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3.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can benefit more from traveling in their own country than traveling to foreign countries.

With the development of modern society, travelling has developed into a mature industry. And with the help of modern transportation, a growing number people prefer to go abroad to enjoy the environment of different culture, while, others would like to travel in their own country. When considering for the benefits of these two choices, I think it is hard to judge which one offers more benefits. I am going to present my statements as follow.

Let’s start with domestic travelling. Take Chinese for example, we all know, China is a great country with more 5000 years history, and this resourceful background is inexhaustible to any people. When we travel around our country, like Great Wall, West Lake, Taishan Mountain, and so on, we got the chance to learn more from the history, from the diversified culture, even natural landscape itself. Here is an example, when I first went to Taishan Mountain at the age of ten, I climbed the Mountain from the bottom to the top. It was really a difficult experience for me, I spent nearly 10 hours in finishing the whole process, and I nearly gave it up for more than 3 times. With the encouragement of my father, however, I finally stood at the top of this Mountain. And this victory told me that nothing is impossible with your insistence.

On the other hand, international travelling still has its own advantages. Travelling abroad provides us chances to widen our horizon, fresh our mind, which finally helps us to get promotion. Let me show you a vivid example. My cousin Jack has been fond of English literature since he was still a little boy. So he always dreams of a travelling to British to feel the real English. He finally got a chance in a summer when he graduated from high school. That two weeks trip helped him know more about not only the British but also himself, which convinced him that he wanted to devote his life to his favor. When he came back to China, he started to prepare for IELTS. Now, he is studying in Oxfords with the major——ancient English literature.

According to the above statement, we can draw a conclusion that both international and domestic travelling can benefit us a lot, however, the key point that decide what we can learn is ourselves. It is important for us to feel the world and analyze ourselves. When we set a target, everything in this world can be helpful to the target. What we need to do is to feel the world and take advantage of everything, then, walking to the target. At this moment, we can benefit from everything.

话说，这个文写的很纠结……之前在群里听了大家的讨论，决定写people benefit from something else neither international travelling nor domestic travelling。结果很悲催的发现，这个something else也没交代清楚，这个benefit也没阐述清楚……anyway，又见茶几了……

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3.9 by 米
直接拷过来颜色都没了，so，请见附件

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3.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can benefit more from traveling in their own country than traveling to foreign countries.

With the development of modern society, travelling has developed into a mature industry. And with the help of modern transportation, a growing number people prefer to go abroad to enjoy the environment of different culture, while, others would like to travel in their own country. When considering for the benefits of these two choices, I think it is hard to judge which one offers more benefits. I am going to present my statements as follow.

Let’s start with domestic travelling. Take Chinese for example, we all know, China is a great country with more 5000 years history, and this resourceful background is inexhaustible to any people. When we travel around our country, like Great Wall, West Lake, Taishan Mountain, and so on, we get the chance to learn more from the history, from the diversified culture, even natural landscape itself. Here is an example, when I first went to Taishan Mountain at the age of ten, I climbed the Mountain from the bottom to the top. It was really a difficult experience for me, I spent nearly 10 hours in finishing the whole process, and I nearly gave it up for more than 3 times. With the encouragement of my father, however, I finally stood at the top of this Mountain. And this victory told me that nothing is impossible with your insistence.

On the other hand, international travelling still has its own advantages. Travelling abroad provides us chances to broaden our horizon, fresh our mind, which finally helps us to get promotion. Let me show you a vivid example. My cousin Jack has been fond of English literature since he was still a little boy. So he always dreamed of a travelling to British to feel the real English. He finally got a chance in a summer when he graduated from high school. That two weeks trip helped him know more about not only the British but also himself, which convinced him that he wanted to devote his life to his favor. When he came back to China, he started to prepare for IELTS. Now, he is studying in Oxfords with the major——ancient English literature.

According to the above statement, we can draw a conclusion that both international and domestic travelling can benefit us a lot, however, the key point that decide what we can learn is ourselves. It is important for us to feel the world and analyze ourselves. When we set a target, everything in this world can be helpful to the target. What we need to do is to feel the world and take advantage of everything, then, walking to the target. At this moment, we can benefit from everything.
感觉这篇文章写得真的挺好的，两个例子也挺好，除了一点时态错误，其他都挺好的。我也不知道该改些什么了。

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3.13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.

