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208"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."




Walking on the street,we can observe various people in different dress:white or yellow,young or old and male or female. Of course we can get lots of information from their dress,look and act,such as faith,interest and attitude. The appearance of people we are observing is undoubtedly a reflection of the society`s valve and ideas. Nonetheless,is this enough to reveal the extremely complex values of the society we live in ? Of course not. The appearance of a individual merely tell us one dimension of his of her life,faith,and interest. There is much more about the culture he or she shares and believes in hides deeply behind the appearance. Similarly,when it comes to the community level,telling the ideology and value of a society by the appearance of some certain single group of people is unwarranted----there is much more waiting to be discovered by us.






Indeed,we could get myriad of information just based on a person`s appearance.  Act,appearance and dress play s vital role in a person`s value----they are undoubtedly significant part of people`s ideology. Take a monk as an example,we we meet a monk,it is not very hard for us to identify his faith and value just from his clothes and the "hair-style" . To monks, their appearance is a common single of their faith. Also,we can easily identify someone`s motherland just by the conventional clothes. For instance,even Mahatma Gandhi was ever exiled in other countries for a long period,we can still tell that he is an Indian,just looking at his clothes.






However,how can we judge a society only through a single group of people? Society is a complicated combination of different group of people with different appearance,value even faith. Hereupon,even though we can get sufficient information for the appearance from every group of people, it is still such a difficult job to combine the distinct culture together to conclude a description of the whole society. Just look at America-------there are so many different ideology prevailing in the society,for instance,the white`s,the black`s,the Latin`s,and forth on. Thereupon,Judging a society by the appearance is not advisable.








finally,whether the appearance contain all the information we need to conclude about society`s value? Think about the art,the written documentation,especially the books. Words have a magic power to tell us everything about a society. If you want to get more knowledge about the Africa,why not go to the library to borrow some books? The book will give you more information about the believes and life style about Africa that the appearance of the African people,at least from my perspective. Take Mona Lisa as another example,the profound of the masterpiece of Da Vinci lies not only in the magic smile of the beautiful woman,but also in the information it contains about the value of individualism of that century.  Thereupon,compared with the appearance of people, both the arts and books can tell us more.






To sum up. When it comes to conclude some information about some certain aspect or dimension of a society,observing the appearance of the certain group of people might be help. Natheless,it is of no use if we want to get the whole ideology of a society just depending on the action,dress,and appearance. We need more detail resources,maybe the arts,or maybe the written documentation such as books. There is no denying the extremely function of the arts and written records in the study of a society.
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请lz注意正确的发帖格式, 相关内容可以参考这个帖子:
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Walking on the street,we can observe various people in different dresses:white or yellow,young or old and male or female. Of course (感觉有of course 不太好,逻辑性降低了) we can get lots of information from their dress,look and act,such as faith,interest and attitude. The appearance of people we are observing is undoubtedly a reflection of the society`s valve and ideas. Nonetheless,is this enough to reveal the extremely complex values of the society we live in ? Of course not. The appearance of a individual merely telles us one dimension of his of her life,faith,and interest. And There is much more about the culture he or she shares and believes in hides deeply behind the appearance. Similarly,when it comes to the community level,telling the ideology and values (价值观加S 吧) of a (不说a society, the society)society by the appearance of some certain single group (中文化了.)of people is unwarranted----there is much more waiting to be discovered by us.





Indeed,we could get myriad of information just based on a person`s appearance.  Act,appearance and dress play s vital role in a person`s value----they are undoubtedly a significant part of people`s ideology. Take a monk as an example,we we meet a monk,it is not very hard for us to identify his faith and value just from his clothes and the "hair-style" . To monks, their appearance is a common single of their faith. (我可以看懂了,我就不知道老外看的懂不?)Also,we can easily identify someone`s motherland just by the conventional clothes. For instance,even Mahatma Gandhi was ever exiled in other countries for a long period,we can still tell that he is an Indian,just (by,要不然就没主语了)looking at his clothes.






However,how can we judge a society only through a single group of people? Society is a complicated combination of different groups of people with different appearance,value even faith. Hereupon,even though we can get sufficient information for the appearance from every group of people, it is still such (去了such 吧~)a difficult job to combine the distinct culture together to conclude a description of the whole society. Just look at America-------there are so many different ideology(ies) prevailing in the society,for instance,the white`s,the black`s,the Latin`s,and forth on. Thereupon,Judging a society by the appearance is not advisable.

感觉a single group of people有些中文化了。可以说 a group of people, which refers to the subgroups of people in society.






finally,whether the appearance contain all the information we need to conclude about (换成determine吧)society`s value? Think about the art,the written documentation,especially the books. Words have a magic power to tell us everything about a society. If you want to get (换点词咯,obtain)more knowledge about the Africa,why not go to the library to borrow some books? The book will give you more information about the believes and life styles about Africa that the appearance of the African people,at least from my perspective. Take Mona Lisa as another example,the profound of the masterpiece of Da Vinci lies is not only in the magic smile of the beautiful woman,but also in the information where it contains about the value of individualism of that century.  Thereupon,compared with the appearance of people, both the arts and books can tell us more.






To sum up. When it comes to conclude some information about some certain aspects or dimensions of a society,observing the appearance of the certain group of people might be helpfull. Natheless,it is of no use (不能说是no use, 要自己打自己了) if we want to get the whole ideology of a society just depending on the action,dress,and appearance. We need more detail (detailed,adj) resources,maybe the arts,or maybe the written documentation such as books. There is no denying that the extremely function of the arts and written records in the study of a society.

总的来说,观点很好,每一段的思路很清晰。不过感觉monk的例子有些...但Mahatma Gandhi 不错~ 不过例子还是少了点吧。还有 不说 a society吧~~
有些词没有加复数,以后要注意些。还有词的多样性要加强点,比如get, give 次出现的比较多,换点高级词汇咯~~
我的一些拙见,大家一起加油~~~

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