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发表于 2010-4-17 18:19:14 |显示全部楼层
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to watch movies designed for you to think than to watch movies designed to amuse and entertain.



As been invented since more than one hundred years ago, movie has played a very important role of our daily lives even in the modern society. However, as the development of the modern films, there are two types of movies occupy our sights. The serious ones, which designed for us to think, and the other, the one designed to just for entertainment. Compare to the amused one, I prefer to a movie which can bring me something others besides the movie itself.

For the first place, the serious movies usually can tell us many other things such as the recognition of our lives, the value of the comunity, which is more significant than the movies themselves. Most important of all, just as a teacher, movies teach us the theories about the society. There is an oldaying goes like that: movies shape ones characterstic subconsciously. Secondly, movies, as a indispensable medium of the modern society, can aso show us some useful skills. For example, some movies of the bus usually tell people how to avoid the accidents around you. I think that is very useful for us.

For another, our society also need more serious movies to help to guide its members to make a wise route of themselves. It is an undeniable fact that many elements of culture have been added to the modern films, which can finaly form a guidence for the civilization of a society.
Just for the example of
"AVATAR", it expresses the theme of love obversely, however, is also stands for the a more meaningful topic that all the relationship of all the spieces.


Finally, coexisted with the serious movies, the amused ones' importance can also never been ignored because they also make a positive impact
of our society. Almost everyone
will turn some amused videos for fun when after the busy work. That is the charm of the movies of entertainment, relaxing us. So, when talk about how to release your press of the daily work, may be the amused videos are the best choice.

In the final analysis, in comparing with the serious movies, the serious ones contribute to us more directly, but it is not to say that we can keep away from the movies for entertainment. May be we can think more deeply after we see a serious and use the entertainment vedioes just for leisure.

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发表于 2010-4-18 23:31:14 |显示全部楼层
As been invented since more than one hundred years ago, movie has played a very important role of our daily lives even in the modern society. However, as the development of the modern films, there are two types of movies occupy our sights. The serious ones, which designed for us to think, and the other, the one(s) designed to just for entertainment. Compare(d) to the amused one, I prefer to a movie which can bring me something others besides the movie itself.(好喜这个开头啊,通俗简洁)

For the first place, the serious movies usually can tell us many other things(可以细化,other是和有比较的才说,这里第一次提到就不要用others了啊) such as the recognition of our lives, the value of the comunity, which is more significant than the movies themselves. Most important of all, just as a teacher, movies teach us the theories about the society. There is an oldaying goes like that: movies shape ones characterstic subconsciously. Secondly, movies, as a indispensable medium of the modern society, can aso show us some useful skills. For example, some movies of the bus usually tell people how to avoid the accidents around you. I think that is very useful for us.(这句好多余)For another, our society also need more serious(可以不要老说一个形容词,换词) movies to help to guide its members to make a wise route of themselves. It is an undeniable fact that many elements of culture have been added to the modern films, which can finaly form a guidence for the civilization of a society.(以上成述好多,举个例子吧,比较清楚一点)


AVATAR", it expresses the theme of love obversely, however, is also stands for the a more meaningful topic that all the relationship of all the spieces.
Finally, coexisted with the serious movies, the amused ones' importance can also never(太绝对) been ignored because they also make a positive impact
of our society. Almost everyone will turn some amused videos for fun when after the busy work. That is the charm of the movies of entertainment, relaxing us.(这句的句式好奇怪) So, when talk(ing) about how to release your press of the daily work, may be the amused videos are the best choice.

In the final analysis, in comparing with the serious(amusing吧) movies, the serious ones contribute to us more directly, but it is not to say that we can keep away from the movies for entertainment. May be we can think more deeply after we see a serious and use the entertainment vedioes just for leisure.

我是5月16了。。。口语吗?我也很纠结,目前只联系了1,2题,,,因为我听力都很纠结,后面的更纠结。。。。快疯了。。。
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发表于 2010-4-18 23:49:04 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to watch movies designed for you to think than to watch movies designed to amuse and entertain

As been invented since more than one hundred years ago, movie has played a very important role of our daily lives even in the modern society. However, as the development of the modern films(这里是不是缺一个动词呀?as the xxx goes/evolves...well,可以改成as modern films evolve), there are two types of movies occupy our sights(恩,改成occupying分词的话更能体现出一种渐变,适当还可以用more frequently等等副词渲染渲染^^). The serious ones, which designed for us to think, and the other, the one(ones吧?) designed to just for entertainment. Compare to the amused one(我觉得这里用one和ones都可以,但选择了一个之后最好前后一致呢~), I prefer to(prefer sth哦!) a movie which can bring me something others besides the movie itself.


For the first place, the serious movies usually can tell us many other things such as the recognition of our lives, the value of the comunity(拼写错误,呵呵,community), which is more significant than the movies themselves. Most important of all, just as(like比较好) a teacher, movies teach us the theories about the society. There is an oldaying goes like that: movies shape ones characterstic subconsciously. Secondly, movies, as a indispensable medium of the modern society, can aso show us some useful skills. For example, some movies of the bus usually tell people how to avoid the accidents around you. I think that is very useful for us.

For another, our society also need more serious movies to help to guide its members to make a wise route of themselves. It is an undeniable fact that many elements of culture have been added to the modern films, which can finaly form a guidence for the civilization of a society.
Just for the example of "AVATAR", it expresses the theme of love obversely, (句号)however, is(it) also stands for the a more meaningful topic that all the relationship of all the spieces.(额……句子好像有点不通诶,是不是没写完呀?想表达the relationship of all species should be harmonious之类的观点?)

Finally, coexisted with the serious movies, the amused ones' importance can also never been ignored because they also make a positive impact
of our society. Almost everyone will turn some amused videos for fun when after the busy work. That is the charm of the movies of entertainment, relaxing us. So, when talk about how to release your press of the daily work, may be the amused videos are the best choice.

In the final analysis, in comparing with the serious movies, the serious ones contribute to us more directly, but it is not to say that we can keep away from the movies for entertainment. May be we can think more deeply after we see a serious and use the entertainment vedioes just for leisure.

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