As an old saying goes: all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. It is no doubt that sports are very important for teenagers; however, some people think children should play sports only for fun, not in competition or contests. As far as I am concerned, this statement is really ridiculous for the following parts.

To begin with, most of us care about one sport from a competition of a contest. It is easy to get attracted for most of us when watching a game, so do children. If the children only play sports for fun rather than for contest, they can seldom gain happiness, delight, or cheerful from it, and they may also lose the interests for this game. What’s more, as I mentioned above, children in favor of some sports because of the player who children adore. Without competition, they cannot feel the experience of the game, which means they cannot get satisfied.

On the other hand, competition is a good practice for cooperation in young men’s future work. The majority of sports are organized by two teams with several members for each group, and this team members work together for the same target, defend the other team, and help with each others. The whole situation looks like the real circumstances in our daily work. When everyone in the office works together as a group, they are trying to complete a project perfectly or focusing on a proposal to prompt the profits. This cooperation relationship in the office or in the social environment is just the same as sport competition. Children cannot gain the benefits of this only by playing for fun.

To sum up, the statement on the top totally ignores the importance of competition that contests can meet the satisfactions of children and can provide chances for children to know more about cooperation. All of these benefit for not only the children nowadays but also their future works. So it is unreasonable for children to play sports only for fun.

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As an old saying goes: all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. It is no doubt that sports are very important for teenagers; however, some people think children should play sports only for fun, not in competition or contests. As far as I am concerned, this statement is really ridiculous for the following parts.
To begin with, most of us care about one sport from a competition of a contest.这句话看得不是很明白 It is easy to get attracted for most of us when watching a game, so do children. If the children only play sports for fun rather than for contest, they can seldom gain happiness, delight, or cheerful from it, and they may also lose the interests for this game. What’s more, as I mentioned above, children in favor of some sports because of the player who children adore. Without competition, they cannot feel the experience of the game, which means they cannot get satisfied. 这一段的说理要加强

On the other hand, competition is a good practice for cooperation in young men’s future work. The majority of sports are organized by two teams with several members for each group, and this team members work together for the same target, defend the other team, and help with each others. The whole situation looks like the real circumstances in our daily work. When everyone in the office works together as a group, they are trying to complete a project perfectly or focusing on a proposal to prompt the profits. This cooperation relationship in the office or in the social environment is just the same as sport competition. Children cannot gain the benefits of this only by playing for fun.这一段论述很贴题

To sum up, the statement on the top totally ignores the importance of competition that contests can meet the satisfactions of children and can provide chances for children to know more about cooperation. All of these benefit for not only the children nowadays but also their future works. So it is unreasonable for children to play sports only for fun.
同学的文章结构明确，结尾的总结也不错，但是第二段的论述我看得有点思维混乱。因为我的英语水平不高，所以有什么说的不对的地方还望海涵。
Practice makes perferct让我们共勉，加油！！！

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As an old saying goes: all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy(这个引用不错。应该不是自己编的。嘿嘿）. It is no doubt that sports are very important for teenagers（最好换成题目中的CHILDREN）; however（这里转折意味不太强）, some people think children should play sports only for fun, not in competition or contests. As far as I am concerned, this statement is really ridiculous for the following parts.0 {! D1 I6 x; j' o. i  U5 c. O
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To begin with, most of us care about one sport from a competition of a contest. It is easy to get attracted for most of us when watching a game, so do children. If the children only play sports for fun rather than for contest, they can seldom gain happiness, delight, or cheerful（换名词） from it, and （换一个连词MEANWHILE）they may also lose the interests for this（指代不明，换THE） game. What’s more, as I mentioned above, children in favor of some sports because of the player who children adore. Without competition, they cannot feel the experience of the game, which means they cannot get satisfied.

