ibt综合作文求拍

catirUID: 2438002

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In this set of materials, the reading passage states that there are many disadvantages of private collection. To support this idea, the reading passage provides three evidences that show the major problems brought by private collection. However, in the listening passage, the lecturer thinks the advantages of private collection greatly outweigh the disadvantages.

First, the public would benefit from the purchasing process of fossils. According to the lecturer,  many public schools can buy fossils because of the free purchasing of fossils. Therefore, more people would have a chance to see the fossils. In another word, private collection will not harm the welfare of the public, which is totally different from the situation in the reading passage.

Moreover, contrary to the reading passage, scientists can access the fossils more easily. The lecturer says the fossils purchased in the market should be examed and tested by scientists first. As a result, scientists are not likely to miss out on potentially crucial discoveries about extinct life forms.

In the end, the reading passage indicates that most commercial fossil collectors are untrained or uninterested, so that valuable scientific evidence associated with the fossils they unearth are often been destroied. The lecturer says most of the collection of fossils is done in universities and scientific centers. That means the commercial collection is only a little part in this area, can not affect the scientific research greatly.

howard_hhqUID: 2648506

In this set of materials, the reading passage states that there are many disadvantages of private collection. To support this idea, the reading passage provides three evidences that show the major problems brought by private collection. However, in the listening passage, the lecturer thinks the advantages of private collection greatly outweigh the disadvantages.


First, the public would benefit from the purchasing process of fossils. According to the lecturer,  many public schools can buy fossils because of the free purchasing of fossils(有歧义，是“免费”还是“自由”). Therefore, more people would have a chance to see the fossils. In another word(in other words), private collection will not harm the welfare of the public, which is totally different from the situation in the reading passage.


Moreover, contrary to the reading passage, scientists can access the fossils more easily. The lecturer says the fossils purchased in the market should be examined and tested by scientists first. As a result, scientists are not likely to miss out on potentially crucial discoveries about extinct life forms. : R6 R; g; [/ v% W- z* z


In the end, the reading passage indicates that most commercial fossil collectors are untrained or uninterested, so that valuable scientific evidence associated with the fossils they unearth are often been destroyed. The lecturer says most of the collection of fossils is done in universities and scientific centers. That means the commercial collection is only a little part in this area, can not affect the scientific research greatly(这个点貌似你抓错了，我听的好像是在说虽然是有些破坏，但是比起那些研究所的undiscover，他们的危害更大)

语言表达很清晰，逻辑性好，第一和第二点抓的听好的，第三点貌似抓错了，最后来一个总结会更好

catirUID: 2438002

2# howard_hhq


恩 谢谢你的点评啊，我看到了自己的缺点嘎。共同加油嘎

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In this set of materials, the reading passage indicates that the option of working
a four-day workweek for four-fifths of their normal pay would benefit the economy and individuals. And , the writer gives several advantages that the four-day workweek has. However, in the listening passage, the lecturer think
the actual condition is totally different with the the condition described in the reading passage.

First, the writer states that the shortened workweek would increase company profits because the employees would make fewer errors in their work and hiring more staff to deal with the same amount of work would result in additional payroll costs. However, in the listening passage, the lecturer rejects the idea. According to the lecturer, although the total amount of money the company would pay for their workers would not increase, companies must pay more to provide training, medical insurance and office space for the additional workers, which would certainly decrease the profits of the companies.

Second, the reading passage states that there would be less overworked and error-prone employees than before. On the contrary, the lecturer says employees would be expected to work overtime in order to finish the same amount of work they can do in a five-day workweek. Therefore, there will be many overworked employees in the company and the same kind of errors can not be avoided.   

In the end, contrary to the idea in the reading passage that working for less time would benefit the workers and improve the quality of their lives, the lecturer says that the option of a four-day workweek would be worse for individual employees. Although employees would spend more time with their families, less working time would bring them a lot of problems. Employees would more likely be cut down in the companies and there would be less chances for them to be promoted. All of those oppose to the idea in the reading passage.

jacknonplusUID: 2703793

In this set of materials, the reading passage states that there are many disadvantages of private collection. To support this idea, the reading passage provides three evidences that show the major problems brought by private collection. However, in the listening passage, the lecturer believes that the advantages of private collection of fossils greatly outweigh the disadvantages.

First, the public would benefit from the purchasing process of fossils. According to the lecturer,  many public schools can buy fossils because of the free purchasing of fossils. Therefore, more people would have a chance to see the fossils. In another word, private collection will(would) not harm the welfare of the public, which is totally different from the situation in the reading passage.


Moreover, contrary to the reading passage, scientists can access the fossils more easily.(这样说是不是有点怪啊？一般会用access这个词吗？) The lecturer says the fossils purchased in the market should be examed and tested by scientists first. As a result, scientists are not going to miss the potential discoveries about extinct life forms. 2 I0 n$ x* ?' y/ e" S  M0 T


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In the end, the reading passage indicates that most commercial fossil collectors are untrained or uninterested, so that valuable scientific evidence associated with the fossils they unearth are often been destroied. The lecturer says most of the collection of fossils is done in universities and scientific centers. That means the commercial collection is only a little part in this area, can not affect the scientific research greatly.(观点同楼上，虽然我也没有听出来是什么意思。。。。。。)