最新雅思写作有奖活动

山大电工UID：2627777

为提高烤鸭们的写作水平，分析和纠正烤鸭们复习过程中的常见的困惑和误区，举办此项雅思写作有奖活动。（其实雅思或者托福重要性不言而喻，可以说是出国人生规划第一步吧？）

     此项活动是分周期进行的，我的想法是，每次的雅思考试后（频率高的一个星期一次），我搜集相关的考试信息（指写作），然后贴到本贴中，提供雅思真题给大家实战模拟。

     写作的过程是一个提高自己并展现自己的过程。其他网友也可以针对你的写作帮忙修改和提出建议，共同进步。这样更容易发现自己写作过程中的不足，并得到纠正。

     童鞋们可自由讨论，谈写作方法，谈写作体会。目的只有一个，就是共同进步。（‘自助者，天助也；助人者，天人必共助之！’）。一般一个活动周期为1个星期或者2个星期，还视网友参加活动的热情而定。

     为激发大家的写作热情，会设置相关奖励。但奖项设置，貌似只有虚拟货币和加分奖励，有足够的寄托币可以下载很多资料，呵呵。老版主bqiana说了，对积极参加写作活动的童鞋，他可以帮助点评作文。（bqiana很牛的，资深人士）。

     第一次搞活动难免有所疏漏，如有任何建议和意见，望网友们指正，谢谢。雅思版各位版主会热心帮助各位提高大家的成绩的。希望大家都有热情参与进来，提升自己，帮助他人。

祝好

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以下是2010年的大作文回忆【又称：机经】，不断更新中。。。

可自选题目写，然后贴在后面，帮你点评下哈。

2010年1月9日

Task2大作文：
Some people believe that charity organisations should give the aid to those in great needs
wherever they lives, while others think that charity organisations should concentrate on
helping people who lives in own country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that the technology such as mobile phone (cell phone) destroys social
interaction. Do you agree or disagree?


2010年1月14日

Task 2:
V1. Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by
the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this opinion?
V2. In today’s society, it is private companies rather than government who pay more for
and carry out the scientific research. Does the advantage of this situation outweigh the
disadvantage?


2010年1月23日

Task 2：
The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider. The rich is growing richer and the
poor is growing poorer. What problems would the situation cause and then give the
solutions.

大作文
Many people are moving to big cities. Why is that? Do you think it is a good trend?

大作文(美国版)
Some people believe that teenagers should spend their free time helping the local community
without payment. Do you agree or disagree?


2010年1月30日

Task2:
Many people believe the general increase in anti-social behaviour and a lack of respect for
other. Discuss the causes and suggest any solutions.


2010年2月6日

Task2:   
Air travel only benefits the rich people while the majority of people take no advantage
from development of airplane. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2010年2月11日

Writing Task 2 (an essay)
Some people think that politicians and scientists have the greatest influence on the world,
others disagree. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

G类大作文：
There is bigger generation gap between old and young, who have different attitudes and
ideas, what are the reasons and what problems may be produced?


2010年2月20日

Task2：
Many countries aim to improve living standard by economic development, but some important
social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development
outweigh the disadvantages?
   
议论文(社会类)
Some people argue that the purpose of zoos is only to entertain people. What do you think？
What other purposes of zoos?


2010年2月27日

Task2：
Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable
contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


2010年3月6日

Task2：
The survey shows that in many countries, the people are living longer but increased life
expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole. What
are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?


2010年3月20日

大作文：
More and more people use machines. Do you think positive impact of the development
outweighs negative one on individuals or society?

Task 2 some people get highly successful ever though they fail at school. Why? Discuss
factors for getting successful.

2010年3月27日

Task 2 教育类
最近孩子们花费较多的时间在电视上,而花费很少的时间做active和creative 的事情。Why do you
think this is a case? What measures will be helpful to change this problem?


2010年4月10日

Task 2
Some people think that the increase of cheap air travel has brought about many benefits
while others argue that this development has its drawbacks to the world’s environment and
resources. Discuss these two points of view. What’s your opinion?

大作文：
In some societies, more and more people choose to live on their own, what reason for this,
and is it a positive or negative trend?

