3.20 yxb_25的独立作文

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3.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.

In today's fierce and compititive society, most of us, assume that competitive sports teach all sorts of useful lessons and, indeed, the games by definition must produce a winner and a loser. On the contrary, I have come to believe that sports and recreation at their best does not require children to try to triumph over others. Children play games just for fun, not in competition or contests.


Have fun with someone else in the games, and more importantly, children should change their mind that opponents could become their partners. Although almost the entire dynamic and spirit of the game shift, in other words, I mean one's attitude toward the player change with it. And in some certain sports field, people play tennis, which demand that you must try to made other person fail. However, I have become convinced that not single one of the advantages attributed to sports actually requires competition and contests. Running, climbing, biking, swimming etc, all offer a dynamic to work out without any need to try to outdo someone else. Children can learn the truly concept of friendship with the games that results from teamwork, precisely that is the benefit of the cooperation activities, whoses very essence is that everyone on the sports field is working together for a common goal.


If children's value is defined by what they are done and whom they are beaten to gloat their selfishness temporatily. The whole games, even children's life soon becomes a vicious circle, the more you compete, the more you need to compete to feel fulfill about themselves. The process may becomes  a disaster for children. While the vicious circle is going on, competition is having an equally toxic effect on children's relationships. In this twisty modern society, each individual inevitably comes to regard others as a obstacles to their successful life. Competition leads children to envy winners and dissmiss losers. And moreover, suspicious of everyone around them, like even you are not my rival, you should be tomorrow, that makes children difficult to regard others as potential friends or collaborations.

As radical or surprising as it may sound above, the problem isn't just that we compete the wrong way in the games, or cultivating children's winning spirit  on their childhood. The problem is competition itself. What we urgenly need is teaching children to have fun in the games instead of turning the playing field into a battlefield.

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3.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests. # e9 u) g0 T3 @: y
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In today's fierce and compititive society, most of us, assume that competitive sports teach all sorts of useful lessons and, indeed, the games by definition must produce a winner and a loser. On the contrary, I have come to believe that sports and recreation at their best does not require children to try to triumph over others. Children play games just for fun, not in competition or contests（）.- N- A: e0 k# H) q, ]7 ^% J! }

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Have fun with someone else in the games, and more importantly, children should change their mind(什么想法) that opponents could become their partners. Although almost the entire dynamic and spirit of the game shift, in other words, I mean one's attitude toward the player change with it. And in some certain sports field, people play tennis, which demand that you must try to made（make） other person fail. However, I have become convinced that not single one of the advantages attributed to sports actually requires competition and contests. Running, climbing, biking, swimming etc, all offer a dynamic to work out without any need to try to outdo someone else. Children can learn the truly concept of friendship with the games that results from teamwork, precisely that is the benefit of the cooperation activities, whoses very essence is that everyone on the sports field is working together for a common goal.  T' @8 M% H: p3 P+ e
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         If children's value is defined by what they are done and whom they are beaten to gloat their selfishness temporatily. The whole games, even children's life soon becomes a vicious circle, the more you compete, the more you need to compete to feel fulfill about themselves. The process may becomes  a disaster for children. While the vicious circle is going on, competition is having an equally toxic effect on children's relationships. In this twisty modern society, each individual inevitably comes to regard others as a obstacles to their successful life. Competition leads children to envy winners and dissmiss losers. And moreover, suspicious of everyone around them, like even you are not my rival, you should be tomorrow, that makes children difficult to regard others as potential friends or collaborations（细节。例子？？全是议论）.8 _) D; |- B1 X4 w# _3 ]8 `- C                                                                                                                                                                              As radical or surprising as it may sound above, the problem isn't just that we compete the wrong way in the games, or cultivating children's winning spirit  on their childhood. The problem is competition itself. What we urgenly need is teaching children to have fun in the games instead of turning the playing field into a battlefield（楼主太牛了，你这词用的。。我都不认识，而且全是长句，我能力有限那，但是真的建议楼主多用些例子什么的，这样劝靠议论好空洞无力，，，）