On the other hand, competition is a good practice for cooperation in young men’s future work. The majority of sports are organized by two teams with several members for each group, and （这样的AND链接我也喜欢用，但是不太好）this team members work together for the same target, defend the other team, and help with each others（这句话是SAME TARGET的内容么？如果是的话，要限定词呢）. The whole situation looks like the real circumstances in our daily work. When everyone in the office works together as a group（EVERYONE怎么又GROUP。换成PEOPLE吧）, they are trying to complete a project perfectly or focusing on a proposal to prompt the profits. (要连词）This cooperation relationship in the office or in the social environment is just the same as sport competition. （连词）Children cannot gain the benefits of this only by playing for fun.
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To sum up, the statement on the top totally ignores the importance of competition that contests can meet the satisfactions of children and can provide chances （chance不是书面语。换ＯＰＰＯＴＵＮＩＴＥ）for children to know more about cooperation. All of these benefit for not only the children nowadays but also their future works. So it is unreasonable for children to play sports only for fun.


思路很清楚。用词用句也不错。最大的毛病就是句子间的衔接要做好。不要光秃秃的两个句子并列着。注意下就更好了。
加油。

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3.15
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephones have had more positive effects on human kind than televisions.

Both telephone and television are the achievements of the development of human society and science-technology; meanwhile, they both directly contribute significances to human kind. As for which one has more positive effects compared to the other, as far as I am concerned, it is a complex question. Before giving my point, I think it is essential to overlook the discussions on both sides.

To begin with, there is general speaking, which says that television created a new era of human history. Firstly, television provides opportunities for people to know more about what is going on in the world. With such information, people are able to get a better understanding of the world they live in. What’s more, television also has a great influence on the way people think and talk. For example, when people have a clear image about the earth with 3D picture and video, people are going to get a deeper understanding of the climate and environment of the planet. On the other hand, the negative effects of the television are enormous, for instance, some videos and pictures involving violence and sex publicized by television have awful influence especially for children.

As for telephone, it changes the world into a small village, helps people to communicate with others more convenient, and high improve the efficiency of people’s daily life. Under such situation, the whole society has the opportunity to develop fast in the past century, which starts the modern society. In addition, telephone also has harmful influence. Take something familiar for example, when you are in a concert listening to the wonderful music, and someone’s telephone rings at this beautiful moment; and this must be a moment that you hate the inventor of phone. What’s more, when you enjoy a leisure moment at home on weekend, your boss calls you to office to hold a meeting, this could be another moment that you fear for the telephone.

As I mentioned at the beginning, television and telephone both have advantages and disadvantages, however, according to the above statements, we can make it clear that the advantages of both sides are powerful enough, while the disadvantages of television is far outweigh that of telephone. Form this we can safely draw a conclusion that Telephones have had more positive effects on human kind than televisions.

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Both telephone and television are the achievements of the development of human society and science-technology; meanwhile, they both directly contribute significances to human kind. As for which one has more positive effects compared to the other, as far as I am concerned, it is a complex question. Before giving my point, I think it is essential to overlook the discussions on both sides.9 l. }9 \2 t9 a

* F4 O2 \3 G& p3 rTo begin with, there is general speaking, which says that (it is generally speaking that) television created a new era of human history. Firstly, television provides opportunities for people to know more about what is going on in the world. With such information, people are able to get a better understanding of the world they live in. What’s more, television also has a great influence on the way people think and talk. For example, when people have a clear image about the earth with 3D picture and video, people are going to (would) get a deeper understanding of the climate and environment of the planet. On the other hand, the negative effects of the television are enormous, for instance, some videos and pictures involving violence and sex publicized by television have awful influence especially for children.
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As for telephone, it changes the world into a small village, helps people to communicate with others more convenient, and high improve the efficiency of people’s daily life. Under such situation, the whole society has the opportunity to develop fast in the past century, which starts the modern society. In addition, telephone also has harmful influence. Take something familiar for example, when you are in a concert listening to the wonderful music, and someone’s telephone rings at this beautiful (nice) moment; and this must be a moment that you hate the inventor of phone. What’s more, when you enjoy a leisure moment at home on weekend, your boss calls you to office to hold a meeting, this could be another moment that you fear for(去掉) the telephone.
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As I mentioned at the beginning, television and telephone both have advantages and disadvantages, however(貌似不应该转折), according to the above statements, we can make it clear that the advantages of both sides are powerful enough, while the disadvantages of television is far outweigh that of telephone. Form this we can safely draw a conclusion that Telephones have had more positive effects on human kind than televisions.

