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发表于 2010-3-7 01:26:58 |显示全部楼层
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How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society.Unfortunately, we have not ...
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I find the speaker's dual claims to be specious on both counts.The claim that society's destiny is decided by
children's socialization, is overstated,because while children should be raised well, adults should not be ignored.
And the statement that children have not been well raised to construct a better society, is poorly supported by
modern time.
A.Admmitedly, children are the warranty of our society's progress. after raised in a proper environment, they can
become  useful adults for our society.
B.However, adults shouldn't be neglected as active servers for the society.children are too young to undertake
tasks of maintaining a harmonious and stable society, which should be accomplished by adults.
C.additionally,it's difficult to define a 'better'society in our society.greater tolerance of different viewpoints
and colours in different societies and nations,greater respect for individual rights and greater cooperation across
cultual and national boundaries.
In conclusion,  both adults and children shouldn't be neglected due to their same importance for our society;our
society has been maintaining a stable and developing no matter how children are raised.

TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not
yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS:           TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2010-3-7 1:11:22


I find the speaker's dual claims to be specious on both counts. The claim that society’s destiny is decided by
children's socialization, is overstated, because while children are well raised, adults are playing a vital role in
our society. And the statement that children haven't been well raised to construct a better society, is poor
supported by recent years' evidence.
Admittedly, children are the warranty of our society's progress. While raised in a proper environment, children
would develop freely, and discover their deepest potential abilities, which promote children forward to successful
persons. And children have more curiosity than adults, which is helpful for children to create new theories or
inventions. Also, children are easier to accept fresh things that they never met before. All the characters above
cultivate children to become famous scientists or great leaders who form the developing momentum of society, and
push the history forward.
However, adults shouldn't be ignored as active servants for society. In spite of more superiorities than adults,
children are still too young to undertake tasks of maintaining a harmonious and stable society. Children have their
limited knowledge in the measureless large world, so they may not completely know the world very well. And, since
their partial viewpoints can not explain all the problem of the world, so it is difficult for them to discriminate
what is just or not. The entire problems above come to a conclusion that adults are the men to promote our society
rather than children do. In addition to devoting their lives for our society, adults have responsibility to provide
a perfect environment for children to live and study.
Additionally, it's hard to define a "better" society in this statement that children haven't been raised well to
construct a better society. Depending on different culture and mores, different people have different viewpoints.  
If we can consider our society as a structure which include greater tolerance of viewpoints and colors in different
societies and nations, greater respect of individual rights and greater cooperation across cultural and national
boundaries, I believe that our society has been developing , which is better than the one before all the time.
In conclusion, both adults and children shouldn't be neglected due to their same importance for our society. And
our society has been maintaining better than before all the time.

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