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3.28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only play sports for fun, not in competition or contests.
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In today's fierce and competitive society, most of us, assume that competitive sports teach all sorts of useful lessons and, indeed, the games by definition must produce a winner and a loser. On the contrary, I have come to believe that sports and recreation at their best does not require children to try to triumph over others. Children play games just for fun, not in competition or contests.6 _4 v% v8 K4 v8 d8 `
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Have fun with someone else in the games, and more importantly, children should change their mind that opponents could become their partners. Although almost the entire dynamic and spirit of the game shift, in other words, I mean one's attitude toward the player change with it. And in some certain sports fields, people play tennis, which demand that you must try to make other person fail. However, I have became convinced that not single one of the advantages attributed to sports actually requires competition and contests. Running, climbing, biking, swimming etc, all offer a dynamic to work out without any need to try to outdo someone else. Children can learn the truly concept of friendship with the games that results from teamwork, precisely that is the benefit of the cooperation activities, whoses very essence is that everyone on the sports field is working together for a common goal.1 H4 X. F. @! ]# A8 P2 n9 v2 u% S& L


If children's value is defined by what they are done and whom they are beaten to gloat their selfishness temporatily. The whole games, even children's life soon becomes a vicious circle, the more you compete, the more you need to compete to feel fulfill about themselves(这句不是很清楚). The process may becomes  a disaster for children. While the vicious circle is going on, competition is having an equally toxic effect on children's relationships. In this twisty modern society, each individual inevitably comes to regard others as a obstacles to their successful life. Competition leads children to envy winners and dissmiss losers. And moreover, suspicious of everyone around them, like even you are not my rival, you should be tomorrow, that makes children difficult to regard others as potential friends or collaborations.6 [7 g% N5 N3 g" q0 ^# Y5 K

As radical or surprising as it may sound above, the problem isn't just that we compete the wrong way in the games, or cultivating children's winning spirit  on their childhood. The problem is competition itself. What we urgenly need is teaching children to have fun in the games instead of turning the playing field into a battlefield.

好好的文章      稍微有点小错误   没什么大关系     词汇量也好多   
但是觉得一直再说竞争的不好   好像没提到fun   虽然IBT 不怎么强调这种要紧扣题目之类的      但好像没有正面论述          一点浅见哈   

其实看你的文章基本上就在学习了   哈

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3.29    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? More money should be invested by the government on improving access to the Internet, rather than public transportation.

In this new era, Internet and public transportations as we all know are changing living situation to a stage that so convenience and available never before in the history of our mankind. Compare to these two essential facilities and tools to today's metropolitans, I still hold the idea that government shout invest more money on improving Internet access rather than public transportation.

For one, Government should pay more attention to improving Internet access because it can ease the public transportation stress in some certain degree. Some people may be confused about this new concept and unique opinion. Thanks to the rapid developing of information technology. Internet as a magnificent carrier in this new millennium, could transmit enormous information and data within a second without any lost. Which promoted the new idea based on this network booming --- online working and online shopping. Compare to some white-colors who have to living in a "9 to 5" pattern every day by driving car. Individuals more likely to a new working mode that is sitting at home and finishing their company assignment by computer. Online shopping websites also favored by most young adults, such as ebay, Internet users who buy things what they love in a cheaper and convenient way without any parking lot and traffic jam trouble. Without some unnecessary vehicles and individuals, public transportation will be more efficient flow. That is why government should invest more money into the Internet technology rather than public transportation in the existing state.

Moreover, Internet using in education field which make students learning in a easier and comfortable way. In this information explosion age, the most essential ability for students who wants to catch up the advancing footstep of the modern society is using the Internet resources well. For instance, students do not required to go to the library to find and borrow books in a traditional way, they just browse and search them online. In today's universities, most facilities and departments has connected, which means students can learning online, solve study problems online, debate subjects online, etc. It is more useful and efficient for students absorbing new information and finding jobs than the original way.
On the whole, compare to the enormous scale of public transportation system which already experienced the huge development and still essential for the modern metropolitans. I believe that Internet will bring more opportunity and development for individuals and cities, even the whole mankind. Therefore,  more money should be invested by the government on improving and supporting access to the Internet rather than public transportation.

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In this new era, the Internet and public transportations, as we all know, are changing our living situation to a stage that so convenience and available never before in the history of our mankind. (感觉这句语法有问题) Compare to these two essential facilities and tools to today's metropolitans（没看明白, metropolitan是个adj.?）, I still hold the idea that government shout invest more money on improving Internet access rather than public transportation.