你的逻辑清晰，表达能力挺好的，但是我就比较疑惑，题目要求你比较“positive”，但是你是大篇幅在讨论”negative”，我不知这样行不行，如果是我，我就觉得你这样写有点牵强了，或者你可以在看看另一个人给你的意见，整体感觉，语言和逻辑都挺清晰，就是切入点感觉不是很好

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Both telephone and television are the achievements of the development of human society and science-technology; meanwhile, they both directly contribute significances to human kind. As for which one ...
howard_hhq 发表于 2010-3-16 08:03

有道理，确实是negative的切入点偏了。

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3.16
3.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should live one city or in one country all their life instead of moving to live in different places.

When I was a little girl, my father told me an old saying, which said—reading thousands of books, and then travelling for thousands of miles. Since then, these words have become my dream. Consequently, from my point of view, it is necessary for people to live in different cities or even in different countries all their lives, because the world is so diversity, while the lives are so short; meanwhile, to enjoy the whole world within the limited life time is really an interesting challenge. Finally, I am going to present my reasons in the coming paragraphs to support my standpoint.

Coming first to hold my argument is that the world is various; however, most of us are born and grow up in the same location, which me means it is impossible for us to know some other exciting matters far away from us. Although modern technologies provide us opportunities to know more about this planet and what’s going on in the world, on the other hand, the picture and video are really limited comparing to the real scenery. Here is an example, my friend Susan who is always interested in waterfall, so the Huangguoshu waterfall which is the most famous one in China attracts her most. She collected so many pictures and videos about that waterfall, however, when she really faced that waterfall, she realized that all the visual materials cannot tell the truth and the spirit of that magnificent scenery. What’s more I think something like this happened a lot.

Investing the creditability to my argument is that we can gain a lot from different experiences of travelling. For instance, every year a large number of people come to Himalaya trying to climb to the top of Qomolangma. To most of them the point is to enjoy the feeling of conquer the highest mountain rather than to get pleasure from the wonderful scenery on the top of the mountain. In addition, this experience encourages them to confront difficulty and defeat it, and this is important to anyone.

As the reason listed above, I can safely get a conclusion that it is better for people to live in different cities or even in different countries all their lives than live in one place, which benefit not only for our mind but also for our experience and our future as well.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should live one city or in one country all their life instead of moving to live in different places.1 f; w. F  C9 ]% Y, x
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When I was a little girl, my father told me an old saying, which said—reading thousands of books, and then travelling for thousands of miles. Since then, these words have become my dream. Consequently, from my point of view, it is necessary for people to live in different cities or even in different countries all their lives, because the world is so diversity（diverse）, while the lives are so short; Meanwhile, to enjoy(enjoying) the whole world within the limited life time is really an interesting challenge(搭配有点奇怪). Finally（前面的Consequently和这个出现的太早了点吧。文章还没开始就…）, I am going to present my reasons in the coming paragraphs to support my standpoint.

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Coming first to hold my argument is that the world is various（还是diverse吧）; However, most of us are（were） born and grow up in the same location（place就好，location像定位。）, which me （I）means it is impossible for us to know some other exciting matters far away from us. Although modern technologies provide us opportunities to know more about this planet and what’s going on in the world, on the other hand, the picture and video are really limited comparing to the real scenery. Here is an example, my friend Susan who is always interested in waterfall, so the HuangGuoShu waterfall which is the most famous one in China attracts her most(这句话的主句没有谓语宾语。). She collected so many pictures and videos about that waterfall, （用句号，这句结束了，however带下一句。）however, when she really faced that waterfall, she realized that all the visual materials（就pictures吧） cannot tell the truth and the spirit of that magnificent scenery. What’s more I think something like this happened a lot.$ V- ^* E0 `% M7 V
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Investing the creditability to my argument is that we can gain a lot from different experiences of travelling. For instance, every year a large number of people come to
Himalaya trying to climb to the top of Mount Qomolangma. To most of them the point is to enjoy the feeling of conquering the highest mountain rather than to get pleasure from the wonderful scenery on the top of the mountain. In addition（另外？后面这句的意思和前面的conquer应该是一样的吧。）, this experience encourages them to confront difficulty and defeat it, and this is important to anyone.

the reason listed above, I can safely get a conclusion that it is better for people to live in different cities or even in different countries all their lives than live in one place, which benefit not only for our mind but also for our experience and our future as well.

