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题目：The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.


提纲：

1)machines的确在人类的发展过程中起到了重要作用，为人类提供了更多的convenience，例如在生活中，vehicle使transportation变得更快捷;在工作中，machines给  workers减轻了负担，computer提高了efficience。

2)machines是由人类发明和创造的，给人类带来了一定的作用，甚至有些方面是优于人类的，但它只是人类的工具，其操作还是由人类来支配。例如电脑。


3)但机器和人类还是有区别的，人类会思考，有感情善恶之分，而机器不会。机器只是单纯的执行命令，但不顾及执行命令后的结果。例如computer virus.

正文：(写完后自己给自己进行了一些修改，红色部分是修改过的。)

The speaker states that the human mind will be better than machines all the time--whether in the past or in the future since machines are considered as tools of human minds. From my point of view, I strongly agree with that machines are only the toolsàproducts and tools of human minds, but for the issues that the human mind will always be better than machines for machines are the tools of human minds , I do not agree with that entirely.

First of all, machines indeed play an increasingly important and even indispensibleàirreplaceable role during the periodàin the process of human beings’ development. The appearing of machines, from the sticks used to hunt or fish in the ancient time to the steam engines widely used in the factories in the industrial revolution and to the computers in the modern time ,pushes the society to advance and meanwhile brings human beings all aspects of convenience. For example, at the living level, the inventions of vehicles such as automobiles, train and airplane meets people’s need of travelling and greatly saves the time-consuming in journey; in the industry level, huge machines accomplish the task of carrying ponderous goods which should be done by human beings, thereby reducing the burdens of people; and in medical level, micro-machines can go inside the human body, as a result, identifying the healthy problems and performing delicate surgery, which could not be done early in the micro-machines. Hence, machines, as a production of the technology, generate postive effects to human beings.

On the contrary, although machines are invented by human beings and they, as tools of human beings, do help people achieve many achievements and even in some aspects they are over the human, they are still in control of human beings. The invention of the computer is the case in point. Experts, particularly the electric, mathematic experts and otherwise engineers invented it, which is widely used in all aspects today, including everyday life, economic field, academic field and so forth. And the ability of running quite complicate calculation in a very short time, one of the greatest advantages of computer, is what human being can not do ,thus helping people, to some extent, save much time and improve the work efficiency. However, this is a
fact which can not disputed that only operated by people can they finish tasks because the computer can only executive commands.

In addition, machines are different from human beings: people have the capacity for independence thought, for making judgments based on normative considerations, or for developing emotional responses to intellectual problems, but which is what the computer does have. In turn, what the computer can do is to conformityàobey the order, not considering the result after executiving the order which may be beneficial, or perhaps harmful and even dreadful. Take the computer virus as an example. In order to get others’ prosperity or stealàfilching important information from a nation or something, people madeàcreated virus, having special function, to transmit among computers and plant in them, thus leading to the loss of people’s enormous prosperity. If the computer can think independently, if the computer can tell whether it is good or bad and if the computer can figure out the result of the behavior, many things is avoidable. But the fact is opposite. So although machines are in control of human being, the result is out of control of the people’s hands.

In sum, I concede that machines are only tools of human beings, helping people finish numerous tasks, changing people’s life style, instructing people into a new world and in the end promoting the development of society. However, it can never be superior to human minds even if it is better than human beings in certain aspects because of inability of thinking independently, judging subjectively and responding emotionally.

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The speaker states that thehuman mind will be better than machines all the time--whether in thepast or in the future since machines are considered as tools of human minds. From my point of view, I strongly agree with that machines are only the toolsàproducts and toolsof human minds, but for the issues that the human mind will always bebetter than machines for machines are the tools of human minds , I donot agree with that entirely.

First of all, machines indeed play an increasingly important and even indispensibleàirreplaceable role during the periodàin the processof human beings’ development. The appearing of machines, from thesticks used to hunt or fish in the ancient time to the steam engineswidely used in the factories in the industrial revolution and to thecomputers in the modern time ,pushes the society to advance andmeanwhile bringshuman beings all aspects of convenience. For example, at the livinglevel, the inventions of vehicles such as automobiles, train andairplane meets people’s need of travelling and greatly saves the time-consuming in journey; in the industry level, huge machines accomplish the task of carrying ponderous goods which should bedone by human beings, thereby reducing the burdens of people; and inmedical level, micro-machines can go inside the human body, as aresult, identifying the healthy problems and performing delicatesurgery, which could not be done early in the micro-machines. Hence,machines, as a production of the technology, generate postive effectsto human beings.(不太明白你放这段在这里和你的文章有什么关系？你是赞同机器是人的工具 反对人脑会超过他，但是为什么要加一段机器给人来带来的好处呢？这段是为了说明机器是人的工具么？还是为了说明什么？感觉是一段硬套别人的提纲啊，完全多余的一段。其实可以拓宽思路 把第二段写长点，把这一段归想办法并到第二段里面，同时介绍这些机器任然是被人控制的。没有必要非要写三段的，如果说理得好，两段也够。个人意见，呵呵）

On the contrary
, althoughmachines are invented by human beings and they, as tools of humanbeings, do help people achieve many achievements and even in some aspects they are over the human,they are still in control of human beings. The invention of thecomputer is the case in point. Experts, particularly the electric,mathematic experts and otherwise engineers invented it, which is widelyused in all aspects today, including everyday life, economic field,academic field and so forth. And the ability of running quitecomplicate calculation in a very short time, one of the greatestadvantages of computer, is what human being can not do ,thus helpingpeople, to some extent, save much time and improve the work efficiency.However, this is afact which can not disputed that only operated by people can they finish tasks because the computer can only executive commands.（有点头重脚清了，写了这么多机器的好，最后到关键是被人控制的时候就一句话，可以拓宽点的。）

In addition, machines aredifferent from human beings: people have the capacity for independencethought, for making judgments based on normative considerations, or fordeveloping emotional responses to intellectual problems, but which iswhat the computer does have（but 和which去掉一个）. In turn, what the computer can do is to conformityàobey theorder, not considering the result after executiving the order which maybe beneficial, or perhaps harmful and even dreadful. Take the computervirus as an example. In order to get others’ prosperity or stealàfilching important information from a nation or something, people madeàcreatedvirus, having special function, to transmit among computers and plantin them, thus leading to the loss of people’s enormous prosperity. Ifthe computer can think independently, if the computer can tell whetherit is good or bad and if the computer can figure out the result of thebehavior, many things is avoidable. But the fact is opposite. Soalthough machines are in control of human being, the result is out ofcontrol of the people’s hands. （例子觉得有点生搬硬套还是，其实可以举更好的例子，不要老是局限在电脑我觉得会更有说服力，呵呵，而且你这段说的是机器和人类的不同，但是没有证明人类比机器高级啊？不同就是说明高级了？那我可以说不会随机应变才是高级，会计算大量的数学才是高级，为什么就说有感情就高级呢？可以展开来论述下。）

In sum, I concede thatmachines are only tools of human beings, helping people finish numeroustasks, changing people’s life style, instructing people into a newworld and in the end promoting the development of society. However, itcan never be superior to human minds even if it is better than humanbeings in certain aspects because of inability of thinkingindependently, judging subjectively and responding emotionally.

总的来说，语言基本比较通顺，可是中文式比较严重啊，得好好改改了。逻辑方面，也要好好想想结构，自己思考出自己的段落发展，千篇一律的提纲比较雷同的几率会比较大啊，楼主加油啊　下面是我的文章，有时间也拍下吧！越狠越好！
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