For one, Government should pay more attention to improving Internet access because it can ease the public transportation stress in some certain(两个去一个) degree. Some people may be confused about this new concept and unique opinion. (这个就不要了吧) Thanks to the rapid developing of information technology. Internet, as a magnificent carrier in this new millennium(互联网作为一个搬运工? 意思我懂,但是这样说好像不太合适), could transmit enormous information and data within a second without any lost.(从纯技术角度来说,不管是六类双绞线还是光纤还是波分,SDH,都是存在丢包的,不然还要OSI那么多层都要冗余校验做什么. - -| 纯讨论一下技术) Which promoted the new idea based on this network booming --- online working and online shopping. Compare to some white-colors who have to living in a "9 to 5" pattern every day by driving car. Individuals are more likely to have a new working mode that is sitting at home and finishing their company assignment by computer. Online shopping websites are also favored by most young adults, such as eBay. (such as放到你举例的词后面) Internet users who buy things what they love in a cheaper and convenient way without any parking lot and traffic jam trouble. (主句的除了主语没别的成分了?) Without some unnecessary vehicles and individuals, public transportation will be more efficient flow.(多看看英文的表达,这个不是这么说的…可以说release traffic burden, 或者说什么is the main benefits to solve severe traffic jams) That is why government should invest more money into the Internet technology rather than public transportation in the existing state.

Moreover, Internet using in education field which make students learning in an easier and comfortable way. (主句成分缺失) In this information explosion age, the most essential ability for students who wants to catch up the advancing footstep of the modern society is using the Internet resources well.
For instance, students do not required to go to the library to find and borrow books in a traditional way, they just browse and search them online. In today's universities, most facilities and departments has connected, which means students can learning online, solve(solving) study problems online, debate (debating) subjects online, etc. It is more useful and efficient for students absorbing new information and finding jobs than the original way.

On the whole, compare to the enormous scale of public transportation system which has already experienced the huge development and still essential for the modern metropolitans, I believe that Internet will bring more opportunity and development for individuals and cities, even the whole mankind. Therefore,  more money should be invested by the government on improving and supporting access to the Internet rather than public transportation.

词汇有些用的不错，也有内容可以表达。
但是语法要多连连，多看看英文的文章，看看英文的表达。
加油

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3.30 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people prefer having other people make decisions for them rather than making decisions by themselves.



Some people always relying on the opinions of others in order to make decision for themselves in today's fierce society. That is absolutely not a good choice, because every one of us was given the ability to make our own decisions according to the psychological research. It is less confidence if people who rely on others instead of themselves to making decision, because no one knows them better than themselves. Differ in majority, I strongly consume that individuals should make decisions by themselves.

For example, it is nature desire for parents who are used to cosset their teenage children, help them solve all the obstacles they have, and making decisions for them instead of let their kids face it directly. That will lead children always antagonistic and disobey with their parents when they facing  difficulty in real society and parents cannot help them. Accordingly, teenagers who has confidence and always making decisions by their own will more success in their future career than the former one. That's why I disagree masses' opinion that people should make decision my their own.

Moreover, individuals who making their own decisions will increase self-confidence in their personality and win more esteem by others. Such a positive and dynamic view of life will make them greeted by others with rapturous applause. For instance, one of my best friend Terry, also a best surgery I have never seem, has a great job and higher salary working in the biggest hospital in out city. Despite superiors' consideration that he will be promoted if he keep performance like that. He ultimately  abandon the promotion and potentially status, decided to join into the " Doctor Without Border", to help more children around the world who still living in danger and need medical treatment. The decision what Terry made has be praised by his colleagues praise and, even some of them willing to do the same thing to help others who need medical help.

Finally, no one knows you better than yourself. Some decisions making by others may not suit you. For example, even thought parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might disappointment, for all parents tend to unconsciously or subconsciously add their personal opinion into the decision making process, including bad ones. Which will harm children's future profoundly. Therefore, teenager should learn to decide something by their own instead of use some inappropriate decision by other people.

While we should absorb some valuable advices by sophisticated people. A man who has a firm hand on the tiller by himself will more likely to decisive some big destiny than others.

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同学，关于昨天的作文想说一下。

nexthop 发表于 2010-3-31 08:11

以后作文细节交流直接PM我就可以了，已经PM 你了！！谢谢你的建议。。

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3.31 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.

For many people all over the world the television and movies has become an important part of household. Most of the young people spend far too many hours sat in front of their flat screens and waste their time on TV programs and movies that could otherwise spent on far more productive and positive activities. Therefore, I believe that movies and televisions have more negative impacts than positive effects on young people.

As we all know, many parents in China need to monitor and restrict their children's entertainments and viewing habits in order to prevent them form some of the negative impacts that television programs and movies can have within children's growing period. Some research shown us that many children suffer from attention deficit disorder are result of watching too much TV. Accordingly, children who watch too much and read less probably have some problem about hard to be focused and paying attention on classes and things. That is the reason why young people spending excessive amounts of time in front of the TV are more negative than positive in their life.