PS：语法一定要大补一下，在没了解清楚语法前，不需要试着用一些高级词汇，容易用错。
还有，作文的模板化太严重了，行文不自然。有些语句虽然是对的，但是意思上看的出来很Chinglish。
最后。。发现一个极大的问题。。囧。。好像偏题了。。。题目说的是住到其他地方去，不是说的旅游吧。

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3.15
you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephones have had more positive effects on human kind than televisions.


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Both telephone and television are the（删） achievements of the development of human society and science-technology; Meanwhile, they both directly contribute significances to（？contribute significantly to） human kind. As for which one has more positive effects compared(comparing) to the other, as far as I am concerned, it is a complex question. Before giving my point, I think it is essential to overlook the discussions on both sides.

To begin with, there is general speaking, which says that television created (creates) a new era of human history. Firstly, television provides opportunities for people to know more about what is going on in the world. With such information, people are able to get a better understanding of the world they live in. What’s more, television also has a great influence on the way people think and talk. For example, when people have a clear image about the earth with 3D picture and video, people are going to get a deeper understanding of the climate and environment of the planet.【why？为什么看了3D图和影响我们就会更加理解气候环境？！】 On the other hand, the negative effects of the television are enormous. For instance, some videos and pictures involving violence and sex(pornography) publicized(published) by television have awful influence especially for children. ; ]# t' I4 v) ^& {( _7 m0 r8 z, X, ~
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As for telephone, it changes the world into a small village, helps people to communicate with others more convenient, and high(highly) improve the efficiency of people’s daily life. Under such situation(circumstance), the whole society has the opportunity to develop fast in the past century(decades), which starts the modern society. 【如果倾向于telephone有更大的好处的话，我觉得demerits就不用提了。三百字也提不完两个方面的好处和坏处。】In addition, telephone also has harmful influence. Take something familiar for example, when you are in a concert listening to the wonderful music, and someone’s telephone rings at this beautiful moment; and this must be a moment that you hate the inventor of phone. What’s more（有些词组的用法要注意了，意思不太自然）, when you enjoy a leisure moment（time）
at home on weekend, your boss calls you to office to hold a meeting, this could be another moment that you fear for the telephone.  F( M2 y4


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As I mentioned at the beginning, television and telephone both have advantages and disadvantages, however, according to the above statements, we can make it clear that the advantages of both sides are powerful enough, while the disadvantages of television is far outweigh that of telephone. Form this we can safely draw a conclusion that Telephones have had more positive effects on human kind than televisions.【一边倒？！建议不要这么写。如果是这个结论的话，最好开头就揭示出。然后多讲TELEPHONE的好处。】


【囧。刚那篇批错了。今天好像还没分组。话说连续批了童鞋的两篇文章。觉得童鞋还是先从基础的语法之类的开始着手，不要太求速度和字数，要先保证自己的文章里没有简单的语法错误。然后再润色自己的词句。加油！^_^】

yan121UID: 2415099

When I was a little girl, my father told me an old saying, which said—reading thousands of books, and then travelling for thousands of miles. Since then, these words have become my dream. Consequently, from my point of view, it is necessary for people to live in different cities or even （in 可以去掉） different countries all（用during比较好吧？） their lives, because the world is so diversified（这个地方应该要用形容词吧）, while the lives are so short（诶 觉得改成and the life is short比较好..）; (这个地方可以句号了哦)meanwhile, to enjoy the whole（可以去掉 强调意义不大） world within the（不需要冠词的） limited life time is really an interesting challenge. Finally（第一段用finally感觉不大好..可以改成therefore）, I am going to present my reasons in the coming paragraphs to support my standpoint.

