前天写的第一篇issue，哪位大虾帮俺修改一下

with_dreamUID: 2750265

RT，俺不是很懂作文版的规矩，只是想找个高手帮我修改一下作文，发错地方或者不合规矩的话，希望斑竹能高抬贵手，俺只是想找个人帮俺修改一下，实在没办法了，俺是在职考的，没人一起，希望有好心高手帮我修改一下，让偶也知道不是一个人在战斗，真的十分十分不胜感激！！
212"If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."

Worthiness might mean profit to mygrid of people,with another side called appetite showing to someone sometimes.

Hitler,man mania for the purity of ethnic group,naturally thought his will must be worthy to be attained nomatter by killing a few or annihilating the Jew.Goal is worthy enough to himself,while it can`t be identified as a acceptable one,even just flashing into the mind of the innocent people.A large quantity of people disappeared from the earth ,leaving their descendants suffering affliction caused by losing their parents or grandparents during the war to attain Hitler`s satiric goal.


To strive for persons you loved a better life seems reasonable,which shall also bring you great joy after your achieving that.Yet,we should consider whether it`s justifiable to the other people,living around you,whom you can hardly ignore.We've run to a marvelous information era,accelerating developing process of our society and facilitating communications between people of different areas.It appears quite normal that someone had such tool work for oneself to become a millionare with online business,while some individiuals bring over Chinese parents a new problem Net Addict of Youth,who earn money for family by running an illegal Net Bar allowing nonage costuming there and assisting them to get lost in the gigantic net world.Dreadful days dragged by,those addicted kids hadn`t find a effective way to get out of their predicaments.

Accordingly, it`s still a ambiguous cognize about goal,when it comes to the society.Economy has never before been largely promoted as by human today,however,we pretend to ignore the possible image of future life belongs to our children,destroying forests,contaminating the envoriment,releasing more and more green gas,breaking the balance of ecosystem and so forth.There might be a horric tomorrow waiting there.You really consider it`s justify for them?

Totally,we can`t easily judge wether a goal is worthy or not by our own will. It`s better for us to choose the right way to go,albeit little slow or less efficient, which not only fits our goal,but also takes others` benefits into account.

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草木也知愁UID: 2487572

让自己的作文被改主要有以下几种途径：
1、参与/组建互助小组；
2、主动出击，到别人的习作中改别人的文章，然后留下连接请求回拍，绝大部分情况下版友都会很负责的回拍的；
3、斑竹定期会开习作修改铺，在里面占位置就可以让斑竹修改你的习作；
4、同主题写作时会规定参与的版友按照一定的回贴顺序进行互改；
5、坐等别人来拍，由于习作量很大，这种概率很小，所以效率也很低，建议不要采用。

with_dreamUID: 2750265

2# 草木也知愁
3Q，我去努力一下其他途径，谢谢！