Movies and TV programs more or less have some negatives effect on youngster's personality. Watching the wrong sorts of television programs and movies can influence children in negative ways and, more importantly, lead adolescents and young children to smoking, drinking and drug taking in order to copy their favourite stars' and characters' personalities. Furthermore, many commercials about fast foods and unhealthy products be bound to leave an impression with young people and create a desire to get those products. Which can lead to bad diets and unhealthy habit in their mind.

In psychological field, which have also shown that adolescents and young people can be lead to astray while being exposed at an early age to adult programming. Movies such as horror films, murder scenes and any sort of aggressive violence will often leave a terrible impact on their emotions and their personalities.

In conclusion, although televisions and movies is one of the most convenience and easiest way for young people to entertain and recreate with their families. The exceeding watching and the wrong choice often lead children and youngsters become aggressive and violent one as a result. Consequently, movies and televisions have more negative impacts than positive effects on youngsters and adolescents.

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3.30 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most people prefer having other people make decisions for them rather than making decisions by themselves.3 o0 @- ]( N# ~: ~


Some people always relying on the opinions of others in order to make decision for themselves in today's fierce society. That is absolutely not a good choice, because every one of us was given the ability to make our own decisions according to the psychological research. It is less confidence if people who rely on others instead of themselves to making decision, because no one knows them better than themselves. Differ in majority, I strongly consume that individuals should make decisions by themselves.
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For example, it is nature desire for parents who are used to cosset their teenage children, help them solve all the obstacles they have, and making decisions for them instead of let their kids face it directly. That will lead children always antagonistic and disobey with their parents when they facing  difficulty in real society and parents cannot help them(面对家长无法解决的困难就对家长生气？好像有点不通哈。). Accordingly, teenagers who has confidence and always making decisions by their own will more success in their future career than the former one. That's why I disagree masses' opinion that people should make decision my their own.（这一段感觉比较空。。）
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Moreover, individuals who making their own decisions will increase self-confidence in their personality and win more esteem by others. Such a positive and dynamic view of life will make them greeted by others with rapturous applause. For instance, one of my best friend Terry, also a best surgery（？） I have never seem, has a great job and higher salary working in the biggest hospital in out city. Despite superiors' consideration that he will be promoted if he keep performance like that. He ultimately  abandon the promotion and potentially status, decided to join into the " Doctor Without Border", to help more children around the world who still living in danger and need medical treatment. The decision what Terry made has be praised by his colleagues praise and, even some of them willing to do the same thing to help others who need medical help.（感觉你这个例子就比我的高级多了。。。）: B* A2 B+ k% c4 X+ Y2 f7 T" _
Finally, no one knows you better than yourself. Some decisions making by others may not suit you. For example, even thought parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might disappointment, for all parents tend to unconsciously or subconsciously add their personal opinion into the decision making process, including bad ones.（从185上模仿的哈！。。这点要学习啊！） Which will harm children's future profoundly. Therefore, teenager should learn to decide something by their own instead of use some inappropriate decision by other people., v! z8 @1 \" Y8 X" l

While we should absorb some valuable advices by sophisticated people. A man who has a firm hand on the tiller by himself will more likely to decisive some big destiny than others.

。。。感觉我就像吃白饭的。。一篇看下来都在涨见识。。。。
要帮助弱势群体  爱幼是不！ 哈！   
到0：04 我都在看你作文。。。好累啊。

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因为明天有个报告会要准备，所以今天懒了，把原来写的改了改放上来~希望大家狠拍！！

4.1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Basic science should be a mandatory course for all university students even if it is not related with their field of study.

Many universities are require their students to take basic science classes to gain more opportunities for young students in their future career. As far as I concerned, wider knowledge means to obtain more choices, higher salaries and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market for youngsters can, whether the basic science courses are part of their  study major or research field.

Obviously, in most cases the traditional higher education system only concerned about the performance of the college students in some specialize field. Which directly results the students have a limited opportunity to obtain a suitable job beyond their profession. On the contrary, applicants with the degree which includes art and basic sciences would not only be qualified for jobs in company or government office, they would also be well prepared for jobs which need some basic science thinking skill as a prerequisite. With a large range of potential jobs to choose from, students with extensively knowledge are more likely to find a job that suit their particular needs and interests.

Moreover, employers are willing to pay more premium for applicants who study and read extensively, because it will save much money to hire extra specialists for the company. For instance, many companies desire employee who are competent in more than one major field and spare no expense to offer higher salaries to attract them because of their endless potential. Therefore, college graduates with extensive view and knowledge are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries and gain better life than who lack basic science knowledge.

Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher job standard, basic science knowledge gives students more common sense than who lack it. For example, when a eathquake taking place near in your living place, such as Haiti and Wenchuan(China). How to help yourself and families members survive in that catastrophe is more important than anything else. In that case it is obvious to predict that the terrible consequences will be happened on this individual who have not taken any basic science course  before, lack common sense probably lead them fail to safe themselves.

In conclusion,although it will take some extra times within students' campus life. In other words, basic science courses are essential for college students' because its significant effects in their future life.

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Many universities are required(requiring) their students to take basic science classes to gain more opportunities for young students in their future career(so that they can gain more opportunities in their future career). As far as I (am) concerned, wider knowledge means to obtain more choices, higher salaries and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market for youngsters can, whether the basic science courses are part of their  study major or research field.

Obviously, in most cases the traditional higher education system only concerned about the performance of the college students in some specialize field. Which directly results the students have a limited opportunity to obtain a suitable job beyond their profession. On the contrary, applicants with the degree which includes art and basic sciences would not only be qualified for jobs in company or government office, they would also be well prepared for jobs which need some basic science thinking skill as a prerequisite. With a large range of potential jobs to choose from, students with extensively knowledge are more likely to find a job that suit their particular needs and interests.
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Moreover, employers are willing to pay more premium for applicants who study and read extensively, because it will save much money to hire extra specialists for the company. For instance, many companies desire employee who are competent in more than one major field and spare no expense to offer higher salaries to attract them because of their endless potential. Therefore, college graduates with extensive view and knowledge are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries and gain better life than who lack basic science knowledge.& Y8 S- C% P/ z# e( d3 ^  ^
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Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher job standard, basic science knowledge gives students more common sense than who lack it（理解了 表达的有点奇怪）. For example, when an eaerthquake taking place near in your living place, such as Haiti and Wenchuan(China). How to help yourself and families members survive in that catastrophe is more important than anything else. In that case it is obviously to predict that the terrible consequences will be happened on this individual who have not taken any basic science course  before, lack common sense probably lead them fail to safe themselves. (这一段很好  例子比前两段有力多了)

In conclusion,although it will take some extra times within students' campus life. In other words, basic science courses are essential for college students' because its significant effects in their future life.

感觉论证的方式和句式好熟啊。。。原来写的。。。感觉你现在比原来好多了

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4.2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to truly understand world events, reading newspaper is better than watching TV.


It is undoubtable that continuously developing high-technology products have brought tremendous benefit for us, especially in our daily life. Take television and the Internet as examples, which offers incredible numbers of information in a most conveniently way. However, there has been an ongoing debate on whether understand world events better through reading the newspaper or watching television in recent years. As far as I am concerned, individuals who understand world's current events from watching TV sets much better than reading newspaper.

Due to the vivid imagines and dynamic videos within the TV sets, which can retain information more efficiently in viewers' brain than the original one, reading ordinary newspaper. Living in this rapidly developing "Multimedia era", it is important to know the most efficient means of retaining and absorbing the latest current events. Science research has shown us that television plays a significant role in retention and unable individuals understand news material in a efficient media way, which much better than reading newspaper in today's intensive society.

Moreover, in order to truly understand world events, watching television are better than reading newspaper because television's timely feature. As we all know, most daily newspaper has been compiled and printed by editors in the last day or hours ago, which could not guarantee its timeliness. For instance, most United States citizens were notified by the television media rather than newspapers due to its hysteresis when the "9/11" suicide attacks suddenly happened at the Twin Towers, New York City. The hysteresis characteristic was the main reason for printed materials which impacts people's expectation to understand the real world events better for a long time.
In addition, many printed newspaper has limitations. Because television journalism has evolved much more than newspaper journalism could ever hope to. For example, thanks for the amazing development of television industry, television newscasts are now available on most local TV station, allowing the viewers freely to watch the news or programmes they may have missed and they what they favorite through digital TV sets. This makes television news even more prevalent and, on the contrary, most of printed newspapers just a little bit deficiency in these areas. This also influence individuals' perspective toward the world profoundly.

While newspaper and television journalism are both have certain advantages or disadvantages. In today's rapid shifting world, television news is crushing newspaper in terms of the timeliness of the story run. Newspapers simply can not effectively compete with the television news because it limitations. Therefore, that the reason why individuals who watching television are more capable of understanding the current world than the printed one.

（今天写得很痛苦，观点没定位好，把理由越写越窄了，看来这种题目还是写中立好）