Coming first to hold my argument is that the world is various;（这句话呃 怪怪的 如果非要强调开端的话 可以说As a threshold matter） however, most of us are born and grow（是不是应该用过去时呢？） up in the same location（应该要用place, location一般指位置）, which me（这是误打的吗？） means it is impossible for us to know some other exciting matters（用things会不会比较好？） far away from us. Although modern technologies provide us opportunities to know more about this planet and what’s going on in the world, on the other hand, the picture and video（是不是应该用复数形式pictures and videos呢？） are really limited comparing to the real scenery.（呃 觉得这句表达的也怪怪的..如果要表达眼睛看到的和电视上看到的不一样可以考虑这么说 Information we get from media is really limited compared with things we see and feel by ourselves. ） Here is an example, my friend Susan who is always interested in waterfall, so the Huangguoshu waterfall which is the most famous one in China attracts her most.(诶 我觉得被动态的表达会顺畅一点) She collected so many pictures and videos about that waterfall, however, when she really faced that waterfall, she realized that all the visual materials cannot tell the truth and the spirit of that magnificent scenery. What’s more(这个可以去掉)I think something like this happened a lot.

Investing the creditability to my argument is that（这个表达方式比较少见..） we can gain a lot from different experiences of travelling. For instance, every year a large number of people come to Himalaya(如果后面trying是伴随时态 这里就要加个逗号哦) trying to climb to the top of Qomolangma. To most of them the point is to enjoy the feeling of conquer the highest mountain rather than to get pleasure from the wonderful scenery on the top of the mountain. In addition, this experience encourages them to confront difficulty and defeat it, and this is important to anyone.

As（用considering会不会比较好？） the reason listed above, I can safely get a conclusion that it is better for people to live in different cities or even in different countries all their lives than live in one place, which benefit not only for our mind but also for our experience and our future as well.



结构比较清晰。能从亲身例子来举例这点很好。但是觉得有点点跑题哦：主要的观点是人们应该住在不同的地方，但是论述却成了旅行、亲身体验的好处，如果要这样写，应该要加强这些论点与居住在不同地点的联系，不然一直住在同一个地点的人也可以到处旅游去体验啊，是吧…

另外就是表达方式，嘻嘻，估计是跟我习惯的不一样，所以有些地方觉得不是很顺，我点评就机车了一点..语法什么的也需要稍微注意。

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When I was a little girl, my father told me an old saying, which said—reading thousands of books, and then travelling for thousands of miles. Since then, these words have become my dream. Consequentl ...
yan121 发表于 2010-3-17 16:06

怎么会机车呢，我觉得你跟再LS得童鞋写的都很好啊，剩下的就是我自己加油了啦~~~

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) W! ?0 z1 V& N# C& JDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.

In the past several decades, television and movies stand for a new era of relaxation and amusement of our human being. With the development of this industry, our lives have greatly developed, which brought out both positive and negative effects; whereas both the merits and demerits affected us a lot not only for our lives but also for our minds. So before giving my point of view, I’d prefer to overview the effects on both sides.

To begin with, for the advantageous part, television and movies create a totally new manner for us to get aware of the world where we live. Here is an example, when my mother was still a little, the only way for her to know outside her village was radio, once she heard from the radio that panda was a mammal with two colors on its skin—black and white. She cannot image how an animal can be looked cute and lovely with such colors, and this puzzle was not solved until the TV came out. What’s more, both television and movie provide a way for us to relax. When we come home after more than eight hours hard working, watching television, especially some interesting entertainment programs, helps us to get rid of business affairs. In addition, on the weekend, to go to cinema with our families is a moment to reunite the whole family together and to enjoy the family happiness.

On the other hand, the demerits come with the merits. As is known to all that a widely discussion has been hold in the past one or two decades that television limits our lives into a small living room or even within a tiny place in front of the television. Most of us were glued to the television for most of our free time to watch TV or see movies. Moreover, when we give up fresh air, green grasses and colorful flowers from the outside, diseases come to us. According to a report published by Chinese social and science institution, the number of people who stuffed from diabetes, heart disease and hypertension has greatly increased in the past two decades, due to lack of exercises. What’s more, lots of violent pictures and negative attitudes shown by televisions or movies contribute terrible effects to children, which cause social problems. Finally, however, from my point of views, most of these ugly effects can be ignored by suitable guide. For example, television also offers some sport programmers, which make sense. While with the help of parents, children can also avoid from learning from the televisions about some violent actions.

As the reason listed above, it is clearly that the statement on the top omits some merits of these two matters, whereas we can safely draw a conclusion that the advantages of television and movies far outweigh the disadvantages after being comprehensively consideration.

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