2010年4月17日

Task 2
V1. Some people think governments should act to decide how people live in order to make a
healthier life. Others think individual should decide their own lifestyle. Discuss these
two points of view. What’s your opinion?

V2. Some people think governments should change the way individuals live, while others
believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give
your opinion.

2010年4月24日

Task 2
It has been suggested that everyone in the world should have their own car, TV and fridge.
Do you think disadvantages of such development of society outweigh the advantages?

山大电工UID：2627777

准备考试的童鞋起码一个星期得写上3篇左右的作文练习吧？
大家多参与哈
贴来，我们就给评，但是光靠我们几个斑竹{如果很多人都来贴作文（可能有点yy）}
会有点力不从心，所以我们号召大家互评。
总不能索取不奉献吧？
呵呵，互相帮助，总有回报的。
加油

山大电工UID：2627777

再占一楼，如果网友写作文 每一期都贴在此处 是不是不好？
再容我想想怎么编制这个帖子
希望大家给点建议
谢谢

bqianaUID：193168

大力支持，欢迎更多烤鸭参与

angelwypUID：2803734

很好的》》》可以说的详细些么 4# bqiana

bqianaUID：193168

很好的》》》可以说的详细些么 4# bqiana
angelwyp 发表于 2010-5-7 13:57

我会把今年的大作文机经贴出来，你们可以选题目写，然后给诸位一些反馈和建议。

爱玩才会赢UID：2765848

这么好的帖子，没人跟？
那我做第一个
这是我今天写的一篇文章，望多多指教
Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the proliferation of computers and Internet technology, people never have to go to museums or art galleries to appreciate those masterpieces. Rather, they do so only through clicking mouse in front of the computers. In this sense, many people even claim that museums and galleries should really be the thing of past. However, on my own perspective, it is too early to say so.

Obviously, those public museums and art galleries possess some indispensable functions which computers can not supply. Firstly, only those realistic places can provide people with the opportunity to experience those fantastic masterpieces firsthand. By contrast, those predigested or even unclear pictures via the internet can by no means demonstrate the superior craftsmanship in them vividly. In addition, public museums and art galleries’ functionality are not only restricted to demonstrating those world renowned paintings and handcrafts, but also serving as a platform where art lovers gather together to exchange their understanding towards a certain paintings, share their experience and knowledge related to arts, or even develop a life-long friendship. It would be hard-pressed to image without museums and art galleries, computers can perform equally well.

There is no denying that due to computer’s continence, easy-accessibility and high efficiency, increasingly numbers of people, notably for ordinary people, are blessed with golden opportunity to enjoy the glamour of those superior works of art. However, to those fascinate art lovers or relevant professionals, only museums and art gallery can measure up to their expectation and demanding requirements.

bqianaUID：193168

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爱玩才会赢UID：2765848

8# bqiana
谢谢，版主评分~~~
这是不是说明我的作文存在太多问题，~哎，作文一直是我的弱项，总是写不好。。。但又不知道为什么
请问我的主要问题在哪？是因为论证不够充分？还是语法问题？或是结构上的不足？
版主可以大概说下么~

山大电工UID：2627777

我觉得写得很不错，比我雅思考试时写的有内容
我雅思作文也是6分。
字数勉强够，不过词汇真的挺丰富的
（我是挑毛病的呵呵，勉强挑）
1论据不是很充分（只有实物才能直接让游客感受到他的魅力？这个真不见得。By contrast你后面说的有道理。）（艺术品的作用——作为平台，这个论据不错）可能还是论据不充分吧？
我觉得还不错，如果坚持练习下去，肯定有进步。

等bqiana(逍遥闲人)详细为你解答哈

祝好

bqianaUID：193168

8# bqiana
谢谢，版主评分~~~
这是不是说明我的作文存在太多问题，~哎，作文一直是我的弱项，总是写不好。。。但又不知道为什么
请问我的主要问题在哪？是因为论证不够充分？还是语法问题？或是结构上的不足？
...
爱玩才会赢 发表于 2010-5-9 18:47

结构上：要分4段写；中心句不够突出
词句上：要简明扼要，不用刻意用所谓的高级词汇和句型

继续努力哈