【Flyer杀G】小组-6.30作业issue153

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With a more and more diversified society, which brought a variety of careers, people, are more willing to believe learning and thinking may not be so important as it seems, because numerous works, nowadays, as they looks like, can be easily well suited without plenty of knowledge, excellent brain, eloquent speaking. Moreover, even the intellectuals have no reason to deny only rare people, who want to become scholars and scholars themselves, should obtain the virtue of critical thinking and learn the knowledge with great seriousness. But, actually, in my opinion, skepticism is of tremendous importance for the majority, besides the intellectuals. Therefore, cultivating and encouraging the teenagers’ skepticism during the processing of education is really necessary.
Admittedly, only few careers, as the all kinds of works in academia, need a more profound thinking. Without a well trained reading skill and being ignorant of mathematics, a high school graduator can earn millions of dollars just because he has a 7 feet height and powerful muscle, which are many sport superstars actually do. And the positions in the government or company, which used be regarded as literature demanding, are not highlighting the college diploma. The background of the former prime minister of United Kingdom have proven that point. However, does it mean the majority have no importance to ponder and quest more carefully and precisely during their life? Absolutely no. With a more developed society, people have to face more complex information ,news and the concept, which they have never heard of. Even though the puzzles always coupled with its explanations and advice given by specialists, but to some extent,
it is clarification itself has brought us more confusion. In absent of careful attention and well thought, or in the shortage of critical ideas, how could people distinguish and do not be misled by the variety of pharmaceutical advertisements and advises about our health in the television? How do people adjust their life styles in order to protect our earth? Or even the basic problem, which is discussed in this 　title and article, ”how to educate and lead our children and student” have arouse us to spend more consideration. Whatsoever, living in the more complicated world demands more brainwork, which should be trained in school.
Even for students, learning how to understand, suspect and criticize is not worthless. One of ways of better understanding the knowledge in classroom is to question more and do not simply accept the opinion, which will help them know more. Being used to suspecting and enquiring those well believed principles would really benefit them ever, as Balzac said(my paraphrase), the one who know how to think has the boundless power.
To the development of our society, if more youth inclined to be skeptical of the existed principles from every fields, more creativeness will be poured into the nation and flowed in a positive way. At a glance of history, milestone in science and philosophy always be established by the young boys, who dare to suspect, demolish or rebuild the classic theorem in the textbooks, say, Poincare, Abel, Ramsey or even Wittgenstein, besides the glorious Newton and Einstein. With the non-stop innovation, could a society has a permanent energy to reach a brighter future. Skepticism brings creative, so the innovation comes.
In sum, skepticism may be somewhat similar with the Cynicism, superficially, but it do constitutes our the elements of modern society, Democracy and Science. Without the suspicion towards all the incredibility and consistency of questioning everything unclear, every individual cannot survive in such a sophisticated society and our human have to still be driven by the force of the nature and the evil of ourselves.

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153. "Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively." 2# yogurt4

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1# wagner1985

With a more and more diversified society, which brought a variety of careers, people, are more willing to believe learning and thinking may not be so important as it seems, because numerous works, nowadays, as they looks like, can be easily well suited without plenty of knowledge, excellent brain, eloquent speaking. Moreover, even the intellectuals have no reason to deny only rare people, who want to become scholars and scholars themselves, should obtain the virtue of critical thinking and learn the knowledge with great seriousness. But, actually, in my opinion, skepticism is of tremendous importance for the majority, besides the intellectuals. Therefore, cultivating and encouraging the teenagers’ skepticism during the processing of education is really necessary.
前半段论述与本文主题有些脱节。
Admittedly, only few careers, as the all kinds of works in academia, need a more profound thinking. Without a well trained reading skill and being ignorant of mathematics, a high school graduator can earn millions of dollars just because he has a 7 feet height and powerful muscle, which are many sport superstars actually do. And the positions in the government or company, which used be regarded as literature demanding(?), are not highlighting the college diploma. （And working in the positions of government or company...）The background of the former prime minister of United Kingdom have proven that point. However, does it mean the majority have no importance to ponder and quest more carefully and precisely during their life? Absolutely no. With a more developed society, people have to face more complex information ,news and the concept, which they have never heard of. Even though the puzzles always coupled with its explanations and advice given by specialists, but to some extent, it is clarification itself has brought us more confusion. In absent of careful attention and well thought, or in the shortage of critical ideas(with absence of careful attention and well thought, or with the shortage of critical ideas), how could people distinguish and do not be misled by the variety of pharmaceutical advertisements and advises about our health in the television? How do people adjust their life styles in order to protect our earth? Or even the basic problem, which is discussed in this 　title and article, ”how to educate and lead our children and student” has aroused us to spend more consideration(on it). Whatsoever, living in the more complicated world demands more brainwork, which should be trained in school.

Even for students, learning how to understand, suspect and criticize is not worthless. One of ways of better understanding the knowledge in classroom is to question more and do not simply accept the opinion, which will help them know more. Being used to suspecting and enquiring those well believed principles would really benefit them ever, as Balzac said(my paraphrase), the one who knows how to think has the boundless power.

To the development of our society, if more youth inclined to be skeptical of (for)the existed principles from every fields, more creativeness will be poured into the nation and flowed in a positive way. At a glance of history, milestone in science and philosophy always be established by the young boys, who dare to suspect, demolish or rebuild the classic theorem in the textbooks, say, Poincare, Abel, Ramsey or even Wittgenstein, besides the glorious Newton and Einstein. With the non-stop innovation, could a society has a permanent energy to reach a brighter future(不需要倒装，而且could后用原形have). Skepticism brings creative（creativity/creativeness）, so the innovation comes.

In sum, skepticism may be somewhat similar with the Cynicism, superficially, but it do constitutes (强调句型，do 后用原型)our the elements of modern society, Democracy and Science. Without the suspicion towards all the incredibility and consistency of questioning everything unclear, every individual cannot survive in such a sophisticated society and our human have to still be driven by the force of the nature and the evil of ourselves（1,our human? 2,still位置,动词前，be动词后 ）.

这篇文章写的也不如前面的几篇噢......论述不是很集中，注意下表达方法