/her more persistent. Furthermore, competing with powerful rivals will also teach him/her to be more persevering. v* d+

How to face success and failure in a proper way is what individual will learn when participating in sports. Winning a victory and being defeated are common occurrence in competitions. If one individual is too arrogant after defeating his/her opponents, he/she might lose the next game for he/she is very likely to underestimate the rivals. It is from this experience that one will learn to face success with modest and moderate attitude. By the same token, one will attain the essence of confronting failure during the game, being a more mature person. Compared to our life, the success and failure in the game is also what we will surely encounter in our lifetime. If one armed with the proper attitude towards sorrow and happiness, he/she can be the winner of life.

‘Swifter, stronger, higher’ is what the Olympic Games promotes. Playing sports is a process of challenging oneself continuously. Individual will strive to get a higher standard and win more powerful rivals. In the twenty-first century, the society is full of competitions, ranging from competing the class monitor in primary to acquiring a high social status when grow up. Therefore, the essence of competition one acquires through games is of great importance and it will absolutely encourage individual to climb up a higher peak.

Some people say that life is a sport game. And the significant lessons one learn through playing sports, including persistence, the attitude towards success and failure and the essence of competition will surely be beneficial to one’s life.

bruce520UID: 2634940

4.7的优秀作文，作者：wtnwin(L)   推荐者：bruce520
Is it intelligence our idol while it is better to have a friend who is smart than to have a friend who is humorous? I generally agree with the claim when it comes to the use of friends just chillily for the self-capital appreciation . While insofar as humor, as one of the human emotional appearance in the notions of humanities, I have to take exceptions about the claim when speaking of making friends who are definitely human beings.
* Q5 f  O! q7 E$ kAdmittedly, today ‘s knowledge economy lies in the certain capital appreciation. In other word, we can’t survive without a certain  effectiveness.  Accordingly, as for the smarter friends, of course, as a great tool, you may depend on them just for the simple aspects to deal with certain affairs. However, lack of some humor, just for a single direct capacity which absolutely smart people have, you may lack of happiness in humanities as a human being. You may argue that you enhance the level of living comfort and life equality, after all, the claim lies a certain coldness, in my view, any informed person living in the society would seek to discourage. 5 p6 U8 t- U  @; Y0 T! ]
Well, when it refers to the humanities, humor plays a significant role in contemporary life .For example, when I talk about an academically scientific research, my humorous friends always use their practical and funny experience to argue with me. Nevertheless they reject me , I enjoy a world of the personal funny joke and our relationship are never going worse but better. This detailed example accurately demonstrate that humor seems appeal to contribute to the humanities and gap between people. And when we comes to talk with humorous people , we always open our mind and just feel easily close to others, so humorous people also help you find easy access to gain information that you may hard-pressed to get.
+ P  z; U9 B. b1 |- a3 ]In the final analysis, given the benefits of humorous friends and certain emotional humanities, Ｉhave to draw a conclusion that having  a friend who is humorous is enjoyable in my life.

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xj0423UID: 2639540

继续啊！！！！

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闪闪硕硕UID: 2825715

虽然我不是这个组的，但是我也来交流下
我觉得沐头雪的作文不错
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