issue 第一次写，希望大家拍砖

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第一次真刀真枪的写issue,感觉没有时间停笔，一直在敲键盘，可是4分钟左右，才写了300左右，而且感觉米有很鲜明的例子，感到有些悲哀啊！


发上来，权当是纪念吧，希望大家多多拍砖，谢谢。


题目：


All students should be required to take courses in the sciences,even if they have no interest in science.




自己的初稿：




The speaker claims that all students should be required to take courses in the science.even if some of them dislike that. In my opinon(opinion), the courses about science are fundmentally (fundamentlly)necessary to students. And taking courses in the sciences will be beneficial to them. While, i am afriade(afraide) to say that would be not appropriated to require all students,especially those have no interest in science,to take scientific courses.

The science is our best tool to know the world. Without the science and its means to study the world all around us, we human being would not make progress. The scientific revelutions(revolution) in the history stimulated the human to go forward more quickly and smoothly. The science, which help people to get free from over-bearden(burden) works, to amuse people with high tech products as well as make people live in a more comfortable world.

Most important is that the spiritual(sprit) of science, mainly is the courage to explore the unknown world ,is very necessary for students to learn,to take. Only With that kind of characteristic, could students learn how to chanllege(challenge) themselves in the future.

While,if some students don't have interest in science,taking courses about science wiil become a great burden. That also obey the natural law of learning. As most people know, that learning in happy mood is the best way to get knowledge. Otherwise, if student have little interest in science, taking courses in science by force will become very awful.
Some great artists, are the good examples for that. So i disagree what the speaker's later half claims.





写初稿前8分列烈的提纲Tips :



1,it's necessary to learn sciences, basic knowledge of sciences will be beneficial to our study to other courses.  

2\almost every field is connected with others by various ways, that's to say,the fields of different subjects are naturally relatively.

3,science,while,it's more like spiritual,to learn how to operate a study. A valuable  study to other subject.

While, if all students,especially who have no interest in science are required to take courses of science ,that would be unappropriated.
Students has the rights to select what they like most to study

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更可悲的是，很多非常熟悉的单词，竟然拼错了！
想到考试的时候，根本没有电脑自动提示功能，真的很郁闷！

yogurt4UID: 198389

写习惯就好了  你自己纠正过来的错误 直接把正确的打上来 不用放在括号里 影响阅读。
写的不是很好，当处女作纪念吧。还有不要用缩写don't要写成do not

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