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发表于 2010-8-17 15:57:57 |只看该作者
交作业啦~第一次交,请多指教!https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1140575&extra=

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本帖最后由 萌仔 于 2010-8-18 11:06 编辑

啦啦啦~
交作业&&7楼~
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发表于 2010-8-17 16:14:19 |只看该作者
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第一次参加~也是第一次写托福作文~~多多指教哦~~也多多感谢^^

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发表于 2010-8-17 16:53:11 |只看该作者
第一次发帖,请多多指教 ^_^ ~

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发表于 2010-8-17 17:05:44 |只看该作者
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第10楼
8月17日,
tv还是Telephone
写完后,觉得有点跑题。。。

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发表于 2010-8-17 17:06:11 |只看该作者
幸福就在身边,一点一滴。

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发表于 2010-8-17 18:08:47 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 missmumuxi 于 2010-8-17 18:12 编辑

8.17作业by missmumuxi
The impact of both telephone and TV have had on human daily life are obvious, and they indispensably act on diverse aspects, specifically, TV has became the most powerful mean of getting entertainment, news and communication, whose affect is skyrocketing; For telephone, it enhance the efficiency of people’s conversation, either it speed it up. As my statement above, the contribution of both are significant, I can’t decide which is better rashly.
Television, invented in last century, with its wide availability, becomes a necessity of human ever since. First, TV has magic power to make people immerse themselves in amusement. Combined with acoustic and visual effect, TV is more acceptable to audience who has exhausted themselves in working than books, which consume vim to get through. What’s more, with the help of TV, we get update news of earth. Everyday morning, we efficiently avoid traffic jam by check the road condition on Morning News. We put on the appropriate clothes to keep off flu by the great help of weather man. We no longer have to sail like Columbus, because pictures of over globe are shown on TV. Finally, TV shapes our spirits. Such as public-interest ad, it teaches us what is good and evil, what is legal and illegal.
For telephone, it extremely makes communication convenient and efficiency. In the ancient time, we tall by means of mails, which are send by dove and take a endless period. If one of the corresponder does not express clearly or one can’t understand intensively, then much time has to be consumed up. Misunderstandings are easily handled because of the immediate and interactive nature of people to people conversation. Moreover, We have to admit that face-to-face interact is the ultimate form of communication, however, the efficiency of it suspend. With the birth of telephone, we will set up a meeting time and topic, which actually enhance the ability to communicate effectively.
In brief, TV and telephone have been performing nicely in their own field ever since their advent, and both of them can’t instead of each other, so, the contribution of both are equal.

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请问大家的作文是写在哪儿的?我不会就在空间发的日志 貌似不对吧 还有怎么上传Word文档 第一次弄 不会吖

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发表于 2010-8-17 18:11:27 |只看该作者
第一次交作业 请多指教 :loveliness:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1140668&extra=

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发表于 2010-8-17 19:32:00 |只看该作者
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1774282423  写的想死啊, 肯吧的总算弄完了。希望指教。

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本帖最后由 niunian 于 2010-8-17 22:44 编辑

8.17  37楼~~~


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